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Published: 2008-09-12 08:32:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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Description Railway hdr
bitten by 4 mosquitos at a go while taking this shot. hurt like hell.
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Comments: 29

DaTa5amurai [2009-04-22 03:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Well you did a heck of a job while being bitten by mosquitos.

I am not going to go through my normal process of critique on this deviation. I chose it because it really caught my eye when looking through your gallery. Railway shots come a dime a dozen but yours is truly unique. It would have been a pretty dull shot had you not rotated the camera angle. You did a perfect job with that as it feels like I am kneeling down and moving my head down to listen to the tracks while looking ahead. Not sure if that was the intent but it certainly worked that way for me.

Great job on the technique. Like I said, great perspective but also good job on a clean crisp process. Nothing flashy but definitely a shot that is focused well with pretty good use of light. I think a quick bump in the temp department would be refreshing as the greens and blues could pop a bit more. However, that's a personal opinion and would also depart from any type of "pure" HDR. The landscape is a bit on the blah side but the tracks really make this shot happen. Once again, I really think the perspective makes this photo shine.

I honestly think its a pretty good photograph with great post process work. There could be more as far as a border and its a pity you don't have a tag as your deviations are definitely something special. Overall very good job, I probably should have picked one I could have been more critical of but oh well.

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Timothy-Sim In reply to DaTa5amurai [2009-04-22 06:17:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i really appreciate the critique loads.

withr egards to the borders though, you recommend that I should border all my pictures and tag it with my name?

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DaTa5amurai In reply to Timothy-Sim [2009-04-22 14:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Not all pictures need borders, but I think most look better with something to frame the deviation. I tag everything I do just for the sake of ownership and a bit more professionalism.

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Timothy-Sim In reply to DaTa5amurai [2009-04-22 14:28:13 +0000 UTC]

sounds good. perhaps i'll get my butt down to doing them proper one day, when I am ready to do a full portfolio.

thanks for the tip though

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bushbasher01 [2009-01-14 17:04:58 +0000 UTC]

love the angle

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Timothy-Sim In reply to bushbasher01 [2009-01-14 17:07:16 +0000 UTC]

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bastard-comics [2008-09-23 04:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Great details! at first I thought this was just a really good 3D rendering because of how crisp everything looks. Very good shot.

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Timothy-Sim In reply to bastard-comics [2008-09-23 04:49:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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x2portknox2x [2008-09-18 02:03:54 +0000 UTC]

amazing..

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Timothy-Sim In reply to x2portknox2x [2008-09-18 02:10:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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x2portknox2x In reply to Timothy-Sim [2008-09-18 02:13:24 +0000 UTC]

np

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GodessOfArt [2008-09-13 16:17:10 +0000 UTC]

gd job!

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Timothy-Sim In reply to GodessOfArt [2008-09-13 16:23:48 +0000 UTC]

:B thanks!

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GodessOfArt In reply to Timothy-Sim [2008-09-13 16:32:56 +0000 UTC]

np

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RustyRandom [2008-09-13 12:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Me likey!

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Timothy-Sim In reply to RustyRandom [2008-09-13 14:34:16 +0000 UTC]

me likey too! thanks!

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maricavr [2008-09-12 14:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Sooo beautiful

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Timothy-Sim In reply to maricavr [2008-09-12 15:48:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Evil-Slayer [2008-09-12 13:54:44 +0000 UTC]

nice angel really

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Timothy-Sim In reply to Evil-Slayer [2008-09-12 15:48:51 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks!

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splinterboyx [2008-09-12 11:11:35 +0000 UTC]

nice angle!

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Timothy-Sim In reply to splinterboyx [2008-09-12 15:49:06 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks again!

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VertexBase [2008-09-12 09:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Shutter Speed: 625/10000 second ... WTH why isn't it just 1/16?

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Timothy-Sim In reply to VertexBase [2008-09-12 10:48:49 +0000 UTC]

lol. NO IDEA! haha

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VertexBase In reply to Timothy-Sim [2008-09-12 10:51:00 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Radiatr [2008-09-12 08:44:31 +0000 UTC]

nice)

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Timothy-Sim In reply to Radiatr [2008-09-12 08:45:30 +0000 UTC]

anything i could work on?

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Radiatr In reply to Timothy-Sim [2008-09-12 08:55:53 +0000 UTC]

It is almost fine

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Timothy-Sim In reply to Radiatr [2008-09-12 10:48:59 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks!

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