Heystopstaring In reply to DA-Risembool-Rangers [2012-06-12 13:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Heystopstaring In reply to HelloKittyTsi [2012-06-11 16:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Wha...? Kitty?!

Thank you!

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HelloKittyTsi In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-06-11 22:36:40 +0000 UTC]

No prob! I try to make sure to wish my friends on DA happy birthday when I can.

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Heystopstaring In reply to DullMarionette [2012-05-24 14:15:36 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-02-21 16:59:04 +0000 UTC]

No, don't think so. I haven't gotten any new replies (besides this one, duh. XD).

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-02-23 01:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Damn! Then I'll say it here:
No, I wasn't able to go see the new FMA movie. I had to stay after school for tutoring (I was so bummed, though). And, Roy wasn't in it?!?! Why the Hell not? He was that character that had a stick shoved so far up his ass that he's actually LIKEABLE!! And, yes, I am indeed a brony. :3 Twilight Sparkle for the win!! Though I love Pipsqueak...XD "Princess Luna, you're my FAVORITE princess!!"

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-02-23 11:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Twilight is best pony! (But Luna and Big Mac are cute, too.)

Well Roy was actually in it, he just had a small part. You don't even get to see him fight. ):

Otherwise, it was pretty good and a little confusing at some points, but hey, that's FMA. Except for one scene that looks and sounds suspiciously close to rape (it wasn't, but sheesh was it awkward to watch).

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-02-23 14:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...perhaps when it is released to DVD...OH!! Are you gonna see that new Studio Ghibli movie? The Secret World of Arietty? I LOVED the Borrowers when I was little!! The book, anyway...And, I know some people are whining about the ENglish dib for this movie, buuuut...still wanna see it...
Ha, you would have loved the look on my friend Carol's face when she saw Ouran High School Host Club for the first time. She's an FMA fan, so...Tamaki and Haruhi's voices sent her into overdrive. Vick, we love you so...
BROHOOF!!! Yeah, I love the show, but I can only watch it if I'm watching it with my little sister...my parents think it's weird already that I hum the theme song around the house all the time...^///^

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-02-23 21:42:06 +0000 UTC]

I've already seen it! Arriety is officially the best Studio Ghibli heroine ever. (Sorry, San. XD). I liked the dub, I think people are complaining about a couple name changes, but it's nothing major (a character called Sho was changed to Shawn).

"The Ouran High School Host Club welcomes you to a world of...craaap." XD

Meh, my mom was like that too, something like "I don't want you watching little baby shows!". And then she witnessed a 17-year old buying a brushable. Now she's okay with it, but she doesn't get it. Just try to get them to watch an episode. Like "Lesson Zero".

"HAI GUUURLS!"

(Speaking of toys, did you hear? They're releasing a white Celestia toy because the original was pink!)

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-02-28 23:36:30 +0000 UTC]

A...white...Celestia...toy?... FINALLY!!!! It's about time! I don't understand why they're all pink!! It makes no sense!! I'll probably never own a MLP toy, but...I can admire...from afar... Oh, well...

Love Ouran...Maybe it's because of Vic, or maybe it's not. Who knows. One of my favorite animes to watch AMVs for.

Eh-heh-heh. I get to read The Hobbit for school. And annotate it, true, but it's fun. I get to nerd/geek/dork out. I've already geeked all over the floor twice. Are you gonna go see the movie?! I am!!!!

And, and, and, d'you think you're gonna go to ComicCon this summer? I want to, but I want to know others are going...my friend Courtney is...

And, how's Texas? I've never seen it during the day.

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-02-29 22:17:46 +0000 UTC]

I like Ouran because it's one of the funniest things ever, not because of Vic and all the man-service. Same goes to Hetalia.

I tried reading the Hobbit, I really did, but it's way too wordy. It took me half an hour to read five pages. Ugh. XP I don't think I'll see the movie, cause I think it comes out at the same time as the Hunger Games and there is no way my mom will let me watch two movies within the same week.

