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YugoTokusatsu In reply to jss2141 [2020-03-25 18:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Jeez, what a coincidence to find you here! XD

I get a new watcher, I check out his commect section and see you! XDXDXD

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 19:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it took so long to reply.

I like your art

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 19:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, thanks man!

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 20:37:30 +0000 UTC]

PS

I have a Grim Tales AU of my own. I'd like to know what you think of it. If that's okay with you

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 20:41:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 20:53:02 +0000 UTC]

I saw that you read the Grim days at hazbin Hotel

That's not what I was talking about but I'm glad you liked it

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 20:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Than what were you talking about?

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 20:58:04 +0000 UTC]

This

m.fanfiction.net/s/13014383/1/…

The same thing as in deviantART but I made the error of putting that story in my journals

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 21:01:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for all this trouble but I really would like your opinion

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:03:31 +0000 UTC]

I already read this fanfic.

Small world am I right!? XD

There isn't much to it...I think it's boring...

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 21:04:43 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean boring?

Any improvements you would suggest?

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:10:01 +0000 UTC]

I mean, Junior just kinda gets a lecture from his dad and things are just perfect, I feel like Junior learns more from actions than words, only after he almost lost his sister did he learn how much he likes her, which is why I had his sister's death be a dream, it still happened but he didn't lose his sister.

Not only that but Mimi and Jeff are just rescued without much trouble, and there isn't much that's gained from them getting rescued early, I do have some plans, but things won't be as simple.

Junior gets his powers without much fanfare and Mimi and Jeff get rescued and nothing interesting comes from it.

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 21:16:04 +0000 UTC]

I agree mostly with what you're saying but. . Why does he need Fanfare to get his powers?

And I know this is not exactly a fair comparison but look at Greece's gods. They're just kind of born with their power. Granted they use it for nothing but themselves but still

I will check with my associates and see if I can alter the story to your specifications

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:21:59 +0000 UTC]

I know, but it's part of Junior's arc, greek gods don't go through character arcs.

After Jr. realizes that he DOES care about his sister after almost losing her, the emotional termoil causes him to awaken his powers early, Jr. powers awakening are symbolic of him growing as a person.

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 21:32:04 +0000 UTC]

I see your point but to be honest I tried to go for something different

First: Junior and his dad barely interact. I wanted to change that.

Second: At the time I wrote this. . I didn't Reapers could see into the future.

Lastly: I just like killing HIM. I never liked HIM and didn't want to keep him in the story for very long

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:37:26 +0000 UTC]

I can see your point, but I think you could have moments between Jr. and Grim, the first pages of my comic are flawed, Grim and Jr. had some trainning in between pages, looking back I could have written a scene about them trainning, but I can add that into future pages.

And I can understand not liking HIM, but considering how many characters are connected to HIM like Mimi and Jeff, you have alot to tie up, and technicaly you did, but like I said, you could do something more interesting with Mimi and Jeff being rescued.

By the way, I am glad you are being such a good sport about this critic.

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Commander456182 In reply to YugoTokusatsu [2020-03-29 21:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Well it's mainly because you're being one with me

I will see if I can alter the story. make it fit with what you're saying

And you're the first person not to burst out saying that the Scottish thing was ridiculously dumb

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YugoTokusatsu In reply to Commander456182 [2020-03-29 21:44:23 +0000 UTC]

I've seen dumber, besides dumb doesn't mean bad, I think alot for stuff in Kingdom Hearts is REALLY dumb and I still love the games like crazy! XD

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