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ZiulEdaj — Tanguero
Published: 2006-08-10 07:38:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description He smelled of coffee, the clean sweat of the Tango dancer, the peppermint in his mouth, and enough of the tobacco in his cigarettes to add a light bitterness to the smell. A heady, sharp scent, not unpleasant. I pressed myself against him, my eyes closed, feeling his perfect connection, his rough stubble against my cheek, his breath in my ear, “pah-pah-pah,” as he whispered the rhythm as we danced.

His smell was my strongest memory, it seemed to dull all other senses, those that would try to complicate the raw, graceful movement of the dance. At the end of the night, that Tango smell was on my clothes, on my skin. I could almost taste it, pungent and darkly beautiful, the music itself. There were other partners, as enjoyable and inventive as he. But somehow, that scent, the flowing tempo of his Brody-esque body, his very passion for it all... The music, the connection, the electric line between two bodies moving as one, He was Tango incarnate, a very corporeal representation of the dance itself, walking like a shaman between this world and that ethereal other-place that is Tango.
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sartre-erise [2006-08-10 12:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Hee, I love that the thing that stands out most in your memory about him is his scent. I think I read somewhere that smell is connected very strongly with memory; I remember the other day I ate something I hadn't eaten in years, and the smell made me immediately feel like I was in middle school again in my mom's kitchen.

Fantastic diction and syntax. Short prose pieces can very easily become contrived and cliche, but you avoided that splendidly. Kudos~

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ZiulEdaj In reply to sartre-erise [2006-08-10 17:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your comment! Glad you liked it!

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