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xxDarkDustxx β€” [IoP] Crossing the line

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Published: 2017-09-28 07:57:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 362; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Storytime!

It was a day like any other.
Beautiful sunshine, warm temperatures, no clouds in the sky.
But still, Keto knew somehow that today he could do it - he could finally learn Flamedancer.
His father didn't want him to try it alone, but really - what could happen?
As long as he stayed on the beach near the water there would be no danger of forest fires or whatever Rascal was scared of.
So, Keto trained all day long until the sun was up high in the sky, burning mercilessly down on him.
While it was getting hotter around him, he felt the heat also building up in his body.
He had felt the same sensation when he had learned Blaze, so somehow he knew what to do.
The heat was building up further and further until he almost couldn't bear it and let it go -
Flames started materializing around him and Keto let out a gleeful laugh.
Happily, he ran around the beach, letting the flames dance around him, just like the name of the attack said.
He did it.... he really did it!
Instantly he wanted to show off his new attack in front of his father, but at this moment he saw Moon sleeping at the edge of the beach.
Well, he shouldn't be picky.
Running toward her, he called out: "Moon! Moon, look at me! I did it! I really did it!"
But Moon only opened one eye lazily and murmured something incoherent.
Keto called her name a few more times but got a little frustrated when she just ignored him.
Sure, it was no secret that his sister didn't like him but couldn't she just once be a little nicer to him?
If she didn't pay attention to him, then maybe he had to show her what he could do!
He commanded the flames to dance around Moon and tried to talk to her again. "Come on, Mooooooooooon! It's fun!"
Moon seemed to feel the heat from the flames and opened her eyes now...
But instead of looking impressed, she just looked scared. "Keto... what are you doing?"
Nervously she eyed the flames and edged backward a little.
"What do you mean, can't you see how great this is?" His voice grew a little louder with frustration but somehow the flames also reacted to his mood.
They also got bigger, dancing more wildly and faster now.
Before Keto could even attempt to get them under control again, Moon screamed with fear and pain.
Keto froze in fear and saw that his sisters' ribbon was on fire.
Oh no. No no no no no no....
Trying to get control over the flames, he jumped away from Moon.
Please go out you damn flames, GO OUT!
He was fighting with his inner self now until he was able to erase the flames and walked towards his sister again.
Keto had never felt so guilty in his life, his heart was racing and he felt like a hot stone was lying in his belly.
Don't let her be hurt.... Please let her be okay...
She was sitting with her back toward him, crying softly.
"Moon.... are... are you ok? I'm so sorry...."
With a bad feeling in his guts, he walked around her and saw that her ribbon was scorched and it seemed she had extinguished the fire with her paw.
There was a huge burn over it and she was shaking with pain.
"I'm sorry... I'm so sorry Moon... I... I didn't want to do that.... I'm sorry..." Keto could only apologize, he didn't even know what else to say. )
He really wanted to hold her and console her but he was too scared to touch her...
This was bad... really bad...
Keto knew he had to get help but he just couldn't go to his father - he would be SO angry.
But where else could he go? Maybe... maybe his mother could help!
..................

To be continued~
(The part will be made by x-Spectral-x )


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Wispen Nectar:

Keto earned: +20 WN (3x Full Body Lineart, Color, Shading / Simple Background / 654 words)
Keto learned Flame Dancer!

Moon earned: +20 WN (3x Full Body Lineart, Color, Shading / Simple Background / 654 words)
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Comments: 33

Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 06:44:28 +0000 UTC]

oh nooo D:Β 

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 06:45:34 +0000 UTC]

I like happy endings, so don't worry ;v;

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Mama-Raevanon In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 06:47:27 +0000 UTC]

OH! btw, im trying to help your pokemon with levels c: is that ok?

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 06:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh, what Pokemon do you mean? *__*
That would be really nice of you :3

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Mama-Raevanon In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 07:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, any you like!
Are there a top 3 you have been wanting to evolve badly?
link me them~

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 07:25:08 +0000 UTC]

*^* Awesome β™₯ Those would be the tree I want to evolve but just didn't have time to draw levels for XD
Luna
Maple
Cleo

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Mama-Raevanon In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 07:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Ok, i figured out what levels they need exactly to evolve~

Luna Needs +18 lvls
Amaura-39

Maple Needs + 27 lvls
Glameow- Evolves at lvl 38
Deerling-34

Cleo Needs + 11 lvls
Blitzle-27

I will give you:

For Luna:
x1 Deluxe Rare Candy +10 Levels
x1 Rare Candy +5 Levels
x2 Fullbody sketches +4 Levels

For Maple:
x1 Rare Candy MAX +20 Levels
x1 Rare Candy +5 Levels
x1 Fullbody Sketch +2 Levels