I'm still kinda deciding. Since I'll be in Texas and all, I'll have to stay with my sister in California. I DO NOT WANT TO STAY WITH MY SISTER.

We had to take a pit stop in Nebraska because my sister got into a car accident (nothing serious) and my mom wanted to fly back to help her out. Lovely, huh?

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-01 14:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Awah. I love the Hobbit. I guess I have a bit more patience with thse sort of books, I guess. Not always, though. Eldest gave me a headache.

Ouran...is amazing. I read the manga, though. Only watched a bit of the anime later and I was like, "Wait, IS THAT ED TALKING IN A POSH VOICE?!" NO WAI!!!

And...The Hunger Games...bleh. Never liked the books. Please don't go down my throat about it, though. Everyone else did. They just didn't appeal to me. Didn't care for Katniss. Now, if they were called The Thirsty Contest...XD


Oh...sisters...joy. Well, Courtney and I are gonna pitch in for a hotel (we're gonna try, anyway...:3) and you're probably welcome to stay.

By the way...outta curiosity...d'you have a Facebook?

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-03 18:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I have a Facebook (that I rarely use). Mitzi Momiji. My profile pic is Yellow from Pokemon Special. Ya can't miss it.

The Thristy Contest. 24 go in. One comes out dehydrated as holy heck. XD

If I do go to Comic-Con, I already know what my costume's gonna be. Humanized Twilight Sparkle! Whatcha think?

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-04 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]

*Gigglesnort* Y’know, I really did want the second Hunger Games book to be called The Thirsty Contest…

Humanized Twilight Sparkle? Love it. We just need a Spike and we’re all good. You can pull it off, I’m sure of it. XD

Okay, do you remember that Kingdom Hearts fanfic I was writing? If not, too bad, cuz you’re in it anyway. I need some info on your character before I can go deeper into the dark depths of fanfic writing, so I’m gonna force, sorry, have you fill this profile out. Mmkay?
Here it goes…

Name:

Age:

Default Keyblade (Name and Description):

Height:

Hair:

Eyes:

Voice:

Walking Style:

Mannerisms:

Attitude:

Clothing:

Eating Habits:

Optimistic or Pessimistic? Explain. :

Introvert or Extrovert? Explain. :

Confident or Self-conscious? Explain. :

Feelings about appearance:

Most important possession:

Hobbies:

Talents:

What is a normal day like? Be as detailed as you want!!

Greatest fear:

Closest friend(s):

Relationship with other students (be specific!!) :

Relationship with the teacher:

Not get along with anyone in particular? (can be from game or Original Character):

Particular goals:

Comments/Anything else you'd like to add:

Now, I know you’re probably confuse about the “teacher relationship” thing, so I’ll be brief. You and I are two of eight keyblade trainees (think Birth by Sleep). Our teacher is Master Archard. He is pretty young, only about thirty years old (and, according to my friend Nichole, he is going to look like Flynn Ryder from Tangled XD). He started training us (a bunch of seven and eight year olds at the time) six months after he himself graduated (so about twenty) so we were his graduation present, in a way. He kinda has a lazy attitude, even though he is quite talented. As in, even though class starts at 6:00, he arrives at 7:30. That sort of thing. He didn’t even read our paperwork. So like after three years he found out that one of his students was Mormon and THAT’S why she can’t drink soda. Oh, yes, and he has a bit of a crush on a fellow female Keyblade master with whom he just can’t get a date with (she’s not important to the story but it’s a fun fact all the same). But despite all of this he really is talented and powerful. So, there’s our teacher bio.

Need the actual story? Here goes. You, me, Kellie, Elizabeth, Ashley, Stephan, Lissa, and Michelle (all friends of mine, by the way) are keyblade trainees (although you, me, Elizabeth and Kellie have all completed the Mark of Mastery already). This takes place during Birth By Sleep. We find out about Xehanort and resolve to stop him (basically we find out worlds are disappearing, You, me, Elizabeth, and Kellie sneak out to help, the rest are sent after us by Master Archard). Xehanort wants to destroy all current keyblade wielders (including us) so Master Archard puts us to sleep for ten years (don’t worry, we don’t age. We’re not Link.) When we wake up, it’s about the time of KH1. We help out, and get involved with the storyline, but not to enormous extents. We have our own agendas, although we end up being involved in the final keyblade wars (aka Kingdom Hearts 3…but we’ll worry about that when we get there, hm?). So that’s the story. Any questions, just ask, mmkay? Now, go on! Fill out the profile! You can give yourself a different name, by the way. Everyone else is.

