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Published: 2014-07-03 23:45:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1315; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Can you guys critique this in the comments please? Β I would like a critique but I don't have a Premium Membership so I can't request a critique. Β These characters (Burn and Blister) belong to Tui T. Sutherland and are from her book series Wings of Fire.This drawing belongs to me.
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burn? why are you licking the deviantart sign?
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Burn: What? What are you talking about? *mmm tasty sign*
XD
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XD
Blister:yes I put poisons on it IM ZE NEW QUEEN!
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Critique: lovely piece of art,nor eat shading. Burns snout looks a bit uneven and from what I remember burn is supose to be bigger and bulkier than blister and blister has those black diamond markings. Blister's sail thing need to be a bit darker outlined. The face thing under blisters mini horn is a bit to long and the way she smirks the bit where you can see get inside her mouth is shaded strangely. End of critique
hope I wasn't to harshπ€π―
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Thank you! I appreciate your critique! Yeah, when I was drawing this I accidentally drew Blister larger than Burn.Β Β About Blister's diamond markings, I had drew them on her, but they are not very visible. And I agree that I should've given Blister's sail a darker outline. Yeah, Blister's chin looks a bit too long and I didn't shade the inside of her mouth too well. Β Β Thank you again for the critique! Don't worry about being too harshΒ Β I will take your critique into consideration!
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Um, I don't really know. Β I guess I did it so Blister had a smug look on her face as if she's taunting Burn which makes Burn angry so she's just shouting in anger. Β I didn't really think of a purpose behind their expressions while I was drawing it, but I guess that's probably why Burn is yelling.
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I guess she's just mad at Blister.
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:3 ;3 «°3°»
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This is really good and I'm trying to find flaws, but it's really hard. The only I can think of is that Blister has a diamond pattern down her back.Β
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Thank you! And thank you for critiquing! I had started drawing the diamond patterns on Blister's back, but I wasn't able to make it very visible. Β I drew I tiny diamond near her neck, but yeah, I should probably. Express that more if I do more drawings of Blister.
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Thank you, but everyone has their own style, and I like your style as well.
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This is lovely. I love how the shading is so well done ^^ The only thing I would suggest improving on is covering the pencil strokes better.
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Okay! Thank you! I appreciate the critique!Β Β
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This is just amazing! the shading is spot on the expressions are great i can feel the anger emitting from Burn and whenever i look at Blister a chill goes down my spine. Very well done my friend. (sorry for my crappy critique 
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Thank you! I appreciate your critique! Β Β Is there anything that you think I could improve on?
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Well I think you should of made blisters eyes a little more mischeivous.
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Thank you! It's not a new post, I just updated it because I wanted people to critique it.
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You're a really good dragon artist! I can't believe you haven't been discovered yet
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Thank you so much!!!
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