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WisesnailArt In reply to LotteBubbles [2011-12-26 13:50:26 +0000 UTC]
First of all, thanks a lot for taking the time to give me your feedback! <3 It's really helpful to know how people perceive my work! C:
Mwahahah, I know it's embarassing, but I don't have a wise explanation about the shadows... X3 The smartaft one is that they are INSIDE the Ark (or the Nemesis, if you prefer...C; ), but they're using a holographic something to project a fake background to create a more Christmassy atmosphere! C;
In truth you're right, I shouldn't have drawn them, but I'm too lazy to redo the floor and, most importantly, my old laptop doesn't have the strenght to survive something like that... c;
Anyway, I'm super happy you find them to be IC! I'm always afraid my chibi aren't expressive enough, but if you can tell that Ratchet is being mischievous, Bluestreak uber-determined and Starscream conflicted... well, it means I', doing something right! C;
Thanks a lot again! <3 I hope you did find a cute Tf in your stocking! C;
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LucasVN [2011-12-24 02:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This proved to be so much more than what the preview with the Seekers implied.
First and foremost, I like how you stayed true to each character's personality, rather than allowing OOCness. In the end, it a lot funnier. xD Ratchet and Prowl are the funniest, IMO, as well as Screamer. But, is TC sleeping?
As for the art itself, your chibi style has got to be one of the most effective on dA. What I like is how manage to make the young/wild ones look like sparklings in this style, while making the polar opposites, Prowl and Ratchet, look just as mature and same-as-before, all with the same form. (The fact that some end up looking like they're wearing diapers is also funny.)
Overall, I like your handling of shadows and highlights. The one thing I do find problematic are the shadows of those in front of the wall that appear to have no light source.
AS a whole, a fun Christmas piece. Merry Christmas. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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WisesnailArt In reply to LucasVN [2011-12-26 14:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Wahhh, thanks for the critique! C:
First, the shameful admission: I did mess up the shadows. Sigh.
To tell the truth I won't probably be able to amend them, 'cause 1) I'm lazy and 2) my old Takepon (the laptop) won't let me. As I said somewhere, it's not very reliable... T_T
But I can give you the same smartaft explanation I gave :userLottle-Bubbles1990: : they're inside the Ark (or the Nemesis), but they're using a holographic projector or something to create a more Christmassy atmosphere... C; So the shadows don't come from the light of the moon, but the ship's own lights! C;
(and so WHY the tfs behind the wall don't have any shadow? Clearly they escaped, like it happened to Peter Pan once... xD )
Anyway... You made me very happy telling me you find them IC, and even more saying they're "effective chibi": I've never consciously thought about it, but it makes sense that, trying to keep them IC, I make some TFs uber cute and some more adult-like... C:
So thanks again, and before I forget: TC isn't really sleeping, it's more like he's experimenting the drowsiness that follows a good amount of Energon... c;
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LucasVN In reply to WisesnailArt [2011-12-27 01:07:15 +0000 UTC]
A reasonable excuse. xD
And I saw that someone else added to what I gave you.
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TheNinjaWolf123 [2016-12-13 20:37:25 +0000 UTC]
GET UP HERE BUMBLEBEE SLOWPOKE!
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AirStrikeTF [2015-09-23 17:49:17 +0000 UTC]
But where are Optimus and Megatron?
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WisesnailArt In reply to AirStrikeTF [2015-10-27 21:27:12 +0000 UTC]
They're bickering in a corner, out of view! C;
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pokemoncrazy2 [2015-08-07 14:06:34 +0000 UTC]
so cute!!!!!!
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steampunkassassin33 [2014-05-03 22:05:54 +0000 UTC]
Tell me I'm not he only one that noticed Santa photo-bombing them in the far right?
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-07 01:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: Yup. Wanna help?
Sides: *gets hit in the head by a 'random' wrench* OW!!
HAHAHAHA! Are you okay?
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-07 04:18:52 +0000 UTC]
Of course~ *grabs handfuls of snow and pats it into the bottom ball*
TC: XD Hahaha!!
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-07 20:47:31 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: We need a hat!
Sides: Gee, thanks for the sympathy.
I asked if you were okay! Besides, just because there's a ceasefire, doesn't mean they aren't assholes.
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-07 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Uh... Oooh! We can use this!! *grabs Sunny's empty paint can* See!
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-07 23:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Sunny: Wait that's not-*paint can is on Prowl's head* ...empty.
Prowl: *sighs*
Hey Blue, how are those stockings coming along?
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 00:05:44 +0000 UTC]
*covers mouth to stop from laughing*
Blue: Stockings? I;m just hanging these thingys.
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 01:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: *doesn't even try to keep from laughing* Sorry!
Prowl: *sighs again* No you aren't...
They're called stockings, silly! Hang mine next to yours, okay?
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 02:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Prowl: Can I get out now?
Jazz: *sighs exaggeratedly* I guess so...
Prowl: *falls as he's getting out* ...Oh, screw it, I'll get up later.
Snowmaker: FZZZTT! *spits out a ton of snow on Blue's head*
Blue! Are you okay?
Bee: Ha! I made it! *get hit by snow and knocked off* Darnit! I'm going inside! *stomps off*
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 02:30:07 +0000 UTC]
*starts laughing*
Blue: ......... *shakes helm, snow throwing everywhere*
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 02:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Prowl: *gets up and goes in* Ugh, I'll be inside. I don't like snow...
Starscream: HEY! Keep that stuff OFF of me!
*climbs up on the wall* You want help with the stockings?
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 03:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Aw, but baby!!
Blue: *sticks tongue out at Starscream* Yes please, Steampunk~
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 03:52:43 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: Scar, he's inside already...party pooper. *rolls up another snowman*
Hand me mine!
Starcream: Oh I'll-
TC:*grabs arm* Ceasefire, remember? The pros outweigh the cons. You can blast holes in him another time.
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 03:55:58 +0000 UTC]
*helps* Sometimes I wonder why I love him...
Blue: *hands it over*
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 21:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: *shrugs* You're an unlikely couple, I'll say that much.
Thank you! *ties it next to his* There! ...*looks up at Blue* What do you want for Christmas?
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 21:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I guess we are...
Blue: Uuuummm... I dunno. The war to end?
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 21:59:50 +0000 UTC]
*laughs a bit* Now the nezt question is if he questions why he loves me sometimes.
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 22:01:43 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: *laughs*
Blue? Sorry, I don't think I can get you that... but I'm sure I'll think of something! *laughs*
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 22:13:29 +0000 UTC]
*looks at where the paint hit the snow* Poor Prowl. Covered in paint.
Blue: Oh...
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steampunkassassin33 In reply to Tflover323 [2014-12-08 22:15:12 +0000 UTC]
Jazz: Eh, he'll get over it. It's not like he hasn't been covered in paint before.
Yeah, sorry. If you think of anything more manageable, well...you know my number. *laughs awkwardly*
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Tflover323 In reply to steampunkassassin33 [2014-12-08 22:41:07 +0000 UTC]
So, have you listened to Miracle of Sound much?
Blue: *blushes*
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