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-04 19:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I should buy one of those creepy baby spike toys...nah. >

'Kay. Here we go! *cracks knuckles*

Name: Momiji

Age: 17

Default Keyblade (Name and Description): The Three Spirits Keyblade (idk if that's already a Keyblade). Has three prongs, three chains and three gems (red blue and green) embedded in it. Red= Attack Blue=Magic Greenefense. When she uses the Keyblade, the respective gem glows with her attacks.

Height: 5'0" (Sensitive about her height, but not in an Ed Elric way. More like a "retreat to the nearest corner" way)

Hair: So dark blue it's almost black. Tied in a braid most of the time. Goes down to elbows (when let down) and to her shoulders (when braided).

Eyes: Grey

Voice: Mute, unless being possessed by one of the spirits. Red: Speaks in a southern accent (and is a jerk) Blue: Becomes British (and a total smartass)Green: Is the quietest of the three and only speaks in whispers (and is a total wimp)

Walking Style: Like a ninja! She walks so quietly, you won't know that she's there until she walks into your field of vision.

Mannerisms: Wakes up the latest yet goes to sleep the earliest. Keeps to herself, but mainly because of her inability to speak unless she's fighting. Communicates by either writing on a tablet, gesturing, or, if all else fails, letting her Keyblade possess her.

Attitude: Again, keeps to herself. Her heart's in the right place, though. She avoids conflict whenever nessecary, though you do NOT want her as an enemy.

Clothing: Silver tunic tied at the back with a blue sash. Loose silver pants lined with blue that stop at her ankles. Wears black ballerina slippers, but she's comfortable going barefoot too.

Eating Habits: Has the appetite of a hippo, shockingly. She notes that being the host of three senient energies might have something to do with it, but it's only a guess.

Optimistic or Pessimistic? Explain. : Optimistic, though the Blue and Green spirits are pessimists. She doesn't see the point in being negative all the time.

Introvert or Extrovert? Explain. : Introvert. She prefers to be alone rather than in a group, but as long as the group is small, she's fine.

Confident or Self-conscious? Explain. : Self-conscious, but she wants to change that part of herself. She doesn't want anyone to call her short (this is more of a pet peeve than anything else, though), and she especially doesn't want to be called weird because she's mute most of the time and can only talk through her Keyblade.

Feelings about appearance: She thinks she's plain, so she doesn't try to go the extra mile about her clothes or hair.

Most important possession: A dreamcatcher-like object that she's had ever since she started training. She keeps it tucked under her sash.

Hobbies: Making objects like the aformentioned dreamcatcher. She has so many that she could probably decorate her entire room with them.

Talents: Crafting (see above). She's also a fair swimmer, but she doesn't get to show that off a lot.

What is a normal day like? Be as detailed as you want!!
Get up in the morning, take ten minutes to stretch and fully wake up.
Bathe, get dressed.
Eat breakfast, greet everyone.
Spend another ten minutes wandering the grounds (by this time it's 7:00)
Go to class.
Keyblade training.
Immediately afterwards, have a firm talk with each of the spirts for not listening to her. (Yes, she has to do this every day. XD)
Hang out with the others during lunch
Finish homework after lunch.
Dinner
At dusk, rush into room and go to sleep.
Repeat for the next day.

Greatest fear: The dark. This is why she sleeps late and goes to bed early.

Closest friend(s): She cares about her friends equally (meaning they're all her closest friends. D'aaw.)

