DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-04-09 06:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Hey JJ, sorry it's taken me so long to reply to this, I dont know if Theresa's said anything but my Laptop died on me rather unceremoniously so I've not had much internet time! On top of that I fear I'm coming down with a bout of Man Flu, it's a real thing y'know

As for Marty, I wasn't so sure to begin with. I didnt know how I felt about the idea of Swagger only being as awesome as he is due to an unseen force guiding his hand but when I read more and realised that Marty in fact did only little unseen things here and there and that Swagger had free will to do as he pleased I was much more intrigued, and then by the whole situation in general.

I feel like Marty opens a lot of doors and adds in another dimension to an already rich and layered storyline, which took me from 'Why am I still waiting for the boom to drop?' to 'Daymn!' in a matter of Chapters

All in I like Marty and the things he brings to the table. The scene where he briefly took control(ish) for a bit of steamyness with Pixie in the shower was a great example I think of exploring the dangers of having such a powerful symbiote

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jagespages In reply to DeadlyBruin [2013-04-09 16:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. You ropinions matter to us and I am so sorry to hear about the man Flu and laptop. It really helps us to know the symbiote thing works since it is such an important factor, so YAY! We are almost done wiht Book 3 editing and one more read-through to hopefully catch any auto-correct and type-os and then we will publish it. I am almost to 500 pages on Book 4. Feel better, my friend!

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-04-04 18:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Mostly. He has the same intense look, the same set jaw and that look, 'the look of eagles' about him. I really like it and it's cemented an image of him in my head whereas before my mind had a couple of pictures I couldn't choose from!! Big Love!! You really know how to do your characters justice in every sense of the word!

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jagespages In reply to DeadlyBruin [2013-04-04 19:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Whew! Thanks, I never could find an actor for him so this had to come from my imagination.

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-03-27 12:56:53 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I think Chris O'Donnell was a great choice to style him after!

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-03-26 07:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Nessun problema! Forgot to do two of them at the time of viewing, much to my horror!!

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jagespages In reply to DeadlyBruin [2013-03-26 08:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh, the horror, tee hee!

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DeadlyBruin In reply to Wren-chans-DA [2013-03-03 20:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Hi Fiona

Yeah things are going well, just keeping the head down and getting on with it as per usual! How are you?

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Wren-chans-DA In reply to DeadlyBruin [2013-03-03 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm doing okay, doing my best not to scratch at my itching arm along with the usual.
Also recovering from our trip to a re-enactment fair yesterday - suprisingly little of interest this time around... Oh well.

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-03-03 07:04:58 +0000 UTC]

I know you're a big fan of both so I appreciate the vote and supporting comment!!

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-02-26 23:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Lovely ladies they are worthy of a favourite or two

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DeadlyBruin In reply to jagespages [2013-02-23 20:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much It's always inspiring to get such nice feedback and it certainly can be a driving force when I question my storytelling ability

On a similar note I'd like to tell you how much I am enjoying the Swagger Vasa chronicles that Theresa turned my head to recently. I find the story to be very original and well written. I'm not that far into the second book but I find that when I start reading it I can't put it down, and if you find that in a story you know you've found a winner

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jagespages In reply to DeadlyBruin [2013-02-23 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]

That makes me so happy and is such an ego booster. Thanks! Karen lacks 46 pages editing the third book and then we will do a final spellcheck and read through and get it published as soon as possible. I am on page 351 of Book 4. This made my day and I meant what I said about your Hobbs story. Write more!

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Ezri-Krios In reply to Ezri-Krios [2013-01-15 00:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh - is my group. If you want to join us, feel free.

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