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Hello, I have come to critique this drawing to help you improve for the future.
The first thing I have to point out is the overall drawing looks very messy and rushed.
The Line art in some places overlaps itself and makes it look very rushed. I'd recommend taking more time doing your line art so it looks more smooth and neat.
The anatomy on the elephant also looks weird in some places. the hand holding the gun looks fine, but the hand on the ground looks a little different and misshapen. I suggest you look up a few hand references to help you improve how you draw hands in the future, along with a few human or anthropomorphic animal references.
Coloring in this drawing is also very messy, in some places I can even see white spots by the seaweed and sea grass. I'd recommend taking more time coloring, even if all you're using is a bucket tool in some painting program.
Overall, this picture looks very rushed and it looks like you didn't put care and thought into this drawing. The anatomy is messed up by the hand, the coloring looks sloppy, and the line art is messy. I believe that you can improve if you listen to some of the suggestions I have made.
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I agree with everything you are saying but the problem is I had to rush because the stupid pen that I use for my old Bamboo tablet it was really hard to stretch the line pretty well and I and I and I you probably should know I did it last night so I should if you want me to start over again I would because two days ago I never got a chance to find my other pen for my Wacom tablet that that my mom pay $99 for it and I don't think the one that was $70 for it will help if I can find a way to adapt it to my other tablet but in that case if I able to draw it again I will I mean I know I can do better and it and I agree it does look a little sloppy and as I was hoping you would enjoy that but it's really hard to keep up with certain things with certain softwares and programs that I can't afford but I will make it look better I'll make sure of that and thank you for the tips anyway
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No problem. You don't have to change it, I just wanted to give you tips for the future. I know not everybody has the money for everything, but I know a good program you could use that is for free. Since you say that its hard to keep up with certain things on programs, I think it might help you get used to things, or at least help you with some art of yours maybe. If you want to check it out, its called medibang paint pro. I don't know if it will help with much, but I'd thought id recommend it to you if the program you are currently using is too complicated for you to handle.
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Well I'm using Autodesk sketch Pro in Gimp that's not really too much of a problem the problem is I'm using it my first tablet that is a bamboo tablet and the other tablet that I'm using is intubs tablet Β those are the only two Wacom tablets that I'm using but I'm missing the one for the second one I bought that was $99 now I need to find a PIN to replace it and I don't know how to convert the bamboo pens for the the other tablet using because the first one that was $80 was so small of the screen and I can barely stretch and reach the reach the scrolling pen I'm not really having trouble with a software too much it's just I'm having trouble drawing with the first tablet that was $80 not the Bamboo tablet
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Thank you for doing my request of a elephant in scuba gear for me.
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your welcome somebody made me a comment about how I work so fast on it but I think you might agreed to what he said but if you like it the way it is I'm happy to
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What's your favorite part about the elephant's scuba gear?
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Just the flippers the goggles and the gloves he really don't need a scuba suit he really has enough blubber to protect himself in the water just like his hippo brother he also have a rhinoceros brother I just hope you didn't mind me using my elephant character
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