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Description *RING-RING!*

*RING-RING!*

*RING-RING-CLICK!*

"Uh, hello? Uhh, hello-hello? Uh, hello and welcome to you new job at Freddybear's Fantasy Land, the latest and most joyful play-place of all time! As you can see, this place is fairly different from our sister location, Fredbear's Family Diner, in that we now have 4 animatronics, plus 2 extra Spring-Suits, Spring Bonnie and Spring Fredbear.

These new animatronics are based off the characters from the television sheowwe made called Fredbear and Friends. These new animatronics are Freddybear, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy. Now, we've had some... difficulties with these animatronics in the past, but the kinks have all been fixed. The manufacturers even redesigned them a little bit, to be more kid-friendly and... safe. They actually used to have a thing called a self-defense mechanism, but that ended up making them unstable and dangerous, so they modified it to protect other people, and made them MUCH more durable internally, so that they wouldn't be broken so easily. If anything... unwanted occurs, expect these things to be at your side. Now, this technology is still new, so it may crash and they'll need to be rebooted. In the scenario that happens, there's a computer room downstairs, linked to each animatronic, excluding the extra spring suits. Just use the computers to reboot them. Oh, and they move during the night, checking things out. The only real reason why you're here is to make sure their systems don't crash. We're still working on it, but we've already spent a fortune on them, and we're almost on the verge of bankruptcy. Anyway, there's also a camera system which you can use. There's even on-board cameras inside the animatronics, which will still work even if the animatronics' programming crashes. You'll be able to see what they see, which is useful in case you can't find them. Anyways, that's all for now. Just keep track of them, and make sure nobody breaks in. Later!"

*CLICK!*

"Well, that's good to know." David said to himself. David Katowski was the first security guard to work at this new facility. It was originally going to be a pizzeria, but after some issues with the companys's co-founder, they changed it to a play-place attraction.

David left from his office and walked down the hallway. He then found himself in a large, circular room, with multiple rooms around it featuring various games and arcade machines. In the center were two animatronics: Freddybear and Bonnie. They were slightly taller than David, and fairly cartoonish looking. Freddybear was holding a cane, and Bonnie was holding a microphone. Behind them was another microphone and a red guitar, which looked like it was specially made to be played by an animatronic, with fake strings and a small, hidden speaker on it.

"Huh. Cute." David said casually. He found the animatronics a bit to... "childish" in design. He expected them to be scarier and more intimidating.

"How did they even BUILD these fuckers?! I've never even SEEN robots like these." David said to himself as he walked towards Freddybear to take a close look...

...only for the robot to jerk its head towards him, staring David dead in the eye. David fell over as both Freddybear and Bonnie came to life. They stared at him, analyzing him...

"...wh-why are they looking at me like that?" David though to himself, slightly nervous.

Just then, Bonnie moved his hand toward Davids' face. David closed his eyes, fearing he was gonna get hit...

...only to notice the animatronic was holding it's hand out, palm open. David nervously held its hand, only to for it to be yanked, lifting his body up.

David was helped back onto his feet. He looked at the animatronics, who then seemingly went back to "sleep".

"Seriously, who MADE these things?!" David thought to himself.

He looked around, and found another robot: An animatronic Chicken, which clearly looked female, with it's hourglass figure and large hips. She had feathers on her head that were positioned to look like hair. She wore a bib labelled "EAT!" and she had on an orange bikini, the same color as her lower legs.

Needless to say, David was a little uncomfortable.

"Do they REALLY think that thing's "kid-friendly"? She looks raunchy as hell!" David said to himself quietly. He took one step closer, and the animatronic immediately "woke up". David was startled once more, as Chica moved her head and looked at him coldly...

...then waved hello, and put on a happy facial expression.

David awkwardly waved back, unsure why they would program an animatronic to wave like that. He then started taking a look at the other rooms. He found another stage, much like the one where he found Freddybear and Bonnie. This stage also had animatronics, but they weren't standing. They were slumped to the ground, lifeless. They were both golden, and seemed slightly hollow. One was a fat bear and the other was a tall, thin bunny with a creepy grin. These animatronics were drastically different in design from the other animatronics. Their shells weren't sown together, but rather had a squishy-looking casing. David then noticed the sign above the room, which read "STAGE 01". David, creeped out by the yellow suits, left the room, and continued to wander around. Soon, he found a room called "Pirate Island". It was designed to look like an island, and in the center was a wrecked pirate ship, and on board was one single animatronic:

A red fox animatronic, with a hook and eye-patch as well as brown shorts. It also had razor-sharp teeth. Just then, it turned around, and looked at him, with the same cold, dead stare...

...and then got off the ship, and walked towards David, and began to twitch uncontrollably with every step...

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Comments: 54

TommyProductionsInc In reply to ??? [2017-01-14 17:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Only as long as you credit me for the characters themselves.

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emreelden In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2017-01-14 18:22:16 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Thaphoe [2016-01-27 21:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I made some prototype versions of the FNaF characters too!

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to Thaphoe [2016-01-27 22:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I'll take a look.

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Thaphoe In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-27 23:06:35 +0000 UTC]

I didn't post them here tho. I should have been more clear.

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to Thaphoe [2016-01-28 04:02:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh. You should.

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Thelordish [2016-01-18 06:34:39 +0000 UTC]

2 questions,

1:did you really invent and writre all this stuff down?

2:WTF does "raunchy" mean???!!!

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to Thelordish [2016-01-18 06:50:03 +0000 UTC]

1: Yes, I came up with all this on my own.

