Comments: 21
Uinn In reply to realEmotion369 [2012-09-07 00:04:04 +0000 UTC]
I think I ruined the potential of this story... T_T Things became really really dark and disgusting on their own and instead of what could have been a simply tense and angsty atmosphere, I get a poisonous, really unhealthy one.
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realEmotion369 In reply to Uinn [2012-09-07 00:21:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't know about that.... I think you in all of your amazing writing skills could salvage it
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realEmotion369 In reply to Uinn [2012-09-07 21:24:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh, of course not. I think you should be putting all of your free writing time into the amazing world of Loi ^_^ I just think of this as a fun little side-project if you need a break or a distraction. Let me know if you ever decide to do anything with it ^_^
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realEmotion369 In reply to Uinn [2012-09-07 23:12:34 +0000 UTC]
Actually, this may be unrelated, but the other pseudo-side-story I'm interested in is the one concerning Lahbelle. I really want to know what happens there, especially after she gives birth. ^_^
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realEmotion369 In reply to Uinn [2012-09-08 20:29:19 +0000 UTC]
I'll be looking forward to her story too ^_^
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Cheetaur [2012-02-13 23:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, i love centaurs, thanks for sharing.
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Laitma [2012-01-03 21:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, I want to hear this story thoughh!!! (I also really like sad stories, but, but still!!)
It sounds so absolutely fascinating, wow! And the lighting for this is fantastic, I love the mood that lighting gives it, it really adds to the sense of this story being a depressing one... (and, it shows up fine on my laptop screen, hmm...)
But ahhhhh..... short tail, short tail... special something? homosexual centaur? oAo;;
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Uinn In reply to Laitma [2012-01-06 18:07:30 +0000 UTC]
This story has so many disturbing themes... there is fear, torture, humiliation, hate, revenge, insecurity >_> Why, brain? Whyy? T_T
Yeees, homosexual centaur! Married homosexual centaur couples have the shortened tail, to be more precise. (not always, though... in some other herds, it marks geldings)
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Laitma In reply to Uinn [2012-01-06 18:13:29 +0000 UTC]
Hahahahahah, that makes them so much more interesting! I like disturbing themes~ >D
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Uinn In reply to Laitma [2012-01-06 18:51:03 +0000 UTC]
....aaaand sex. I forgot to mention sex, too!
Well I guess I can try to give you a better summary in a note or something if you want XD
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Laitma In reply to Uinn [2012-01-06 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to hear all about it, please do tell me! 8D
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Alcka [2012-01-03 14:00:57 +0000 UTC]
J'aime beaucoup l'ambiance du dessin, et puis la description m'a fait rire pour les trois points du "pourquoi il peut le monter" >u>
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MensjeDeZeemeermin [2012-01-02 23:16:32 +0000 UTC]
Looks promising, and the story is interesting, but the image is so dark I have a hard time seeing anything.
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Uinn In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2012-01-03 14:02:10 +0000 UTC]
It is a night scene with moonlight so it is supposed to be quite dark... And the sketch was very rough and unfinished, so there are no details to see, really :/ As long as you can see the human and the centaur, with trees around, all is good. If you can't see them, maybe something is off with the angle or settings of your screen..?
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