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Whaaa!
You have pretty guitar, i really like the color ^_^ I'm jealous
I'm thinking about buying a guitar, but I'm scared...
What if I fail to learn and play well...
Is it hard to learn how to play by yourself?
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thanks, well it's actually my sista's hahaha
I dont play guitar, I cant lol, my sista does lol
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As you placed this into the No Mercy folder that means you want a brutally honest Critique from #thephotographyunion
just a guitar.. Funny comment. Are you asking the viewer not to take it too seriously. Not to be critical of your work? You need to be braver when you drop an image into No Mercy. Calm down. I like you image. I've been trying to figure out why it looks to overworked. It might be a small image scaled up and smoothed out to look better. It might be an image that just has the living heck Photoshopped out of it. A good part of that comes from the excessive blur applied to the bed while the guitar is still sharp. It makes the guitar float unnaturally above the rest of the image imformation. And so, it feels like something happened to it. That having been said, I really like the color statement. Whether it's created or recorded and accurate, the contrast of guitar to bed linen is very painterly. You chose colors that are very close to opposite in the color spectrum which make for such a strong reaction between them. The composition works too. It's artifically close to centered but just a little off. The darkness of the floor off the edges of the bed give the image depth and balance against the broad areas of color in the guitar. I went through your gallery looking for other images that you may have worked as heavily as this one and could find none. It's an interesting effort at a highly edited image. Flaws yes but worth taking a bit of time with.
M
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thank you so much for the wonderful critique above .
well,, actually at that time, I just didnt know what to write on that artist comment box, but now I know what exactly to write.
may be I can share a bit story behind the picture, how I photoshopped it and so on.
and thank you so much that you liked my image, I do appreciate that.
as you already knew, I photoshopped that image. I took some blur effects, adjusted the contrast and the brightness.
I didnt expected that that current picture was so much better than the original one.
anyway, the one who took the guitar image wasnt me, it was my sista. All I did is photoshopped it.
sorry that you could find none better than this, I'm an amateur one, Idk much about photography, thats why I became the photography unions member, I want to improve my photography skill, so oneday I can be a proffesional photographer one
or as not I know how to do a good base shot. well,, I'll do better in my next picture.
thanks, you've been such as great help.
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Thank you for my new Llama. I herded him over into the pen with the two others I've been given.
M :@)
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ya,, llamas re kool !!! hahahah
*does the llama dance*
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Wow, I'm gonna have to get out the shovel and basket. I can barely get through here without collecting LlamaDoo on my running Shoos.
M
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hahahahha
you have to collect them all, do not miss even one mwahahahahah
actually Im so happy this current week coz The Yogyakarta university of technology has accepted me !!! yay!!!
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Congratulations!! What will you study?
m
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Informatics? What is informatics?
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OMG, I meant Information management hahah
umh..,,Idk much about it actually...,,well..In short, information management entails organizing, retrieving, acquiring and maintaining information. It is closely related to and overlapping with the practice of Data Management. yep thats I know...
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