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Published: 2009-05-01 03:08:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 3071; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 49
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Description EDIT: So i'm a bit shocked actually about people disliking the abs. Just so everyone knows, I did look at reference pictures of women, not body builders but just athletic/well trained, so women can and do have abs. Maybe mine are overly exaggerated, but I felt the slightly more intense lighting I tried to use here called for it. Maybe I'm just being overly sensitive, but I had also asked my usual team of people I have look at my pictures to tell me if anything looked strange and got no complaints. Is it aesthetics? Or really my own inability at this time to see my errors? Probably a combination of both. But yeah, regardless I give thanks and appreciate the time taken to comment, it means a lot. But I think for this image at least I would like to request no critiques, as it is a gift for someone and I'm well aware of various other shortcomings it has. Thank you!


OMGTHISISFINALLYFINISHED

This is a gift I've owed the wonderful Lynja ( a Random Ninjas "band aid" ) for far too long now for all of her help and kindness and friendship. <3 She asked for Nariko and Kai of Heavenly Sword, and after my numerous epic technical difficulties over the past year with my computer and life, finally I've finished her gift!


I kinda am at the phase where I've been looking/working on this for pic for too long to like it, I keep seeing little things that didn't turn out quite how I wanted. >< But anyway, I'm gunna focus and comment on the things I do like!


Obviously, Nariko's insanely awesome hair, which I decided to make even longer and insane that it is supposed to be, because I'M INSANE. XD Haha no it was so fun and confusing and challenging.. I don't know how many of you have seen or really looked at the design for Nariko's hair, but it like.. twirls/twists upon itself... I don't know how to explain it.. but yeah it's insane. XD I also like how Kai came out. <3 I don't even care if her pose looks strange, because I tried so hard to find a reference of what I thought was a simple squatting pose, but no, nothing... so I just did it in the mirror and tried to draw it to best of my abilities. But yeah I love how her hat came out, and I totally wanted to capture her during her weird random "staring at her friends the dust particles(?)" ( I know Kai, I'm amazed by the dust particles too! ) moments. XDD I also like how the Heavenly Sword came out, or at least the bit you can see. XD; Oh and her lil hip armor thing too... I got the textures I wanted so that's a happy thing.

The "background" is not really anything, but kinda just supposed to look like clouds or smoke, as to me at least, there seemed to be a lot of yellow in the game so that's what i chose to use. I was gunna smear some black ink too, but liked how it looked without it so decided to do it in the end.

Nariko's outfit was a bit of a pain. D: It seems like the subtle colors of the fabric change depending on the lighting, so I just used pretty much all the colors. XDDD Also I couldn't quite tell what the equally subtle design is supposed to be.. so I went with swirly clouds... I just hope it looks ok, I was afraid it just turned out like a big mess. :I I'm not quite sre I like Nariko's face anymore.. it was great up until I colored it, which his weird... usually I fuck things up in inking and then attempt to fix it in coloring. XD; I do like the way the skin shading came out, like the harsher lighting i tried to do this time. <3


Anyhoo she likes it, I like it ( used to love it but as I said, been looking at it for too long XD ), hope all of you like it too. ^^ I want to do more HS fanart~~ <333 Even if the game is pathetically short, I love it~~~


Done with prisma color pencils, white ink
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Comments: 43

bishoujosavior [2014-07-16 14:46:31 +0000 UTC]

I miss these two!
And as for the abs, they are not bad.  When you have ridiculously grotesque muscle girls that look like behemoths in other art, you come to appreciate more reasonable muscle tone.

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TonomuraBix In reply to bishoujosavior [2014-07-17 18:36:15 +0000 UTC]

I miss them too! It was a really good game, even if it was really short. Yeah anytime I look at this picture (or photos of women with abs) I always remember this heated debate here haha. Thank you!

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ll-En1gMa-ll [2011-07-28 05:57:13 +0000 UTC]

How long has Nariko had Kitanabs?

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TonomuraBix In reply to ll-En1gMa-ll [2011-08-07 04:13:17 +0000 UTC]

always and forever

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Master-of-the-Boot [2011-02-05 09:27:19 +0000 UTC]

I love this drawing and I love the abs. Fit women all he way!

Yep, two girls I don't wanna mess with.

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TonomuraBix In reply to Master-of-the-Boot [2011-02-27 00:38:46 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you!! ^^

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RoseRosespine [2009-06-28 23:00:59 +0000 UTC]

So cute! , i love nariko and kai, this works is so beatuful!

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TonomuraBix In reply to RoseRosespine [2009-07-08 11:11:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!!

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RoseRosespine In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-08-25 20:11:27 +0000 UTC]

you're so welcome!

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Caneleb [2009-06-02 08:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Thev red haired one vividly reminds me a the desert women form the legend of Zelda. Garudos.

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TonomuraBix In reply to Caneleb [2009-06-03 07:29:19 +0000 UTC]

hm i dunno if i've ever seen her.

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LA-Draws [2009-05-17 04:20:49 +0000 UTC]

This is sooooo gorgeous x33 I love the detail in the hair, and the little crouched character is just so cute X3

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TonomuraBix In reply to LA-Draws [2009-05-19 01:26:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks so so much!

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LA-Draws In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-19 01:35:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome x3

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hawkdaughter [2009-05-04 15:07:47 +0000 UTC]

The abs look alright to me. I love the woman standing 'in front.' This is a really awesome piece. Keep up the awesome work.

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TonomuraBix In reply to hawkdaughter [2009-05-05 02:43:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks much!!

