Validus-Vox In reply to Lucychromosome [2004-02-24 03:34:23 +0000 UTC]
haha, thanks...i guess i do have the flow...even at 4am...hehe...i think there might be more rhymes to come...peace
mike
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aural-autumn [2004-02-22 08:25:19 +0000 UTC]
wow when did you write this? must have been at the frat, so that means you are not coming home and i can pass out in your bed....dont worry this weekend i have been really down, but i am not going to make being here a habit. you need space and you need to not worry about me being there all the time. i felt like i was intruding, but tyler was as bored as me, so he liked the company and i liked seeing you briefly. what do you think?
Sluggo and Ali show me the skills, sending thrills and chills//
**if you recorded this i am sure they would be flattered.
My time has come to leave the bottom with a debut album//
**very very clever
Down your spine I send a shiver while splitting your mind like a sliver//
**this is a perfect way to describe what i feel when Atmos spits, but i have never been able to explain it well
Women claw at my shirt during my concert, all acting like a flirt//
**this woman already is...heh.
This shit ain’t whack, I will attack and attempt to hijack//
**very smooth line
Many hate me for my complaints, claiming it taints and fades the paints//
**i like the imagry
so whats with the number three and talk of third time? i missed something. also, you lie, (if you wrote this last night)it wasnt 4am...you were asleep in my arms at that time...heh.
i like this, as I like everything. i would love to see you rhyme and rap this way more emo style. some real feelings and some less ego. this is good, but I know you got the Slug in ya. peace, tiffany
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Validus-Vox In reply to aural-autumn [2004-02-23 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]
and im number three cause third times a charm, read the previous line to it and then you should get it...kind of like slug calling him self se7en...thats where i got the idea
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