For Cleo:
x2 Rare Candy +10 Levels
x1 Fullbody Sketch +2 Levels

Transfer:
x1 Deluxe Rare Candy
x1 Rare Candy MAX
x4 Rare Candy

Work:
x4 Fullbody Sketches

Sorry i got technical, i'll be using this as reference when i transfer the items to you Β 

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 07:52:43 +0000 UTC]

;3; Ohhhhhhhhh thank you so much!
But you really don't have to do so much, you know? β™₯

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Mama-Raevanon In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 07:53:12 +0000 UTC]

it's ok! i'm happy to help a friend Β 

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Mama-Raevanon [2017-09-29 08:03:24 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOUUUUU >v<

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Mama-Raevanon In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 08:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Here are their Sketches

I'm gonna go to bed now, it's 1:25 AM xD

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EternalFyre413 [2017-09-29 06:03:30 +0000 UTC]

poor children ;u;

i love this

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to EternalFyre413 [2017-09-29 06:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ;v;

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x-Spectral-x [2017-09-28 14:12:16 +0000 UTC]

This turned out amazing omg!! ;;; I thought you said you couldn't write :'D!! This is like 10x better than what I can do lmao, I'll try my best though c:<
Poor Moon ;n; can't help but feel sorry for her... but Crusoe is coming to the rescue c': !

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-09-28 15:43:57 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU QVQ
I should have said: I don't like to write xD
It takes too long - but happy you like it QvQ
I leave the rest to you xD
YES and they will be HAPPY FOREVER 8D (don't mind me, I'm just making future plans lol)

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-28 21:50:22 +0000 UTC]

:'D I feel you there still lol
cept it's both things for me heh
Thanks though c': I'll get to it this weekend since really busy this week orz
>o> future plans hm..?
alright though lol

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-09-29 05:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Sure, take your time! β™₯ You can do it!
(Haha, yeah - my brain always makes plans >v<)

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-29 22:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the encouragement<33 I need it :'D
>u> Can't wait to see/hear those plans when/if the time comes lol

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-09-30 05:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Ok, here is more! XD
Write the heck out of that story! This will be easy! I bet it will be awesome!
GO GO GO!

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-30 22:31:04 +0000 UTC]

:'D Thank you!!
I do have a cold right now though so may be longer than expected >> I will get it out though
of course it'd happen now ;; I apologise

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-10-01 00:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, you poor thing ;A;
I don't know how warm it is where you are but cover your neck in scarves and drink tons of tea with more tons of honey QvQ
It's totally fine, I just hope you feel better soon >v<

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-10-01 00:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Canada, so kinda chilly right now ><
Cold night last night too which probably didn't help heh
Thank you very much<33 I'll do that ;v;

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-10-01 07:55:07 +0000 UTC]

D: Awww and it's not even winter yet TvT
I hope you feel better soon β™₯

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-10-02 02:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ;; as soon asΒ autumn starts, the cold wind starts n usually there's that "autumn illness" where pretty much everyone is sick, even with just a small cold
Just the way the weather celebrates the starting of the flu n cold season I suppose c':
here anyways
Thank you for your concern though ;u;!

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-10-02 06:23:25 +0000 UTC]

What a cruel weather!
I mostly get sick in the first few months of the year... it's like it is so cold for so long that my body just thinks it will never be warm again and breaks down or something xD

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x-Spectral-x In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-10-02 22:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Ikr;;
Lol omg..
My body just instantly gives up I thinkΒ :'D *hates cold weather anyways*
No matter the time though, getting sick isn't fun at all heh

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to x-Spectral-x [2017-10-03 07:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, it's really not fun!
I always think... Hey if I get sick I can stay at home and get a little drawing done!
Reality: I sleep the whole day and when I'm awake I'm just self-pitying me xD

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Lunar-Imagination [2017-09-28 08:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Welp! Now I'm excited to see the next part! Awesome job on the art! Story is short, sweet and to the point!

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Lunar-Imagination [2017-09-28 08:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you *^*
The other part will be made by x-Spectral-x β™₯
Phew, writing that was really hard, so I'm happy you like it >v<

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Lunar-Imagination In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-28 08:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! I'll keep a look out for it!
Hahah! Yeah writing can be difficult sometimes (I finished writing 7706 words for an event) but when you do it well, you do it well!

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Lunar-Imagination [2017-09-28 08:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Whaaaaaat... oh gosh xD
I would die... I needed one and a half hour for those few words... I can only imagine how long it takes to write over 7000 words O.O

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Lunar-Imagination In reply to xxDarkDustxx [2017-09-28 08:15:15 +0000 UTC]

HOURS AND HOURS MY FRIEND! I WAS UP TILL 3 AM FINISHING THAT! 8D TOTES NOT SLEEP DEPRIVED AT ALL!

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xxDarkDustxx In reply to Lunar-Imagination [2017-09-28 08:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh man xD
I FEEL U

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