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Published: 2010-04-01 03:08:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 52316; Favourites: 1371; Downloads: 2654
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I tried to redo my 'I love art' origonal for a submission to this summer program. I missed the deadline, but I still really like how it turned out, so TADA!!!Related content
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theres something about this concept that i really like.
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cool. I really wish one of my people could come to life.
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This is my favorite of your pieces I've seen. Its truly amazing! it has such wonderful detail and the colors jump out of the picture.
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This is beautiful ! I love the creativity . . . this really stand out (:
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beautiful and stunning. <3
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OMg this is soo romantic :') i would of never thought u douiong that
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Wow. What did you use for this? Just pencils?
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Wow, I love this so much! Awesome concept; the shading really brings it to life ;D heh It's also really cool how you mangaed to get the drawing hand to look like halfway still drawing on the page and then halfway kind of hugging the guy
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that... was an tatally on purpose. yeah. I totally didn't just get that from you *shift eyes*
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Hah it's okay I won't tell anyone >.<
I always end up assuming too much in pieces of art and I knew one day I'd end up just making stuff up on my own 
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Hi there! 
I hope it is helpful and you can use it for your future work! 
βWell first thing I'd like to say is it's GREAT. I like drawings that are technically good and that tell a story. So already, a win. One suggestion is the color of the drape on the right. It's red, and since your eye goes naturally to red, it pulls me a little. Also, the details in the cityscape and on the dresser distract me a little.
A good rule of thumb is the greatest detail and the brightest color are like signs that tell you where to look. Of course I go right to the couple and I don't want to look away from that. Good modeling in space and nice colored pencil technique, with the hatching and careful shading. The lighting could be a little more dramatic IMHO, but I do see where it's coming from (the window) - a fine job!β
βI really like the concept of this picture. :3 Though I'm not sure if it makes me happy or lonely. XD It could have multiple meanings, really. But in all honesty I really like this. It's drawn and colored really well. You have quite the coloring skill, and your shading is fantastic. However, you seemed to really just put most of your effort to the two people, and not a lot else. :/ For example, the buildings out the window seem like they were lazily drawn, as well as the glass of water. Other than that, this is a job well done. ^^ Lots of emotion and color. I'd call this work a success.β
βThough most of the time I don't like sketch lines still apparent in a piece, I think it fits exceptionally here, and ties the whole piece together. The line quality is actually very nice, and gives a strong sense of figure. You also have a pretty fair sense of your lightsource, but it could show a bit more more distinctly. Lighter lights, darker darks. Don't be afraid of more striking values. Good values though, just a bit more. Lastly I would advise smoothing the colors a bit so you don't show the grain of the paper as much, but overall a fairly well made piece.β
βDeviantArt is full of takes on the myth of Pygmalion, yet it's nice to see a girl as the creator for once. I really like the fact that it's a simple, unpretentious piece, where there are some similarities between the artist and the drawing (as in, you don't see one done in a realistic style and the other as a drawing) and, to me, that makes the work look more coherent and... honest. And I also like the way the edge of the canvas she's drawing on and the curtain seem to create a frame around the subject which, along with the warm colors, gives the scene an intimate feel. Nicely done!β
βOh, I definitely do like this one. The concept for once is so very sweet, pictures coming alive is always a cool thing, but it's beautifully executed here as well. I love the colours, the green of the top balanced with the red hair and curtain and the warm lighting. What you might have done is I think have more highlights, or rather, less shadows, and more backlight, as if the light was really coming from the window. The city backdrop is so pretty by the way, and I love how you rendered the clouds. To the characters: If I'm not mistaken you got proportions a wee bit wrong, your body from hips down is somewhat too small in comparison with the upper part. But apart from that I really like how you did the pose and especially the kiss, it looks so sweet! Overall: Some minor issues you could improve on, but on the whole great choice of subject, colour and excellent execution. I love it!β
βI really like this. I donβt know how often Iβve wished to just draw the perfect guy for me and make him alive. Ok, over to the feedback 
βI love it. It is just a thoughtful, well-balanced piece. The only significant improvement I could suggest would be how the light hits the floor. The sun is on the horizon yet the light falls just short of the wall. From the angle of the sun in relation to the windowβs edges, the light would probably bottom-out at her thighs or waist. Great piece!β
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Oh, we each got different bullet colors. Neat!
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thank you for sending me this. I appreciate all the feedback, and will deffinitely take it to heart when I go back in to revise this one.
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It is my pleasure. I'm looking forward to seeing the revised one!
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Wonderful conveyance of your concept. Artist creates what she wants right before a maghical evening... JC
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haha, yeah... I guess. thanks!
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It's beautiful!
I feel like you could darken the shelf behind the easel a little more, but other than that, I love it!
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I feel like the whole thing is kinda messed up, so I'll probably completely readgust it one of these days. But thanks!
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This is lovely, the art and the idea 
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I love the idea behind this... wonderful drawing!
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I love this! I totally feel the same way sometimes
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This is amazing. I love it!
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thanks! I just wish it was executed better. Maybe I'll redo it... nah.
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I dont think you should. I think it's wonderful like it is now.
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hahaha, you're sweet.
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Why thank you.
I just got an account on here so how do you put art up?
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lolz. Go to the little sign that says 'subit' and when it drops down there will be an option to 'submit art'. Welcome to da!
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