Comments: 12
dragol [2015-11-07 00:03:35 +0000 UTC]
Drooling so hard...
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Murielle [2015-10-30 06:10:35 +0000 UTC]
SO DAPPER!
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PunkOz [2015-10-26 06:06:42 +0000 UTC]
this bot is too hot 2 trot
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Sharkielle [2015-10-25 17:47:53 +0000 UTC]
HHH-....HH- HI....THERE.............
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0mura2 [2015-10-24 22:40:27 +0000 UTC]
THE HYPE!!!
one of my biggest weaknesses, characters that wear suits and look badass while fighting in it, god damn it Zaifon, your OC's are always so cool
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ProfessorParsec [2015-10-24 22:28:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is a solid design; I like the logo too!
A couple grammatical corrections just in case you didn't catch them:
"...biggest crime lords and punks."
"...symbiotic armour that can shape-shift into weapons, acts, and a damn fine suit too." I'm not sure what you mean when you say acts...
"Although his armour can endure a lot of damage, it's not indestructible."
"He's more likely the solve problems with his fists rather than actually investigate." or "He's more the type that solves problems with his fists than with investigation."
"...cause trust me" should either be " 'cause " as it is an abbreviation of because or just "because". You can write it as two separate sentences or with a semicolon as well to show that the statements are related instead of using "because". Here's some options:
"He's a laid-back guy who can judge you, 'cause trust me, he's seen everything." "He's a laid-back guy who can judge you. Trust me, he's seen everything." "He's a laid back guy who can judge you; trust me, he's seen everything."
I hope this is helpful.
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Falceto-Rekuri [2015-10-24 06:13:49 +0000 UTC]
CLAWS AT MY FACE.
HES
SO
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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BITEGHOST [2015-10-24 04:12:23 +0000 UTC]
I AM IN LOVE I AM IN LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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calanii [2015-10-24 04:00:18 +0000 UTC]
oh my god
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IkeTheWarrior [2015-10-24 03:57:04 +0000 UTC]
I love this guy and I bet Darcy would really love him if they met! lol
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MelCairoRose [2015-10-24 03:55:25 +0000 UTC]
I like this guy already. 8D
I just.. I dont know.. maybe just want have a nice chat with him, I'm not much of a coffee or tea kind of person, but if he's down with having hot coco or smoothies, that would be sweet.
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