Relationship with other students (be specific!!) : She's most comfortable with the main group who are used to her odd habits. She's close to Aqua as well, and sometimes she (Aqua) joins her while she's walking around the grounds. She does NOT like Terra, mainly because he can't take the hint that a) She knows she's short, no need to point it out and b) No, she's not going to speak. And let's just say she wants to be more than just a little close to Ventus. (nudge, nudge)

Relationship with the teacher: She sees him as an authority figure...and nothing else. Seriously, if he wasn't in a higher position than she was, she would treat him like a slug.

Not get along with anyone in particular? (can be from game or Original Character): Terra, because of his super abilty to push all of her buttons at once.

Particular goals: To give a dreamcatcher to Ventus. Apparently, where she comes from giving a person a handmade dreamcatcher is a confession of love. Naturally, she's infinitely shy about it whenever the subject comes up.

Comments/Anything else you'd like to add: The spirits have names, given to them by Momiji's friends. Red: Victoria Blue: Majesty Green: Shine (pronounced She-nay). And, despite being an arrogant jerk, Victoria is the easiest to cooperate with of the three and is the one Momiji speaks through when needed.

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-06 01:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah! All right, jolly good show, mate. I just have to wait for three more of these (though I think I can start writing now). Your character type is really interesting and a pairing with Ventus would be ADORABLE!! XD I, on the other hand, shall persue Zexion...hehhehheh... Anyway, yeah! I'll post it somewhere (probably on DA and Fanfiction.net) when I get the chance to type it up, and I'll give you a heads up when it's up, alright? Any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Need any more details on the storyline? There's plenty I could still tell you, so...ask away!! I really don't mind answering them! Anything at all!! Characters, worlds, summons...whatever!

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-06 04:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Some more details on the other characters would be nice. I wanna know the weirdos my OC is getting involved with. XD

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-06 14:22:32 +0000 UTC]

All right. Here goes!

There's Kellie. She's the one who always likes to stick to the rules, not because she likes to bust anyone who breaks them, but mostly because she feels that they weree put in place for a reason. She's always getting on others for not using their keyblades the correct way, or not using a technique the right way, etc. On the other hand, she's a very loyal friend. She truly cares about everyone she knows, she just also wants to know we're using our keyblades the right way. She can relax and let loose, however. It's mostly the Keyblade techniques she's a stickler on, and she only gets fustrated with Lissa (see below) because Lissa doesn't care about technique.

Lissa is the, "Let's go rush in and kill everything" girl. Unlike Kellie, who uses technique a lot, Lissa uses no technique at all. She just runs into battle, with no idea how she's going to do anything. She's strong, sure, but it's true, she does need to learn technique. She can be a bit childish, but, she is a good friend who likes to talk about random things with everyone else.

Elizabeth is like the manager of the group. If no one will listen to anyone else, she'll take charge and tell eevryone what needs to be done. She's like the big sister--she just wants to see us all happy. If any of us reaches a milestone in our lives, she likes to take a camera out randomly and take a picture. She keeps a scrapbook with tons of pictures she's taken over the years. She can be impatient sometimes, but she's s good person to go to when you need to talk about a problem you're having.

Michelle is like the little dog that follows Lissa around everywhere she goes. If Lissa'a doing it, she has to do it. If Lissa's somewhere, she has to be there. It annoys Lissa a bit, but most of the time she just accepts it. Michelle is probably the most immature member of the group. She likes to pout when she doesn't get her way. She's a great cheer squad, though. She's great for anyone if they need a confidence boost, you know? And she's a great cook, and she always whips out the first aid kit when needed.

Ashley is the Mormon girl. I don't know if there are really mormons or not in the KH world, but let't just pretend there are. She's pretty quiet, but always says what's on her mind (but only if askes, that way she can say, "Well, you wanted to know!"). She tries to make sure no one strays from the traight and narrow, though it's kinda impossible, really. But she can make everyone else feel guilty about anything just by shaking her head.

