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8580girl
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[2009-05-24 22:16:08 +0000 UTC]
"icon: 0xo I wuvs writing!"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 91; Deviations: 17; Watchers: 3
Watching: 10; Pageviews: 5987; Comments Made: 632; Friends: 10
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: too many to say!Favorite gaming platform: PC
# About me
this is my page where i used to geek out over Total Drama# Comments
Comments: 52
Hey fulltimereviewer, I found your devart page! Thanks for all the reviews on TAOP
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Haha! My turn to bother you. When you get the chance could you check out Skeletons and tell me what you think? :joy: it feels good doing this. But yeah XD you've improved so rapidly that I really want to see what you think of my latest work.
Anyways >
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Well, I did read it and I will give me my review here. 
I thoroughly enjoyed (if that is the correct term) the way Duncan met Death. May I say that it reminded me of Family Guy. But, all funny business aside. This chapter was very emotional.
The way Courtney dealed with her loss was not the way I would've expected her to. But,people grieve in different ways... I liked the smoking bit a lot, along with the other semi-mushy flashbacks in the chapter.
My favorite line(s): I could never take DJ early, he would live a long, strong, healthy and happy life. He would marry, he would have a daughter named Leah and a beautiful husband named Justin.
I rarely use this term, but ma'am that was very EPIC. I laughed soo hard when I read that.
Great Job, I'm glad to see that you're back,
Best Wishes,
fulltimereviewer
PS: Your feedback on "Down in Flames" made my heart real warm. (:
Thank ya'
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XD lol thanks. I wasn't really thinking when I wrote Courtney's behavior (that entire chapter was basically written from 6-7 am), how would you go about it? To be honest, I was not quite sure.
On Death (and Im so glad you understood it, lol. Sadly I was a bit worried some might not get it) do you mean that it's entire character was like the one in family guy, or just the meeting? XD just curious, I love Death in Family Guy.
I couldn't help but add in Leah XD I hope it's okay, but it really seems to me he would have a daughter named Leah now...just in my world...he marries Justin XDD LOL. Though DJ and Katie are very cute together.
I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter XD and I meant what I said before. I'm honest when it comes to writers I like XD
<3
Thanks again
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Well, I would've made Courtney be a little more vulnerable; I would have made her silent, and then at the scene where she;s smoking I would'vehad her having a conversation with Duncan(You know in that old degrassi episode when Liberty talked to JT, something likt that). I would've kept the DJ and Geoff bits (make her not so harsh on DJ or Geoff).
I would honestly have to re-read that part to make a decision on Death. but, I'm glad I got the reference! XD
I have no issue with the Leah thing! It was cute. I always thought of making DJ gay in a story.... 
DJ and Katie are quite adorable together.
Well... I'm glad that we can be honest with each other!! And, hey what's your facebook?
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i found this on facebook today randomly and this little girl reminds a lot of leah
[link] !/album.php?aid=50859&id=1667306157
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Tutu cute! She does remind me of Leah, if only she looked a litte more asian. I hope to have the request note to you sometime this weekend. (:
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yep i was thinking about that too and maybe her skin a little bit darker, but gosh those pictures are so beutiful
that i just have to show you
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Hey! Okay, so, my facebook is Ariel Horn. You can search my up by writergurl411@hotmaill.com.
KJ....uh..... HEY LOOK! A PUPPY!!!!
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Hey, what does 8580 stand for anyways? Just curious
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It was like a lunch number or something. Stupid ikr. xD!!! FYI: AFL offically has a sequel!
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Alright, I'll check it out.
Oh. Skeletons, Courtney Says, and Selfish Breathing (though I don't think you read that one) are getting endings sometime soon. They won't be the planned endings but hopefully good enough.
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Thank you; and, what a pleasant surprise! I look forward to the endings.
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Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Birthday! I hope you had a wonderful day and squeeze the 3 hours 10 min left ^_^... Hum, well, that's the remaining time before midnight here *^¬^*.
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Haha! Thank You!! I had a fabulous birthday!
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I hear ya im not anti-DXG but when i saw them kiss i felt heart sank
but ive decided to trust the writers and see where they r going with this
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I clicked on the link to the picture of your characters in 'Family Ties'
I thought that it was you who drew it at first, then I read the description before I commented and noticed that it said it was for you. So I sifted through the comments and there you were. Lol ^_^ I'm a bit of a creeper.
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LOL!! I thought only my friends and I used that word!!
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How'd u know I'm they same person? Amd WAZZUP!!
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here you go
[link]
sorry her tears dont show up that well.
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Hi!! Thank you so much for 
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Ur welcome I lived 4 that show when I was little!
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wow! thanks so much for all the comments on my story. I hate to tell you but i think thats all for tonight...hopefully you can hold out until tomarrow after school.
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LoL yeah ur story was an amazing after school treat LoL
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Ur Welcome!! Hey could you read my story Family Ties?
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sooooo yeahhhh....a bit of bad news....
i wont be able to make alterations to the pic....long story short, i must have deleted the pic off my computer at some time unbenoced to me and my computer wont let me copy and past things form Deviantart any more (i dont know why) so i wont be able to do anything to the pic with out redoing the entire thing and i dont have that kind of time right now.....sorry.
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It's cool beans chica!!!
I really love your art!!
I just want you to now if I need anymore illustrations for my stories, you are the first on my list!!
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heres your request...sorry it took forecver.
[link]
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