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toyacr — is it the truth
Published: 2009-04-28 04:40:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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watch mewatch us
watch them
FAIL
stand there on your podium
watch the children cry
listen to the dreamers sing
sinigng as they die
they fall from the sunset
plummeting to earth
hopes and dreams arro'ed by pain
bleed their way to dawn
their boned litter the sky
sparkling like gems
polished by the morning light
graves of deceased fancies
stand there on your hilltop
view your censored world
it is sin's masquerade
life, love, peace, joy
know them without masks
death, hate, fear, sorrow,
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Comments: 11
Wow, this is brilliant. I really aspire to be able to write like you do one day. I like this a lot.
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you are a very intelligent writer
i love reading your stuff, put up some more!!!
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thank you!!
coming from you it is a serious compliment
i need more inspiration than religion class
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o thank you
and why, coming from me?
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because i think you are a very skilled writer
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Your poems always seem so intelligent and deep. They're ambiguous so it makes me think, but what I really love is that every person will get something different from reading your writing. Anyways, yeah, I liked this. ^-^
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thank you
i try to make them seem that way,but the best poetry can be interpreted for many people
i'm grateful that you tink of me in such high regard
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