Ashmaster2494 In reply to Thegirlins [2012-10-27 23:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Es porque se acerca tu cumpleaños, según deviantART...

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Thegirlins In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-10-28 08:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Ni según DeviantART ni nada, ¡es que se acerca! De hecho es mañana ^^

Graciaaaas.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 05:54:19 +0000 UTC]

WE STILL HAVEN'T BEEN WARPED TO JAPAN AJSFHCXEKBNDO.

However, i'm pretty sure it's way too long already. I may be able to upload a big chunk if I do some editing today.

Yours?

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 07:04:22 +0000 UTC]

I have nothing beyond what I have already posted. But, if I could just get to a computer, I'd have it typed up fairly quickly. I've got it all planned out in my head.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 09:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Gog. Then I must hurry, because NOTHING IS PLANNED. And I have to study for my finals next week.

Yesterday I went to bed at two o'clock and wrote for about thirty minutes... And I almost didn't stop studying, that's why I couldn't write more...

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 11:49:56 +0000 UTC]

I've been grounded from the computer. :/

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 14:28:18 +0000 UTC]

I know, you told me...

Bah, screw sleeping, I'm doing this.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 14:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Do it, brah.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 16:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Question.

Is the "brah" some kind of cultural reference?

And please forgive me for butchering what probably is a really complex system you created, but I have little to no time and I HAD to make Seth notice Anaxymander's aura.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 16:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha, you aren't in the U.S., are you? XD

The system isn't complex at all. Is there anything special about his aura? Last I checked, he was a regular person. Regular person = Regular aura.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 16:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Umm... No. Can't you see that by my horrible English? (speciallytherepetitionofwordsintheroundsohgoditsfollowingme)

So normal person = transparent aura? Or that it doesn't have anything remarkable?

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 17:00:06 +0000 UTC]

A normal person CAN have their own color specific to them, but it cannot be used as energy, as Seth can. It would seem... Lackluster? Dull? Mundane? One of those fun adjectives.

Well, allow me to educate you. "Brah", is a slang synonomus(sp?) to "bro". In North America, the term "bro" is a general name of endearment to one's guy friends.
Ex: "Bro, come check this out! I just beat the final boss!"
"Sweeeeeet, brah"

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 17:13:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, I DID know about "bro". I thought maybe "brah" was some distortion of the word a character in a popular TV show or comic or whatever said, and thus you used it to reference the work. Like saying "You go, Glen Coco!" I still haven't watched Mean Girls.

OK... Let's try for the surprise.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 19:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Lulz, I haven't seen Mean Girls either. .

What are you up to...?

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 19:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Some friends of mine have already decided I am Glen Coco.

And well... You'll see it when I post what I have already written, maybe later today... I have to get to a nice lull and stop the action in order to submit it...

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 20:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 21:53:52 +0000 UTC]

OK, just let me memorize these ten twenty-line concepts for History and make the summary for Descartes for my Philosophy exam, and memorize both two-page themes for History again, and I'll finish writing it...

OTL anyone? D=

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 22:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Well we're in luck, because there's a mini extension.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 22:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Surprise!

[link]

Please tell me what you think!

And yes, that extension. I'm in love with it.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

My only qualm with your writing is that it's like, too much. You needn't explain every little thing in such detail. But, this is merely my opinion, so take it how you will. ^^

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]

I tend to explain everything so that the reader can imagine it better... You know, "show, don't tell"... The thing is that, if I don't write it all, I'm dissatisfied. Very. Also, headcanon galore in the conversation between Anaxymander and Father Time.

You see, this is why I never get to finish it in time.

And it needs so much editing, but there's no time for that.

Tell me what you think about it when you finish! Specially about how I wrote Seth and the Corruption, I find Seth specially hard to write... And about auras too...

I watched some videos on butterfly knives tricks just for this.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 23:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, I think Seth isn't all that hard to write. He's ill-tempered, impatient, and rather rude. But, he can be nice at times. As for the Corruption, you pretty much nailed it: Condescending, cruel, and an all-around troll.

I think you could have done without that entire conversation between Alex and Father Time, or at least dumbed it down a little. It was nice to implement your own mechanics, but it seemed a bit... Much.

