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Astrikos [2013-02-09 17:34:54 +0000 UTC]
Your touching literature has been featured here
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tiraluv [2012-08-03 21:13:41 +0000 UTC]
"It's also the tears I hide inside my blanket, just so you can't hear me cry." He didn't know my love was unconditional and he still doesn't know. Wish I didn't know either -_-;
This is another one of those spooky pieces that sounds exactly like my thoughts. Very nicely done.
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Big-The-ED [2012-01-04 14:18:43 +0000 UTC]
The line about the Dog caught me. Are you familiar with the horrifyingly beautiful story of Hachiko, the Akita who quite literally died of a broken heart, after waiting for 9 years at the train-station that his master(who passed away) would meet him at daily?
[link] In case you're interested.
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RainShineNightDay [2011-11-29 04:09:59 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. wow.
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Sana-girl [2011-11-20 03:29:11 +0000 UTC]
Im sorry for faving all of your stuff! I swear im just going through my inbox that is in sore need of being emptied, adn your stack (one ive been looking forward to) finally showed up.
This is a wonderful piece. Its just so true and everyone can relate to it in some way. Thats something most important in a poem- empathy. And you could make the most heartless person cry over something that its never felt before.
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facadestars [2011-10-15 04:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so true. This was very enjoyable to read. Amazing job!
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NathiiG [2011-09-12 23:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Love u girl!
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Texeo [2011-09-12 10:29:12 +0000 UTC]
I can so relate to this it's incredible... <3
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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Gaarberth [2011-09-22 13:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you...I really loved writing this. It's such a beautiful feeling, isn't it?
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enelysion [2011-09-11 13:43:32 +0000 UTC]
I love this. :/ So true. And really perfect.
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bbach [2011-09-11 12:36:25 +0000 UTC]
Phew...Listening to "Lisa Miskovsky - Still Alive (Mirrors Edge OST" while reading this suddenly brought tears to my eyes as I was eating my sandwich...
This was a beautiful moment.
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ReggerC [2011-09-11 10:43:44 +0000 UTC]
well guess what youre wrong
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musiclover422 [2011-09-10 03:58:01 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE this soooooo much
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DarkAngelicNightmare [2011-09-09 20:38:26 +0000 UTC]
THis is so deep. And so very true. Some times broken hearts don't heal...but sometimes the parts are close enough to glue back together. You just have to find the right kind of glue...
But duct tape works too.
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Capara123 [2011-09-09 19:35:57 +0000 UTC]
You did an amaing job, I love it! This is most definitely going into my favorites!
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becursed [2011-09-09 19:15:20 +0000 UTC]
Lovely
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seneleth [2011-09-09 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]
It's the feeling I get if I read great poetry.
You rock!
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TheGoryBananaFox [2011-09-09 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]
All of this is too true and has 'inspiration' written all over it.
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tehreema [2011-09-09 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow this actually made me cry..beautiful
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