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Published: 2010-03-21 05:19:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 16481; Favourites: 276; Downloads: 0
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I would appreciate a lot if you tell me what you think after you played it ^^ 
I got really lazy + computer problems + lack of time, left it untouched SEVERAL days and I was about to discard this. But I am happy I didn't. I learned SO many things with this.
The drawings were rushed and many of them didn't even have sketch layers. The good thing is that all of them were small pictures so I could finish them quickly and they didn't kill my computer. I also recycled some of them eue;
Sorry for any inconsistency, error or mistake you may find and thanks to everyone who let me use their characters!
I hope you all enjoy this! (next assigment will be in comic format OTL I don't have time to do something like this again)
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Credits! (You can skip this)
Characters.
-Finn belongs to Buni ~ChiharuPon
-Mei belongs to =nio-sama
-Asher belongs to =Coconut-Thief
-Some other characters also appear and/or are mentioned. I hope that's ok (since I didn't really ask ;; )
Background
-Basement - Based on =nio-sama 's Comic [link]
-Bedroom - Texture from [link] - There was a second one but I lost the link e_e;
Music/Sounds
-From [link]
-Talking people sound effect from [link]
Game
Done in Ren'Py [link]
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This week was super busy! I spent the day cging something I will post soon, fixing some little things of this vn and then I made homework. Even my breaks are busy x u x;
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can you please update the download links? megaupload no longer exists and 4shared file is gone
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Tch. I also am unable to download. WHAT GIVES?! CAN YOU FIX IT ALREADY!
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Aw link is no longer valid, this looked like fun
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The download links are dead. Please can you reupload it? Or an another site upload?
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Seems interesting but the links won't work.
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It's not available in 4 shared and megaupload is blocked
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File is not Valid on 4shared, and megaupload won't give me.
Whyy??
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Uhh...does the links work anymore? I clicked.
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I hate to be a bother, but there are no working download links...
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Megupload has been shut down and the 4Shared link is gone. Is there any chance of you reuploading?
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Pssst. Hey! D: None of the links work anymore... is there anywhere else we can get mac/windows downloads? Please respond soon...
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What is it about? I wanna know before I download it :3 Also how much space duz the download take?
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Please help me i dont know what to do after i downloaded it in megaupload and i really want to play it cuz it looks really nice
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really love it ^^ I love the way you're drawing that's so beautiful and the game was pretty cool ^^
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The art looks gorgeous! I'm definitely going to give it a shot. 
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hehe,i played it! and loved it! it really has a beatyfull message! never stop trying! well done!!
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I SHOUTED LOL WHEN I SAW ASHER LOOKING AT BIN xD
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omg ;__; the linky for windows doesn't work ;_; *pokes it*
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When is it suppost to go to the main menu, because i got up to the part, afterthe test and Asher saw your shadow and then it went back to the main menu
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Very cute and silly game! I liked it, I thought the art was great and the story was adorable.
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Thank you for uploading it under so many versions, it made chosing to download it so much easier!
After reading through it, it was a lot of fun. The story was simple but well out, the art fabulous as usual, and the few touches of humor here and there as well as the end choice making made it all the more enjoyable.
My only critique would be that I found it a bit long. A few of the "slides" could have been put together or eliminated all together.
I was also curious to see what Finn would do, which was a shame we were not able to see.
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aww i couldn't download it it oly said save or open and it said error i really wanted to play it
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This is awsome, you're awsome <3
congratz on your hard work, this looks so porofessional!!
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Ummm i unzipped the file, but where exactly do i go to launch the game?
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I really liked everything about it your style of art is that of a pro i also liked the chest part that was funny
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I tried it out and you have done an amazing job! ^^
The story just made me reeled in, I also found this mini novel to be quite touching.
You also drew characters, backgrounds and... well ok both of them so well, even though there's not too many, but hey, it's still good!
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I think i was stunned...... This is such a great job or more like i cant even express this in words. Its beyond words, far more. I like the character and i am addicted to Buni now. She seems so amazing and such an in depth character i really wanna know more about her. You kept a very nice sense of hard work, friendship, comedy and sadness in this. I would say i really admire you for such hard work and such a beautiful story line. Buni is also extremely beautiful! The music choice is excellent. I am in love.
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i love it! <3 especially the seen in Maddy & Asher..
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how can i open the game? D: i downloaded it and a bunch of instructions came and i got lost ._.
