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torn-pages — the memory of a goldfish

Published: 2005-08-16 12:28:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 744; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 43
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Description oxygen bubbles coated
by foam will burst
bewilderment shall set in
and then I will remember

it all began with water.
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Comments: 3

sumants [2005-08-17 09:20:32 +0000 UTC]

You're departing from a sedentary life? There's something else out there?

Short, crisp, and complete, except for a couple of truant punctuation marks. Cheers.

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cooper [2005-08-17 03:37:15 +0000 UTC]

I found this to be a rather enlightening and wholesomely wonderful writing! This is the kind of work Plicity needs! take care and be well

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b33lz3bub [2005-08-16 12:31:48 +0000 UTC]

the more i think about it, the more it says to me. good choice of image, too. kinda funny how its background is that blue, really suits your words, i find. *hugs*

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