2: Raunchy means sexual.

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Thelordish In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-18 07:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Ok... Thanks for answering! And good luck with FNaFB!

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to Thelordish [2016-01-18 07:56:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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FreddleFrooby [2016-01-17 19:48:05 +0000 UTC]

I was kinda expecting that Toy Nightmares fanfic you said you'd do a while ago, but this is awesome anyway, so far!

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to FreddleFrooby [2016-01-17 22:03:18 +0000 UTC]

That was initially intended to be included in the factory, but I cut it out of the final product. Sorry.

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FreddleFrooby In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 22:39:39 +0000 UTC]

Were they on the part with Timmy and Miliea?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to FreddleFrooby [2016-01-18 01:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Yup. They were replaced with Demon Friend Fredbear.

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davis2002 [2016-01-17 10:27:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like your fanfics if I could model or make games I would make them based off your fanfic's. Five Nights at Freddy's in one thing I would like to see in game

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to davis2002 [2016-01-17 16:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 08:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, what is happening? I thought this is a nice story?!

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 16:23:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't recall saying it would be...

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LumenBlurb In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 16:51:06 +0000 UTC]

You told me before that the prototypes will get a happy ending.

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 18:03:56 +0000 UTC]

I did. Shit. Well, if I confirm that, I'll ruin the story.

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LumenBlurb In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 18:04:51 +0000 UTC]

What?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 18:08:14 +0000 UTC]

The point of the story is to keep you on edge. I'd rather not ruin that now.

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LumenBlurb In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 18:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Like with cliffhangers?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 18:15:38 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY.

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 14:50:11 +0000 UTC]

lol same

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LumenBlurb In reply to Pixel-0-Squid [2016-01-17 16:51:40 +0000 UTC]

It isn't humorous, ya know.

For I remember asking to Tommy on wanting the prototypes to get a happy ending and I think he said they will.

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to LumenBlurb [2016-01-17 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry that's not what I meantΒ I meant that I thought nothing will go wrong

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LumenBlurb In reply to Pixel-0-Squid [2016-01-17 17:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay.

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to Pixel-0-Squid [2016-01-17 17:31:10 +0000 UTC]

oh wait I was talking to davis2002

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PromtheMAn360003 [2016-01-17 05:32:36 +0000 UTC]

This is off topic but have you ever seen NexusDrakeson's Art? If you ever, will you make sprites of them?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to PromtheMAn360003 [2016-01-17 16:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I have seen his stuff before, but I'm kind of iffy as to weather or not I want to sprite his stuff yet.

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friikz0 [2016-01-17 04:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Why Chica is like T.Chica?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to friikz0 [2016-01-17 05:02:52 +0000 UTC]

I kinda wanted there to be some... "competition" between the 2. Something old, something new...

...which one would you wanna screw? (Wait, what?)

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friikz0 In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 05:24:06 +0000 UTC]

aves, i mean screw? (I HATE THE SWYPE APP)

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to friikz0 [2016-01-17 16:25:06 +0000 UTC]

What?

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friikz0 In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-19 18:22:43 +0000 UTC]

sorry, i was in my tablet, and the swype (And it's in spanish) put me that

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Walrusmanart [2016-01-17 01:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Is the name Freddybear a reference to Freddy's name in the original game?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to Walrusmanart [2016-01-17 01:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Yup.

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 01:49:25 +0000 UTC]

lol that's cool

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to Walrusmanart [2016-01-17 01:16:33 +0000 UTC]

no way that was going to be Freddy's name

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Walrusmanart In reply to Pixel-0-Squid [2016-01-17 02:04:17 +0000 UTC]

It was.

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EyelessGamer1234 [2016-01-16 22:11:30 +0000 UTC]

are they the prototype animontronics

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to EyelessGamer1234 [2016-01-16 22:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Kind of. They've been modified a little. This is a separate timeline.

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EyelessGamer1234 In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-16 22:53:49 +0000 UTC]

so before foxy ripped that guy's arm off in the factory?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to EyelessGamer1234 [2016-01-16 23:06:38 +0000 UTC]

No. Prototype Foxy ripped off the arm of one of the meachanics in Fazbear's Factory, which resulted in the prototypes being sealed away. This is where the timeline splits: In the normal FNAF timeline, the Prototypes are left to rot for 50 years, until later being destory in my FNAF fan-fic "The Factory"

Then there's the alternate timeline, where the prototypes are neutralized (shot down) and refurbished into properly working animatronics. These animatronics are used for Freddybear's Fantasy Land, and Freddy Fazbear's Pizza never came to be, instead, this place created.

David Katowski, the main protagonist, was killed and became "The Guard" (one of my other FCs) in the original timeline, where the event's of my other fan-fic "The Factory" took place.

However, in this timeline, David goes through something MUCH more different.

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FreddleFrooby In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 19:46:46 +0000 UTC]

So, is there a full on altered timeline with an Altered FNAF1, 2, 3 and 4?

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TommyProductionsInc In reply to FreddleFrooby [2016-01-17 22:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Sort of. With the way things are in this timeline, not even the 4th game happened. This takes a huge turn in terms of timeline and events.

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EyelessGamer1234 In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 00:11:13 +0000 UTC]

ok I got it

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Pixel-0-Squid In reply to TommyProductionsInc [2016-01-17 00:06:58 +0000 UTC]

I have a bad feeling

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EyelessGamer1234 In reply to Pixel-0-Squid [2016-01-17 00:11:23 +0000 UTC]

so do i

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