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Disasterpiece18 [2009-05-02 16:11:36 +0000 UTC]

WOW. Amazing coloring

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TonomuraBix In reply to Disasterpiece18 [2009-05-02 23:05:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!!

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sirukiu [2009-05-02 04:07:45 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty badass. The way you colour your pictures blow my mind. Honestly. The sword looks amazing, I dont know the character names but I do know that they look amazing. Her hair flowing looks so epic, and the background adds so much movement. Amazing. Seriously.

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TonomuraBix In reply to sirukiu [2009-05-02 05:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it!

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YumeSupernova [2009-05-01 14:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit, the hair!

I've gotta say, the uber-sixpack is a *little* much in my opinion... but overall, this pic is freakin' great!

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TonomuraBix In reply to YumeSupernova [2009-05-02 02:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

And ahhh the abs, everyone seems a bit put off by them?? But I know it's hard for women to have such defined abs, but they do exist, I did look at many reference pix. XD; ( for example [link] ) This character is a warrior, trained all her life to fight, and while that doesn't mean she'd have abs like that, I myself thought it was sexy. ^^

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YumeSupernova In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-05 04:38:33 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I could see where that would come in. ^^

Yeah, she reminds me a lot of the huge warrior woman from Rune Soldier (lol I love that show). I really recommend that show if you haven't seen it already. It's freakin' hilarious!

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TonomuraBix In reply to YumeSupernova [2009-05-05 05:50:50 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yeah i don't know if i've heard of it

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YumeSupernova In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-05 23:21:08 +0000 UTC]

I hadn't really heard of it until I saw it at a friend's apartment before a D&D game. But yeah, I watched it and instantly fell in love! Now I'm trying to find fansubs on isohunt. XD

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TheArta [2009-05-01 08:48:15 +0000 UTC]

I agree with everyone about the hair - it is insanely great! Though the body is a bit too much for me.. I always like pale and skinny people, that is maybe why.

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TonomuraBix In reply to TheArta [2009-05-02 02:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much!! Haha well, she is supposed to be a warrior, trained all her life to fight, so I didn't want to draw her very waif like.

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TheArta In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-02 09:57:36 +0000 UTC]

She does look like a warrior. ^^

:]

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Frazzled-Niya [2009-05-01 08:41:19 +0000 UTC]

i likes how you did the hair @_@

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TonomuraBix In reply to Frazzled-Niya [2009-05-02 02:01:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks much! ^^

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Frazzled-Niya In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-08 06:32:22 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Noss91 [2009-05-01 08:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Loving this pic... the hair looks awesome!
The coloring allover is great, and I like the faces!
But again, the belly... it so much crashes into my eyes and stabs them with a sharp object xD
Because if you look at photos of women.. look at well trained women, almost none of them have those squares shown so obviously. Unless they are bodybuilders, and this one surely doesn't look like one (:
So it feels to me like you put a man's belly on her or something. I also have to whine about that her arms, if you tried making them look muscular, they look rather thick and short instead, like the hands do.

Umm... even if this whining is long, it's just a tiny, tiny part of the picture, and it doesn't matter much (: It took me pretty long time 'til I noticed, as I was reading the description and checking things out accordingly xD
Still, lovely colors and coloring and... all those other things I mentioned already (: Nice work!

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TonomuraBix In reply to Noss91 [2009-05-02 02:01:00 +0000 UTC]

Firstly, thanks so much for your input!! I really appreciate the time and attention you take to commenting.

And I'm sorry, I feel like I'm going to sound like a defensive nutjob, but i DID look at pictures of women, and not body builders but specifically ones with similar body types that I wanted to draw her as ( her for example [link] ). And then took into consideration the more intense lighting I wanted to attempt, so they came out pretty embellished. The arms I agree tho could be better, and the reason they look short is because they're supposed to look slightly raised or kinda bent back rather, but that's another failure on my end for not illustrating it properly.

But yeah, thank you again, and I'm sorry if I sound over defensive. ;_;

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Noss91 In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-02 08:48:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem! (:

The thing with the bellies are those black lines you make, if you'd make it with shade only, it would look softer and more like a female body. And since those lines are rather straight too, it looks a little bit like they've been cut up... anoo, sorry for breaking your journal-rule but I really want to make myself clear (: It's not the squares I'd like you to skip, but the lines, it makes them look too hard.

Nevermind the arms then, it's pretty hard giving them perspective, rly! I'm practicing that myself atm xD

Don't worry (: It's good that you explain how you meant it to be, rly! ^^

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TonomuraBix In reply to Noss91 [2009-05-02 09:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh alright I understand what you mean. And no no it's ok, it's only something I've been feeling recently. Thanks again!

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Noss91 In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-02 13:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Good (: You're welcome!

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Boofrickittyhoo [2009-05-01 04:06:52 +0000 UTC]

I love that hair of insane doom!!

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TonomuraBix In reply to Boofrickittyhoo [2009-05-02 01:44:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!

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vangelisgenesis [2009-05-01 03:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Kai was so fun XD and she's super adorable in this! tho Nariko's hair kicks major ass.... <33!

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TonomuraBix In reply to vangelisgenesis [2009-05-02 01:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Kai is so fun~ I luvs her, the crazy. XD Thanks!

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vangelisgenesis In reply to TonomuraBix [2009-05-03 17:07:28 +0000 UTC]

XD you're welcome!

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MaryTonomura [2009-05-01 03:58:14 +0000 UTC]

I really love your traditional art...
my respects for you... yeah

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TonomuraBix In reply to MaryTonomura [2009-05-02 01:43:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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