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Hmmmm... This character looks like Aoi from 'Kaichou Wa Maid-sama!' when dressed up. Nah... not THAT much. It's just the curls.
Great job by the way! This is beautiful!
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Not really. You don't get to date any character or any romantic scene. Its just a short vn practice ^^
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GAH! Amazing! You did a lovely job! The drawings were detailed, the plot interesting, but I would really like to know who Maddy is. This must have took you tons of time, and I congratulate your patiene, and know that all the hard work you put into it payed off. How the heck did you make this?
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Spoiler Warning~
I loved this...The story really got interesting for me after the crying scene. After that I couldn't stop watching 
The whole concept is really interesting! I really looked forward to seeing what shadow she would come up with next ^^ The ending was hilarious.
The drawings are beautiful of course <3 Lovely~~ I hope you'll make more in the future *^*
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I saw this a while back when it was fresh off the submission, I only got to see it right now.
I've got to say this is really something else. Quite pro work with everything ;~;
I'm taking note of this. So inspiring lol
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I just finished reading the VN today, and I hope you don't mind if I give a little critique. :3
First off, I really liked all the artwork, even though you say you rushed it, there still is a lot of effort in them - I especially liked Asher, and Buni of course. ^^~
However, I have quite some issues with the text. You should use more punctuation; a VN is supposed to be a book with pictures after all. Yours seemed rather like a comic to me. Try to be more literate, it will add a lot to the general atmosphere. :3
Next is the script itself; again, it seems a lot like a comic. VN's, as I said, should be written like you are writing a novel, and in said you wouldn't use "........" all the time, right? Also, writing things like "a few hours later", "Several days passed", etc, becomes boring very quickly if used too often. I guess you were trying to cover a lot of time in such a short novel, but this kind of worked against you. 
Lastly, your CG's were really nice and wonderfully drawn - I loved the shadows! - but you used them at weird times. In a VN, CG's are there to show especialy emotional/thrilling/surprising/stunning moments, and not, as you did for example, show a crying chibi.
That being said, I know that you didn't ask for crits, but... I just had to write this off my soul. XD; I hope it helped you in some way, should you ever want to make a VN again. ^^
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To be honest, I was kind of waiting for a comment like this. Its the first time I ever try to do something like this, and apart from doing the art in a very short time I also had to learn to use the visual novel engine. It didn't take as much time as I thought it would, though I didn't get to correct it as much as I would have liked.
I also thought, like what you said, that I should have used much less cgs, but since this was done for a group where members may not be accostumed to this kind of games it would have turned a little boring if presented walls of text describing a scene or situation so instead I did several extra pictures to look at ^^
Thanks for the crits and for taking the time to write them. I will keep your tips in mind if I do another VN
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Hahah, I see! XD Yes, I understand that it was your first time. And a good friend of mine who's been working on a VN for a year now told me that the egine you used was quite annoying in several ways, so I bet you didn't have it easy, having to learn all of that.
Aaah, yes, that's understandable. Indeed, not many people are familiar with VN's, which is quite a pity... They should play more Phoenix Wright! XD
No prob at all, I'm glad you took it so well, not many artists take crit well. :> Good luck~
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I agree with Kamikaze-Kaito one everything. Art is gorgeous, and I love the supernatural setting. Although bunni-chan seems so similar to Louise from Familiar of Zero I scratched my head a bit...
Although my main gripe wasn't the writing as much.... as the the complete lack of options. You only get to pick what shadow she makes and it has no effect so ever on the ending. For me this feels more like a kinetic novel then a visual novel.
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Wonderfully made Visual Novel... 
It's so creative.
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I downloaded it!
I haven't tried it yet, but once I beat it, I'll tell you what I thought.
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waaa te quedo tan bien ;O; OMG eres bien pro OMG OMG OMG >w
aahhh me intrigΓ³ lo de Maddy OMGGG D; creo que se me acabaron las uΓ±as otra vesssss D; ahhh y la musica ;O; β₯β₯β₯ chu chuu eres bien proo a ver si se me pega un poco de ti XD *se frota en tiLOL*
Y mientras, Alice andaba en la cocina intentando conseguir comida extra porque tenia hambre LOL
creo que debo entrar mas a mi formspring...LOL OTL''
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So cute! Bunielle's an appealing character and that was a nice story. I liked how the shadows looked - the malformed one was scary, but the others were cute and cool and pretty. The bit at the end with her enhancing her shadow was funny too. XD
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