StrideGum [2013-04-30 23:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Give ♥ This♥ To ♥ The ♥ Twelve ♥ Nicest ♥ People ♥ You ♥ Know ♥ If ♥ You ♥ Get ♥ Five ♥ Back ♥ You ♥ Must ♥ Be ♥ Perfect

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Sapheron-Art [2012-08-30 14:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave on my References

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theblackoutsyndrome [2012-07-12 22:24:01 +0000 UTC]

thx for the watch!

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WadeVezecha [2012-07-02 15:37:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch man awesome stuff you got here. neet to watch you back! by the way, if you have the time, please take a look at my SLASH manga here [link] register and do add it your faves if you like. i would also like to know what's your thoughts about it thanks

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xxxAnimeChickxxx [2012-02-09 03:11:41 +0000 UTC]

You Suck

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JazzieDuSoleil [2011-10-29 21:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave!

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Airlon [2011-10-27 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

your work looks pretty good ^^
I don't want to sound preachy or anything (I only mean to give this critque to help you; course I'm no expert myself )
I'm sure that your story is going to be good ^^, yet it's moving a bit to fast.. one important aspect to to be able to identify each character slowly (course not too slow). it is possible that many things can make sense in your head, such as character personally, possible ambisons, etc. (a very common mistake for writers and storymakers, so it's ok ^v^) but as a reader, it's good to let them know who they are. After all, I don't know anything about a character ^^

small events that brings out a character's personally is important. Aside from that, I like your character style (remember, intros are like the introduction paragraph in any essay. It states the purpose and goal of the protagonist. course manga and comic intros are pratically the first-2nd chapter)

you are doing great

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Rennako [2011-10-25 19:32:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the favorite!
and welcome to DA!

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