Stephen is the responsible one. The official responsible one, I should say. He takes care of the official stuff (like paperwork) because Master Archard doesn't know how. He is level-headed and never has a bias. (He does, however, get into frequent arguments with Piper (see below) about how "orange" doesn't rhyme with "doorhinge". He also has a flair for the dramatic arts, and can always be found rehearsing for a monologue or such.

Piper is a cynical smartass who can't wait to point out flaws and inconsistancies. She always knows a way to laugh at something, but that's only to remind people that life shouldn't be taken to seriously. She is the quick-thinking one, who not only has plans A, B, and C, but the rest of the alphabet, too. She loves books, but can't stand the sappy ones (says they're not funny enough). SHe can have panic attacks, though, even though they're delayed ones. You know during a battle and everyone else will have the panic attack THEN and be like, We can't do this! Well, she doesn't let herself get a clouded mind and keeps her head clear till after the battle. THEN she has her delayed panic attack. XD

So. Any more questions? How about suggestions, got any of those? How do you think Momiji will react to each of these characters?

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-06 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

She'd probably be a little afraid of Lissa. XD I just imagined a scene like this happening.

Lissa: There's no time to think of a plan! There's a giant Heartless on the loose! Now who's with me?!
Kellie: Lissa, calm down! Now is not the time to go charging headfirst into-
Lissa: *grabs Momiji and runs after the thing* You can't argue, so you're coming with!
Momiji: *being dragged along* D8

XD
She'd probably be most comfortable with Ashley, Stephen and Elizabeth, because they seem to be the most sane of the group. She'd get along with Piper too, but not when she's in magic mode. XD And she likes Michelle because of her upbeat-ness, but dislikes her immaturity

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-08 14:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Good, good! I can't speak for the other characters (they aren't mine to control...only manipulate) XD. But Piper (my character) would consider Momiji someone she needs to look after. She would try to make sure she doesn't become TOO anti-social. Her biggest goal would be to make Momiji laugh as often as possible. I think I'm going to pair Piper and Momiji up for the first world, is that cool with you? Or do you request a partner-transfer (it would have to be between Kellie or Elizabeth)? Anything is cool with me. Everyone gets paired with everyone else at some point in the story.

So, any worlds you'd like to request? For either era (because remember, it is quite unlikely that we'll go to the same worlds we did ten years ago).

Oh, yes, I have a question. About Momiji's spirits, and when she sits down to talk to them...I was thinking maybe they kinda appear outside her body in very unstabe forms JUST for that time, like ghosts, and they all look like her, except they have the tint of each respecting color and their hair is different, like Victoris's being in tight curls (like the ones you had at school :3) with random red ones in them, Majesty's being in a choppy bob with a blue streak in it, and Shine having long hair that kinda covers her face with a streak in it. Does that sound fine to you, or would you rather it all stayed in her head? Because remember, they'd be in unstable bodies, like ghosts, unable to leave her body for long periods of time. Sound good to you?

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-08 16:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm fine with all that. She's yours to manipulate to your whim.
Momiji: *stares at me*
Me: Oh, don't look at me like that. >=T

Destiny Islands is a must! Also the Little Mermaid world (I forgot the name...) and Twilight Town. Those were my favorite places.

I always thought they appeared as shapless forms of energy, but your idea is way cooler! And only Momiji and a few others who can sense spirits or something (Like Hades) can see them.

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-08 23:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks. I just had an image of her sitting on her bed, talking to different versions of herself. Just wanted to make sure you were okay with that. Now I can get to writing THAT scene…XD.

And, I think we should go to Snow White’s world, first. Maybe…run into a certain blond-haired boy while we’re there? O_O And then maybe a noncanon world, and I think I’d like to do a Pandora Hearts thing (since that manga is owned by Square Enix also, and has a ten-year gap in it). Atlantica we’d have to do after we’ve fallen asleep, but we could fit that in. Would you like to go to Destiny Islands before or after the time gap? Wanna see little Sora and Riku or big Sora and Riku? We’re going to Radiant Gardens, too, by the way. Twilight and Traverse Town, yes. Basically, most of the already featured worlds. I’m adding a couple, though…Maybe you could help with naming the ones I don’t have a name for?

