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Published: 2004-02-22 03:39:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description Prodigy

Like the heat, the beats and emcees invade my psyche//
Head bobbin’ and hand shakin’, words flow within//
This lyricist will persist to resist materialistic cyst//
Write my rhymes that match the tymes of federal crymes//
Splitting skulls and bashing hulls, I’m hashing out murals//
Touch the heart with my art that tops the flow chart//
Sluggo and Ali show me the skills, sending thrills and chills//
So I step into the light and take flight into the night//
Soaring over the city like an unsolved mystery I deplete misery//
Raining on the ants with subliminal vocals and equal symbols//
Receding to the shadows, hearing my own echoes coming from the stereos//
With the turn of the day, my wordplay is getting radio play//
Hearing the fans from teens to queens sing-a-long with all my routines//
My time has come to leave the bottom with a debut album//
Down your spine I send a shiver while splitting your mind like a sliver//
My album has hit silver faster than any gangster//
An hour later, there is a new hater…collecting like moisture//
Now I walk the streets seen while I sip my nicotine and smoke my caffeine//
Women claw at my shirt during my concert, all acting like a flirt//
Today I’m the new flavor of the week that’s sheik, but soon will be an antique//
Toss me out back as I smack the ground like an unwanted snack//
This is untouching to my drive cause I hide my high tide//
Drowning the bitches and the witches in my literary stanzas//
If you are fake you need to jump into a lake and cease to be awake//

I am the hip hop prodigy, can’t you see that I’m heavenly//
Playing with your eardrums like a phantom with powerful venoms//
Let the pencil write and take my fight cause it’s more polite//
So let this sink in, sending you into a creative tailspin//

This shit ain’t whack, I will attack and attempt to hijack//
I’m not ghetto or a hardass, I just write fast with a powerful blast//
Many hate me for my complaints, claiming it taints and fades the paints//
I just might be too critical, but at least I’m logical and thoughtful//
Test the water before I jump in to swim with light being dim//
I survive cause I strive to be in the top five//
Late nights at the desk feeling burlesque and looking grotesque//
Shit, its 4 am now…I’m still awake somehow with a drowsy brow//
Clack away on the keys, the pop back up like buoys with now worries//
My insane theories can freeze even the toughest emcees//
I am the language puppeteer, outsmarting even Shakespeare with a grim sneer//
Writer’s block feels like a deadlock, but is merely a beanstalk//
Just pick up the axe and chop the crop with a war yawp//
Just take my advice cause I am precise and concise with every exercise//
Learn from my mistakes and lose the headaches, for christ sake//
Remember, third time’s a charm to disarm any harm//
That’s why I’m number THR33, the power charm with a verbal sidearm//
These kicks and snares send prayers to impair all despairs//
So just send me some respect, cause I suspect you reject some of my subject//
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Comments: 4

Lucychromosome [2004-02-24 01:18:19 +0000 UTC]

damn bitch...you got the flow

and this is even more exquisite......

So I step into the light and take flight into the night//
Soaring over the city like an unsolved mystery I deplete misery//
Raining on the ants with subliminal vocals and equal symbols

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Validus-Vox In reply to Lucychromosome [2004-02-24 03:34:23 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks...i guess i do have the flow...even at 4am...hehe...i think there might be more rhymes to come...peace

mike

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aural-autumn [2004-02-22 08:25:19 +0000 UTC]

wow when did you write this? must have been at the frat, so that means you are not coming home and i can pass out in your bed....dont worry this weekend i have been really down, but i am not going to make being here a habit. you need space and you need to not worry about me being there all the time. i felt like i was intruding, but tyler was as bored as me, so he liked the company and i liked seeing you briefly. what do you think?

Sluggo and Ali show me the skills, sending thrills and chills//
**if you recorded this i am sure they would be flattered.

My time has come to leave the bottom with a debut album//
**very very clever

Down your spine I send a shiver while splitting your mind like a sliver//
**this is a perfect way to describe what i feel when Atmos spits, but i have never been able to explain it well

Women claw at my shirt during my concert, all acting like a flirt//
**this woman already is...heh.

This shit ain’t whack, I will attack and attempt to hijack//
**very smooth line

Many hate me for my complaints, claiming it taints and fades the paints//
**i like the imagry

so whats with the number three and talk of third time? i missed something. also, you lie, (if you wrote this last night)it wasnt 4am...you were asleep in my arms at that time...heh.

i like this, as I like everything. i would love to see you rhyme and rap this way more emo style. some real feelings and some less ego. this is good, but I know you got the Slug in ya. peace, tiffany

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Validus-Vox In reply to aural-autumn [2004-02-23 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

and im number three cause third times a charm, read the previous line to it and then you should get it...kind of like slug calling him self se7en...thats where i got the idea

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