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Description It's the song on the radio that reminds you of what you had and what you lost.
It's the smile that a baby gives when she is genuinely happy.
It's the sound of a laugh from someone who hasn't laughed in a long, long time.
It's the friend who still remembers you even if you call after fifteen years.
It's the last piece of chocolate saved for you in a box you thought was empty.
It's the gift that is exactly what you needed, when you needed it.
It's the two hour ride across town, just so she can see you before she leaves.
It's the dog who waits for you to come home, just to give you all the affection in the world.
It's the companionship one feels in silence when they have found their best friend.
It's the feeling of a warm blanket someone put on you after you fell asleep.
It's the boy who does the stupidest things in the world, just to see you laugh.
It's the girl who kisses you the way she has never ever kissed anyone before.
It's the woman who gives up her seat on the train to the old lady with a limp.
It's the man who helped a scared fifteen year old fix her broken down car.
It's the warmth you find in the arms of someone who truly loves you.
It's the very last inch of our most wonderful form of insanity.

It's also the forgiveness in my heart for the wound you left to heal.
It's also the way I would still die a thousand deaths, just to see you smile.
It's also the tears I hide inside my blanket, just so you can't hear me cry.

It's love. And it just won't leave me the hell alone.
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Astrikos [2013-02-09 17:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Your touching literature has been featured here

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Astrikos [2013-02-10 09:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Bless! Thank you so much!!

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Astrikos In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2013-02-10 20:48:07 +0000 UTC]

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tiraluv [2012-08-03 21:13:41 +0000 UTC]

"It's also the tears I hide inside my blanket, just so you can't hear me cry." He didn't know my love was unconditional and he still doesn't know. Wish I didn't know either -_-;

This is another one of those spooky pieces that sounds exactly like my thoughts. Very nicely done.

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looking-glass-pear [2012-03-12 10:15:51 +0000 UTC]

"It's the companionship one feels in silence when they have found their best friend"

I never knew that feeling until last year when I realised I DID have a best friend. Just not the: phone each other everyday, buy each other bracelets, have a sleepover kind of best friend, that I thought I'd have when I was little. But the kind of best kind of friend, where you can just look at each other and have a 10 minute conversation in the blink of an eye. it was wonderful!

SIGHH. LOVE. I don't think I've ever felt it. Or maybe I just haven't NOTICED that I've felt it yet. But I have an inkling of what it must be like! Makes you feel giddy with joy, and puke-your-guts-out sad...according to every song and every poem about love I've ever heard.

You'll be okay. I know so! I think everybody on earth has had their heart broken in one way or another, but they get by (with a little help from their friends). Unless they don't....in which case. It's very sad. But that's not the point! You're made of steel! STEEL! and Iron! IRON!

That's true actually! You have iron in your blood, anyway. Which means you also have iron in your HEART. which means you have a HEART OF IRON. which makes you IRON WOMAN. accomplice to IRON MAN. Who was REALLY STRONG, thus proving that you WILL be okay in the end.

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Big-The-ED [2012-01-04 14:18:43 +0000 UTC]

The line about the Dog caught me. Are you familiar with the horrifyingly beautiful story of Hachiko, the Akita who quite literally died of a broken heart, after waiting for 9 years at the train-station that his master(who passed away) would meet him at daily?

[link] In case you're interested.

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RainShineNightDay [2011-11-29 04:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. wow.

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Sana-girl [2011-11-20 03:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry for faving all of your stuff! I swear im just going through my inbox that is in sore need of being emptied, adn your stack (one ive been looking forward to) finally showed up.

This is a wonderful piece. Its just so true and everyone can relate to it in some way. Thats something most important in a poem- empathy. And you could make the most heartless person cry over something that its never felt before.

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TheAppleScientist [2011-10-17 21:21:14 +0000 UTC]

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facadestars [2011-10-15 04:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah, so true. This was very enjoyable to read. Amazing job!

