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Published: 2002-08-16 17:29:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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we're on our playground babyyou know what drives me crazy
getting much closer lately
think of you all the time
wishing that you were mine
i think i love you girl
so come into my world
you are my prescious pearl
think of you all the time
feels so good its a crime
your bodys curves so tight
i wanna hold you all night
keep you safe with my might
think of you all the time
baby you'll soon be mine
you are so cute when you're with me
my heart is locked you have the key
i am the one and soon you'll see
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hey :estherbadester: you forgot your 16 inch dagger in my back, stop by later to get it. heh i am just playing, dont worry about it. i wrote this at 5am and i wasnt even going to submit it. no biggy. thanks for the comments. really.
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hey! yesh, i'll leave you alone because it was late... but all I see is a big rhyme. and everything is just so BLAND. all these words I see all the time in poetry, if your goal was diction, it sucked. the feeling comes across to me as there, but it's hidden because you used these words. It's an awesome topic, but your poem doesn't do this feeling justice. I think. sorry
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