Comments: 6
Talongrasp [2013-11-19 14:16:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very cute, and elegant! ^w^ Nicely done!
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doomduncan99 [2012-01-08 07:37:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is rly good.
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Falchia [2011-11-13 03:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Critique time! My main and probs the only bone to pick is that Minnie is looking very animu here. Like with lycoris, I agree that her smile is really bothering me. If you look at reference pictures for Mickey and Minnie, their mouths stretch all the way from one cheek to another. I bet if you were to lengthen her smile to be roughly that length and patch the shading of her lower face so it won't look so flat, it'll be fine~ Got some proportional issues with her nose. Nothing too big, but it's noticeable.
And I do believe you're still rushing. Considering how neat and clean your lines are, I don't think the areas where one color runs onto another and those blank spots that have yet to be colored, are meant to be intentional and stylistic.
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lycoris-moon29 [2011-11-13 02:10:35 +0000 UTC]
Lol, right, a critique~
Considering this is the first time you've drawn an anthropomorphic character before, I think this is amazing! I think if I had to pick something out I didn't like, I'd say it is her smile. xD Honestly I can't find anything wrong with this.
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