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Published: 2007-08-31 01:17:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Oh Tree,
Why must you twist and bend?
Why are your branches so out of place,
like red in blue?
Who are you, Tree?

Oh Tree,
Why are your leaves so brown and dead?
Why aren't they green, and full of life?
Why are you so twisted, tree?
Is it my fault, Tree?

Oh Tree,
Why aren't you perfect?
Why must you reside in darkness,
that of which cannot be seen by any mortal?
Goodbye, Tree
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Comments: 7

Pirate-King-Jing [2007-09-01 23:10:31 +0000 UTC]

lol. I thought you saw a tree and got inspired to write about a tree...... oh well. I still like it!

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veXchu In reply to Pirate-King-Jing [2007-09-02 00:25:52 +0000 UTC]

lol, Well thanks!

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Pirate-King-Jing In reply to veXchu [2007-09-02 13:38:09 +0000 UTC]

well, you can always hope that someone sees a tree and gets inspired! but it was quite good.

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one-of-my-lies [2007-08-31 03:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Did you get the idea for the metaphor from Norse mythology?

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veXchu In reply to one-of-my-lies [2007-08-31 03:20:07 +0000 UTC]

No. But someone else asked me that too.

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one-of-my-lies In reply to veXchu [2007-08-31 03:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Because of Yygdrasil! I actually would've been really impressed with you if you had said yes. (I should probably say additionally impressed) You should've lied

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veXchu In reply to one-of-my-lies [2007-08-31 11:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh...damn. -.-

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