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Published: 2005-07-27 01:40:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Rain,
A comforting sound that ends my silence.
A welcomed background noise
                to mask my sobs.
Droplets fall, but they are no match for my tears,
                And they can never sink to the ground as fast as my heart.

Rain, Lightning, Thunder, -my accomplices,
My mission-
                  Escape.
Run from the one who hurts me. . .
                                                   Myself.
A flash of lightning,
The crack of thunder,
A blanket of downpour,
                                  My one and only chance
. . .

Rain,
Now it pours out of my heart-
                                           falls from my neck,
                                                                       drips from my wrists.
Each drop hits the floor with a familiar sound-
The pitter-patter of my Red Rain.
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Comments: 4

Hope-Conspiracy [2005-07-27 03:54:15 +0000 UTC]

ooo, I liked that one alot. it had a kool structure, and I liked the use of the dashes and periods. nicely done!

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toxic36cf In reply to Hope-Conspiracy [2005-07-27 04:08:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks!...i had fun with this one...let go of my normal plain-ness. . .im glad you liked it

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Majestical [2005-07-27 01:45:18 +0000 UTC]

I really like this My favorite part? "Rain, Lightning, Thunder, -my accomplices, My mission- Escape. Run from the one who hurts me. . . Myself." Well Done!

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toxic36cf In reply to Majestical [2005-07-27 01:52:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you . . im glad you like it.
I enjoyed that part myself, well, writing it at least

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