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Jikan-Nenrei [2018-11-25 14:39:16 +0000 UTC]

I really like the effect of her disappearing in the dark water I think you did a great job on this part. But in my opinion the white ice cracks are a bit too present, to thick and white, I don't know, I find them quite distracting, would've toned them down a bit and not made them as white because like that they make the piece really flat. I hope you understand what I want to say. Maybe you should have put some more white on the edges of the piece so you get like a frame around the girl. This might have helped getting a better balance. I still like the peace though and I can imagine that it's really hard to draw ice properly.

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