Heart’s Earth (our home world)
Pandora Hearts (no name yet)
Chronicles of Narnia (no name yet)
Pixie Hollow (okay, don’t kill me for this one—but you have to admit, it would be an interesting place to explore. Think of the costume changes!!)
Brother Bear (no name, in fact I’m still not sure about doing this one)
Black Cauldron (heck yea!! Sadly, no name…)
Some sort of Pixar movie. I’d love to do one.

And…my brain has run dry. I’ll add more as they come. Any suggestions?

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-09 00:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Before the time gap. We could meet little Riku and Sora and accidently plant seeds that will sprout in about three years (Like talking about who's worthy of wielding a Keyblade while Riku eavesdrops. Oh, I'm an evil person...)

The Narnia one should be called "Beyond the Wardrobe" or simply just "Narnia". Pixie Hollow should keep its name (And yes, the costume changes would be AWESOME. And you could ride on mice! 8D). Brother bear could be called something like "Where the Lights Touch the Earth". Not sure about the others, though. :/

As for a Pixar world, how about Toy Story or Monster's Inc or Brave (upcoming one set in ancient Scotland). You could be shrunk down to a toy's size like in the Alice in Wonderland stage. In Monster's Inc, you could travel to different dimensions through doors. Actually, that's a darn good idea. I'm sending it to Square Enix! *runs off*

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-15 13:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I think I've got the World assignments for the pre-time gap part of the story. Piper and Momiji spend an awful lot of time together, I'm afraid...but it was so HARD!! Especially witht he wonky timelines in Birth By Sleep? *shakes head* Anyway, this is what I have, tell me if you'd like a change...

World Assignments
1st
Piper & Momiji—Dwarf Woodlands
Kellie & Elizabeth—Enchanted Dominion
Lissa & Stephan—Deep Space
Michelle & Ashley—Castle of Dreams

2nd
Piper & Momiji—Disney Town
Kellie & Elizabeth—Neverland
Lissa & Stephan—Narnia
Michelle & Ashley—Lonely Kingdom (Sword in the Stone)

3rd
Everyone—Olympus Coliseum

4th
Piper & Momiji—Land of Hearts (Pandora Hearts)
Michelle, Stephan, & Kellie—Narnia
Elizabeth, Lissa, & Ashley—New World (Pocahontas)

5th
Piper, Momiji, Elizabeth, Lissa, & Ashley—Radiant Gardens
Michelle, Stephan, Kellie—Where the Lights Touch the Earth

6th
Everyone—Radiant Gardens

7th
Piper, Momiji, & Elizabeth—Lonely Kingdom
Lissa & Michelle—Neverland
Kellie, Stephan, Ashley—Disney Town

8th
Piper, Momiji, & Elizabeth—Destiny Islands
Lissa & Michelle—Disney Town
Kellie, Stephan, Ashley—New World

9th
Everyone—Destiny Islands

SLEEP!!!!!!!!

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-12 22:51:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the Monster's Inc thing! It's cool! Maybe I could fit that one in after the time gap...or maybe when we have nothing better to do while Sora's asleep for that year XD. So we go to those places. *Sigh* So much to write...

I know we're all ending up at Destiny Islands last. That's where our teacher finds us, tells us that Aqua, Terra, and Ven are going to go into battle, but we can't join them because it's not our part to play, we've got to go on our own paths, etc. Not to mention he kinda knows they're screwed. So he puts us to sleep, la dee dah...

I have an interesting idea for the Narnia world. You see, before the time gap, everyone goes there except you and me. And they saw it as the Narnia of The Lion, The Witch,and the Wardrobe, you know, with all the centaurs and faeries, and stuff. Well, we all go there AFTER the time gap, and you and I are expecting this awesome magical world...and there's nothing like that. (Piper:*Stands, dumbfounded* "WHAT IS THIS?!?!" Momiji: *Holds up slate with a question mark on it.* Piper: *Points at rest of group* You all LIED to me!!!) Yeah...We come back at the time of Prince Caspian. Pretty neat, huh? At least it's 10 years = 2500 years, unlike 1 year = 2500 years.

