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Tunik1458 [2023-07-17 19:17:10 +0000 UTC]
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OreoApocalypse [2016-01-23 05:23:02 +0000 UTC]
This is so amazing ^_^
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suty13 [2015-06-24 07:06:25 +0000 UTC]
<3 <3
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Dashieandluna [2015-03-31 22:29:34 +0000 UTC]
I am such a big fan maybbe if you could check out my poems it would be a dream come true Β Β
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Meg-Ex [2015-03-08 11:14:42 +0000 UTC]
its nice!
-Meg
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pooh706 [2014-11-22 02:54:12 +0000 UTC]
I wrote something similar to this but in the complete opposite context I called it "first love"Β I think its on my deviant art page.
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pooh706 [2014-11-22 02:52:42 +0000 UTC]
I can completly realte to this poem more than I wishΒ I could.Β I have written a few poems realting to personal fellings as well. I find that they come out better than any poem that is just free flowing or for the fun of it.
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iSebqc [2014-06-01 08:54:00 +0000 UTC]
Beautifull
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harunatu [2014-05-31 02:37:09 +0000 UTC]
I love your poem it's beautifull really I just love itΒ Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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JadeDragon1 [2014-03-23 07:48:47 +0000 UTC]
I loves ur poem and is very relate able Β
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prestosauce [2013-12-15 04:56:34 +0000 UTC]
This is breathtakingly beautiful... I feel like I'm in love... but it is indeed difficult to explain how it feels...Β
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xXUnforgivinKingXx [2013-12-10 13:52:02 +0000 UTC]
I love it, absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing this with us. Reminds me not only of who I love, but of people who used to love me. Β
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Stranger-lelluiah [2013-11-27 21:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh my word, your poem is so relate able. Thank you
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earllison [2013-06-11 03:57:11 +0000 UTC]
I love it!! x
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MsAngelus22 [2013-05-09 19:24:23 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully written <3
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blackwolf5496 [2013-05-01 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]
beautiful<3 I don't know how but u managed to capture my feelings for my love even though I haven't known him for very long
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Mad--Sparrow [2013-03-03 11:31:20 +0000 UTC]
These are the most beautiful words I have ever heard.
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Chaosgirl631 [2012-12-08 07:40:30 +0000 UTC]
It made me cry it sooooooooooooo pretty!!
;7 * sniff* ok ok it good
Great job it is amazing !!
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taichitwo [2012-11-21 23:27:13 +0000 UTC]
really beautiful words .
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Karmaslove [2012-11-14 10:07:25 +0000 UTC]
this is verry well written its left me speachless...i could easily see this as someones wedding vows ...
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jenkinson94 [2012-09-12 12:24:56 +0000 UTC]
What a lovely poem. I cried when I read this poem. It reminded me of my ex boyfriend who I skill love
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AriaApocalypse1727 [2012-09-06 15:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Reading this poem brought me to tears...I can relate so much to it and it's the most beautiful love poem i have read yet,I'm quite jealous(: You're an excellent poet and some day I hope to be as good as you. Keep up the impeccable work!
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Talmenar [2012-09-06 03:42:44 +0000 UTC]
totally..... except that I met this person when I was like seven, so at first I could really care less about him. but the more and more I spend time with him, the more I realize what a great guy he really is!
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Chibi-Momoro [2012-08-28 02:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Is it okay if i post this on my journal?
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Marsiline16 [2012-06-14 21:52:52 +0000 UTC]
i really love this one...x3
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Lovlyday [2012-05-09 04:27:55 +0000 UTC]
Love is lak de sea. It's uh movin' thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from de shore it meets, and it's different with every shore" - Their eyes were Watching God, Zora Neale Hurston
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JayEff97 [2012-04-04 21:47:13 +0000 UTC]
I wish she feels the same as I do.
When I read her this tomorrow I wish she knew,
That I love her so much as she loved me too.
Why, you ask? I don't have a clue.
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Dragonair13 [2012-02-14 03:51:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.. I've been wanting to tell my crush how much I love him this Valentine's, but I can't summon up the courage.. I think I'll try to tell him through writing, because I'm to ashamed to say through words. I hope he understands..
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happykt [2012-02-11 04:10:06 +0000 UTC]
AHHHHHH!!!! so true
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melxrumple [2011-11-29 04:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Aren't some of these parts in an already-made poem?!?!?! :/
"Do you love me?
Or do you not?
you told me once, but i forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true, so I can say that I love you.
Of all the guys I've ever met, you're the one, I won't forget.
And if I die before you do, I go to heaven and wait for you. "
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anushjan [2011-09-14 20:07:05 +0000 UTC]
love it love it
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Johhy55 [2011-08-04 10:18:27 +0000 UTC]
Sweet poem!
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KaoticRogue [2011-08-02 14:42:03 +0000 UTC]
It's so beautiful x3
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HarleyDavidson1 [2011-05-21 10:10:57 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing, its so true and flows with ease, its also very easy to read.
i love it!!!! !!!! your very good!
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dragongirl7777777 [2011-05-15 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]
its is sooo amazing i love to right poems but im no were near as good as you this is verry nice hehe love it!!! keep it up!
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MagellinaFluffQueen [2011-04-23 04:50:59 +0000 UTC]
"If I die before you do I'll go to Heaven and wait for you." That's really lovely.
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lovinhym4life [2011-04-12 16:46:16 +0000 UTC]
all i can say is wow. i have been writing poetry since i was seven and consider myself to have a talent but you obviously have way more of a talent . keep up the amazing work.
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InsaneMetal [2011-04-08 20:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Damn I almost cried reading this. Very well done! I love it!
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countrygirl29108 [2011-04-08 17:38:46 +0000 UTC]
amazingly beutiful
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ohyescesc [2011-04-07 23:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Hi you should join our group called love for the lovers! we'd love to see your poetry in our galleries. Check out the poetry contest and glance over the rules. Hope you join! [link]
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