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xzchaser [2022-05-30 03:05:01 +0000 UTC]
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D-Field22 [2021-07-25 20:18:53 +0000 UTC]
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D-Field22 [2020-02-22 00:11:00 +0000 UTC]
I do hope that you plan on continuing this fanfic soon. I really want to see the twins finally meet in person, and also give their parents hell. Also if you can, can you make a scenario where R2-D2 and C-3PO meet again when the twins go ally meet and let the ball of secrets roll from there?
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D-Field22 In reply to yinyangswings [2020-02-25 17:01:24 +0000 UTC]
If I can make a suggestion, can you add a few more chapters with Luke and Padme? Don't get me wrong, I love the chapters with Anakin and Leia, but I feel like the former 2 aren't quite fleshed out in the book like the latter 2 are.
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yinyangswings In reply to D-Field22 [2020-02-26 15:02:53 +0000 UTC]
I understand...to be fair, I have a few more chapters on fanfiction.net for this story.
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D-Field22 In reply to yinyangswings [2020-02-26 20:50:13 +0000 UTC]
Even so, I feel that the Mother and Son chapters aren't quite as compelling as the Father and Daughter chapters. Aside from the kidnapping chapter of course.
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D-Field22 In reply to yinyangswings [2020-03-02 04:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Well I think a chapter or two where Luke and Padme get into a fight would be good to see. Throughout the story, i feel that their relationship as family is close to being all peaches and cream aside from a few incidents.
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yinyangswings In reply to D-Field22 [2020-03-22 15:37:03 +0000 UTC]
any suggestions on what the fight(s) should be about?
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D-Field22 In reply to yinyangswings [2020-04-03 05:46:01 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. One argument could involve Luke digging into to something that he shouldn't. Or one could involve him putting the pieces of who his father is, or something of that nature. Maybe it all leads up to him confronting his mother and demanding as to why she kept this from him. Kind of like a parallel to what Leia will go through soon. I had others in mind, but it is kind of difficult for me to out them into words right at the moment.
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Teaganm [2019-06-12 11:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Cool cover.
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Tigerman354 [2016-09-29 19:56:06 +0000 UTC]
Cool!
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rockofmarduk [2015-08-11 02:17:47 +0000 UTC]
You should be proud. That's a great cover.
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Car-54 [2015-07-24 00:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Amazing art.Β
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