HasegawaYamato [2012-10-06 09:12:35 +0000 UTC]
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Good job with markers, clean and sharp lines really make it pop out. My only constructive comments first regard the toes, they seem squashed and weird looking perhaps from lack of any shading, second she still feels a little flat my suggestion is you shadow more to make her really pop out and come more alive! The weapon in her hand is what I an talking about, the shadowing on it and lighting off it's reflective surface really make it pop out and look super nice as well does the shadowing on her face. Over all nice piece and I hope you win the contest in class!
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