sartre-erise [2006-08-10 12:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Hee, I love that the thing that stands out most in your memory about him is his scent. I think I read somewhere that smell is connected very strongly with memory; I remember the other day I ate something I hadn't eaten in years, and the smell made me immediately feel like I was in middle school again in my mom's kitchen.
Fantastic diction and syntax. Short prose pieces can very easily become contrived and cliche, but you avoided that splendidly. Kudos~
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