Samatati [2012-06-12 03:23:45 +0000 UTC]
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Very nice sprite!To me, that yellow on the sphere doesn't look very shaded, but that may be just because it's yellow. I also feel like that sphere should be casting a shadow on the head of the chao.Actually, I feel that you could have stronger cast shadows all around, but that may be hard due to the size of this piece.The wings do appear a touch too big but have a very nice coloration to them.The legs of the chao look a little detached from the body because of the combination of the grey/blue line and the white area just below that line. Lightening the shade of the grey/blue line and making the white area not as large would solve this problem.Well Done! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Vertekins In reply to Samatati [2012-06-12 13:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique but I feel the need to iron-out a few things.The orb above the Chao's head is actually composed of light and as light is an intangible element, this is why I didn't make it cast a shadow on the Chao's head. The things that I believe you are referring to as wings are actually translucent growths on the sides of the Chao's face or are the translucent parts on it's arms that serve as hands (Chaos Chao in the Sonic games don't actually have wings unlike other Chao, just translucent parts on their arms and heads. It makes them look "Special" I suppose, as Chaos Chao are unique and immortal)I completely agree with the last part, I too feel on second look that the stomach area is detracting from the feet and the feet look odd. I'll see if I can make it look better and not so distracting.
Samatati In reply to Vertekins [2012-06-12 17:54:26 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Sorry, didn't know that about chaos.
Vertekins In reply to Samatati [2012-06-12 17:56:10 +0000 UTC]
That's quite alright
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Hantabe [2012-06-12 03:14:32 +0000 UTC]
just beautiful! i think that you should make more of these and you will get more views too! sadsdasdasadsadssdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdddsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsdsd
DC111 [2012-06-12 02:12:03 +0000 UTC]
Cool!
red-ysetgo [2012-06-11 20:26:05 +0000 UTC]
This is adorable! ^^