sidluvsart [2006-08-11 08:17:14 +0000 UTC]

awesum!!

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FirstDayOfMyLife [2006-07-01 07:03:26 +0000 UTC]

I love this. The not-so-much punctuation really does give it a sense of urgency. So ing it

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WordsintheHead [2006-06-30 16:03:23 +0000 UTC]

well in this good ol' town we have little white posters stuck into the grass on every lawn that has been treated by pesticides in the great war against dandillions and overall health. one night i was biking through a parking lot of a mall and they had a big truck spraying (LATE at night minf you) and it was in the wind and i couldn't get away. i felt totally at bay. felt disgusting, i couldn't beleive that people just don't understand that it is a poison meant to kill biological organisms and we just spray it around as if it were a water gun fight. .......... insane people. let's play in the poison.

anyway...

thank you for your great words, they are very appreciated, and yep its real.
i was just going to sit on the curb outside my house but the mosquitos were on me so i went for a walk around a few blocks instead. the mosquiots were everywhere anyway. luna followed along in the shadows and occasionally stopped to investigate other people's porches. i'm probably going to do this again but in other areas. or just move on to other ideas completely.

-love

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anextraordinarygirl [2006-06-30 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]

THAT




is called art in motion. You were writing this as you walked around town without shoes, and with a cat?? That's all real?? because you described it perfectly, like your thoughts simply are the poem. I love it. by favorite parts:

"finally a car get off the road"
"Black cat get off pesticide grass!" but how did you know it was pesticide grass?
"Can opened somewhere, beer?
Voices, beer voices?"

All this sounds like the running dialog in my head when I'm alone walking around. I'm SO ing this!

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