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xlntwtch [2011-10-08 09:09:02 +0000 UTC]

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QuirkyToothbrush [2011-10-08 04:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Your work has been featured here: [link]

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little-ponies18 [2011-09-13 23:38:04 +0000 UTC]

I love this! Every single word resonated with me, and every single word is true.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to little-ponies18 [2011-09-22 13:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NathiiG [2011-09-12 23:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Love u girl!

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to NathiiG [2011-09-22 13:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Love you too!

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Texeo [2011-09-12 10:29:12 +0000 UTC]

I can so relate to this it's incredible... <3

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Texeo [2011-09-22 13:44:18 +0000 UTC]

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Texeo In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-26 00:51:36 +0000 UTC]

:3 i <3 hugs

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Gaarberth [2011-09-11 16:34:42 +0000 UTC]

So truly beautiful. So amazing. It's the kind of things you always wanna read over and over again. It has a magical feeling. I love it. It's incredibly!

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Gaarberth [2011-09-22 13:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...I really loved writing this. It's such a beautiful feeling, isn't it?

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Gaarberth In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-10-06 01:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Actually it is! It's a very, very beautiful feeling!

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enelysion [2011-09-11 13:43:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this. :/ So true. And really perfect.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to enelysion [2011-09-22 13:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bbach [2011-09-11 12:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Phew...Listening to "Lisa Miskovsky - Still Alive (Mirrors Edge OST" while reading this suddenly brought tears to my eyes as I was eating my sandwich...
This was a beautiful moment.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to bbach [2011-09-22 13:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for sharing that with me... That means a lot.

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ReggerC [2011-09-11 10:43:44 +0000 UTC]

well guess what youre wrong

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to ReggerC [2011-09-22 13:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

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Maerd7733SCAIP [2011-09-10 12:30:09 +0000 UTC]

There are no words to describe how beautiful and meaningful this is. Even with a happy topic like Love, you manage to turn it into something the readers will understand, because even if they haven't felt love yet (guilty) they can still relate. Wonderful job!

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Maerd7733SCAIP [2011-09-22 13:45:56 +0000 UTC]

If you haven't experienced it yet, you will very soon.

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Maerd7733SCAIP In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-24 22:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Here's hoping!

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musiclover422 [2011-09-10 03:58:01 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this soooooo much

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to musiclover422 [2011-09-22 13:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Krusnik03 [2011-09-09 23:24:38 +0000 UTC]

I like how you phrased the last sentence. It has a strong effect.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Krusnik03 [2011-09-22 13:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Awww....thank you!

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Krusnik03 In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-22 23:13:40 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. ^^

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DarkAngelicNightmare [2011-09-09 20:38:26 +0000 UTC]

THis is so deep. And so very true. Some times broken hearts don't heal...but sometimes the parts are close enough to glue back together. You just have to find the right kind of glue...
But duct tape works too.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to DarkAngelicNightmare [2011-09-22 13:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I love what you said there...duct tape works too.

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DarkAngelicNightmare In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-25 14:29:39 +0000 UTC]

well it does!
and thanks.

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Capara123 [2011-09-09 19:35:57 +0000 UTC]

You did an amaing job, I love it! This is most definitely going into my favorites!

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to Capara123 [2011-09-22 13:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Capara123 In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-23 01:28:49 +0000 UTC]

no prob!

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becursed [2011-09-09 19:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to becursed [2011-09-22 13:46:49 +0000 UTC]

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becursed In reply to UntamedUnwanted [2011-09-22 23:08:22 +0000 UTC]

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seneleth [2011-09-09 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]

It's the feeling I get if I read great poetry.

You rock!

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to seneleth [2011-09-22 13:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Thank you!

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TheGoryBananaFox [2011-09-09 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]

All of this is too true and has 'inspiration' written all over it.

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UntamedUnwanted In reply to TheGoryBananaFox [2011-09-22 13:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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tehreema [2011-09-09 18:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow this actually made me cry..beautiful

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