And, I'm thinking that "Sanctuary" rather than "Simple and Clean" would be a better song for this story. What do you think?

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-16 17:58:25 +0000 UTC]

At the time of Prince Caspian? *imagines*...I'm totally okay with this. 8D

Simple and Clean always struck me as a romantic song, so I think Sanctuary would fit better too.

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-03-21 02:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Heeey, guess who posted the first chapter of the story? THIS GIRL!!! Haha, and remember, it's just the first chapter. Don't expect too much, alright? Here's the link! :3

[link]

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-03-21 21:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Tsk tsk! If you're going to use that gag, use it correctly! You're supposed to say "who has two thumbs"!

*after being beaten soundly to a pulp*

I like it. A LOT! This is the beginning to an amazing story! Though my favorite part has to be this:

"Ashley stared, open-mouthed, in horror. "Angels of grace, have mercy on us," She whispered.

Momiji held up her slate, which read, "Crap", summing up Ashley's statement in a word."

XD Make sure you continue it soon! Oh, and to fix your Scene Change problem; whenever I do a scene change, I separate the paragraphs with a =.

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-05-22 13:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Hey, guess what? CHAPTER TWO OF MY STORY IS UP!!! So, yeah. Go ahead, follow the link. Momiji's not in it too much, I'm afraid, but she'll have quite a bit of time in chapter three, mmkay? So, yeah. Enjoy. ^ ^

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-05-22 22:52:27 +0000 UTC]

YEY!

"I don't own shit" Classy. Really classy. XD

I'm speaking in a completely unbiased way when I say this is an excellent chapter. It gives us some backround on the characters without spoiling too much. That's the mark of a good writer! Excellent!

And in case you wanted to know, there's no divine reason why Momiji is mute. She just hasn't said a word since the moment she was born, and her parents didn't see a problem with it. (Mundane backstory is mundane).

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-05-23 01:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Bwahaha!! Narcissism? Never! It's not narcissism if it's true!!!!

I know, right? I'm the classiest person ever. That's why my windchimes all consist of beer cans and plastic utensils tied together with fishing wire. Oh yeah. I went there. XD

I'm glad it was a good chapter. Next chapter I'm going to introduce Victoria, Majesty, and Shine, and I think it's going to turn out really well. I have it all written out already, at least that part. I'll go into a look at each of the character's evening, then it'll end with Ashley noticing the missing star in the sky. Conflict will be introduced by chapter four, and we'll start the adventure by chapter five. I am so organized, eh? If only it was all written out already...*wistful look in eyes*

And, I figured Momiji was just either born with a defected voice box, or maybe she just never figured out how to use them. I don't know where I'll take that...Hmmm....But anyway, thanks for the support! Hopefully I'll get a laptop this summer and be able to type, type, type!! ^ ^

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-05-23 01:38:20 +0000 UTC]

*snaps fingers in 'Z'*

Hang in there, you can do it! If you finish it, you'll be a legend on Fanfiction.net! You'll be, like, the fourth person to complete a multichapter fic while retaining good grammar!*shot*

To be blunt about it, Momiji never learned to talk, so she doesn't know how and won't attempt it. She's a bit stubborn. XD

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-05-23 13:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah...so I could do a really dramatic scene towards the end of the story where she attempts to talk? Maybe...Ventus could help? *cackles maniacally* Who knows, maybe she'll succeed...

I'm hoping both my Pokemon story and this story will be legends. I mean, my Pokemon story is pretty unique. They both are, really. And they're taken in logical directions, unlike those wierd fanfics online...that are full of yaoi...*shudders*

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Heystopstaring In reply to terraclearwater [2012-05-23 15:12:47 +0000 UTC]

You are an evil, cruel person who enjoys toturing her readers. I like it. You should write shipfics! XD

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terraclearwater In reply to Heystopstaring [2012-05-23 22:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Whahaha. Which shippings? X3

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