Hope that helped a little. ^^

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-01-31 23:43:38 +0000 UTC]

About the conversation, i kind of agree with you. But I couldn't resist to write it. And include the headcanon. Just skip it and it will be fine.

I still have some headcanon reserved, though...

And about writing your characters: your own entry provided me with the material I needed, so thanks... Now let's see what happens next...

By the way, Werewolf-Incantation just provided me with a way to implement my story arc idea into the plot. Mwahahaha.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-01-31 23:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid that your story arc will have to wait, as mine has UNTOLD possibilities...

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 00:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh crap.

I see.

*furiously types on his phone while neglecting sleep*

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 00:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Hmph. Very well then. I shall finish up at work, and begin typing as soon as I am home!! >:U

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 00:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Are you not grounded anymore? Great! I really want to see that!

Also, might have to go to sleep soon. You know, having to wake up at half past six, which is about five hours from now. Yeah.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 00:58:37 +0000 UTC]

I might be ungrounded. Not too sure.

Weak. I was up till 3:00 last night, and I had to be up at six. XD

Oh, question: Would Alex like a guy like Seth? I planned on having Seth befriend him. He needs friends. :3

Seth: ...you have no idea how much I hate him...

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 06:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but I've been doing that for at least a week. And I've decided to sleep well for once, or I'm just not able to concentrate when I start studying at home.

I don't see why not... But have in mind Anaxymander is quite timid and might take a while...

You mean the Corruption?

This is the second contestant in a row that has someone else in their body. I'm starting to see a pattern here...

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 07:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the Corruption is more mental than anything. Not really so much as part of his body, but his mind and aura.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 07:32:26 +0000 UTC]

I know, Mask was kind of like that too in the first round... I meant something like that, a personality that has to be restrained, inside another person who has to deal with them lingering around in their mind.

I can't wait to write the next part. I'll only say I've been saving this plot twist specifically for you since I read your audition and reference. Even before the tournament started.

There, you can start wondering about what the hell this Ashmaster idiot is going to write now. =3

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 07:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I feel special now. XD I assume it has to deal with Seth's visitor?

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 08:30:44 +0000 UTC]

It does. Quite. It also has to do with the fact that Anaxymander does not even have a hint of a possibility of winning in a fair match with either Seth or the Remnant. Or Corrupted Seth. Because the latter two are somewhat different, aren't they?

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 11:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the are. Corrupt Seth still has SOME control over his actions, whereas The Remnant is pretty much it's own body. I'd advise against using the latter if you are following Werewolf's canon, as Werewolf already used him.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 14:27:31 +0000 UTC]

"Already used him"
Yeah, zhe did.

And kind of KILLED HIM GORILY.

But it's OK, I'm going to use your canon.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 14:34:03 +0000 UTC]

As you should. because my canon is like, way better /shot

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 14:43:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm using your canon because it fits into the story arch I just pulled out of my *AHEMAHEM* the story arch that I had a general idea for but that now fits perfectly with the story thanks to the split timeline.

Adapting to the circumstances! Yeah!

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]

...mine is still better. >> /shot

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 16:42:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm in the doctor's waiting room. Prime time for writing. See you soon.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 16:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Do it to it!

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

In the end, I wrote almost nothing... OTL Well, I'll write now. I have hours in front of me.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-01 23:25:01 +0000 UTC]

WRITE, DAMMIT.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-01 23:51:22 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD I KEEP PROCRASTINATING WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?

On the other hand, that Miku song I just found was pretty good.

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AlistairTheAvenger In reply to Ashmaster2494 [2012-02-02 01:14:40 +0000 UTC]

STOP PROCRASTINATING AND GET YOUR SHIT DONE.

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Ashmaster2494 In reply to AlistairTheAvenger [2012-02-02 07:20:53 +0000 UTC]

I CAN'T JIN IS TOO GOOD WITH IA I CAN'T STOP LISTENING TO HEADPHONE ACTOR.

Ok, I'm writing today. I just had a small block. I have some kind of "rule" not to make too significant time lapses without a good excuse. I think I'm going to break that rule for once.

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