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TheJasIllustrator — NOT LEAVING YOU.....EVER

Published: 2011-06-12 21:01:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3212; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 0
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Description PLEASE COMMENT This peice is Sadis's most veiw and most liked, to celebrate that I have re-done it in photoshop. I have tried me best and I hope like it just as much as the first one

Sadis (C) TheColdSouls1888

“MUFASA NOOOOO” but it was hopeless, above the horrendous noise of the stampeding wildebeest, the king couldn’t her Sadis’s cries. Zazu was flying around her head having a panic attack, screaming what do we do! Sadis didn’t know what to do, her legs wouldn’t move. She looked at Scar who also seemed to be frozen as well. Sadis had lost sight of Mufasa and that fear was turning into anger. What am I doing, I have to help them she said to her. “Sadis what do I do” Zazu yelled in her ear. “You two stay here, while I do this” she said quickly. The last thing Sadis wanted was more charging into the stampede. Sadis ran down the ledge away from them, Scar had called after her. Without thinking about it Sadis jumped sidewise onto the rock wall, pushing off it and leaping into the river of animals. The landing wasn’t great, the pressure on her legs made it slow to recover. Sadis then ran ahead calling Mufasa’s name. Wildebeest passed her at great speed; some came close to hitting her as there was little room. The dust was a nightmare; it was burning her eyes and throat and stopping her from breathing properly. Then out of the crowd a beast slammed into the side of the horse, knocking her clean out of breath and there was a clear crack sound from her ribs. However Sadis managed to keep her balance and ran on. Finally she spotted Mufasa, in his jaw was Simba. He dodged the wildebeest with difficulty. As Sadis yelled to him again the king leaped into the air with such power. The king clung to a rocky shelve while carefully realising his son from is mouth. Sadis sped toward him to help. Until she was near him she could only watch as her friend tried to pull himself up to safety “Come on Mufasa, you can to it” she prayed. But it wasn’t to be. Mufasa wasn’t quick enough and when a group of beast came to close they ended up dragging him off back into the madness. “DAD!!” Sadis heard Simba scream. Everything seemed to happen then in slow monition. Mufasa lay wounded in the ground trying to rise himself, however at the say time a bull wildebeest galloped straight at him. The white horse could only think of one thing. Using all her breath to reach the king as fast as possible, driven by anger she crashed into the side of the bull seconds before it ran over Mufasa. The bull toppled over and then ran around the two. “Mufasa my king” Sadis whispered to him. “Sadis, thank you” the kings face was full of pain. As each animal passed it hit him and he couldn’t get up, so Sadis faced the wildebeest head on. She was going to have to be the king’s shield and take the hits. Sadis reared up and the beasts swirled around to avoid her and Mufasa. The king had almost risen and Sadis turned back to protect him, and didn’t like what she saw. Three wildebeest in a line were heading straight towards her looking unstoppable. Sadis reared up again hoping to shatter them but the one in the middle couldn’t go left or right so in a flourish of panic it lowered its head and rammed into the horse. The impacted was mainly it her right side. Sadis gave out a monstrous cry as her right leg was lifted up and then pierced by the animal’s horn. It went right thought the other side. The wildebeest struggled to set itself free and in its panic made the wound bigger and worse. Sadis screamed and screamed. When the beast was free she fell onto her front keens, she was too weak. Mufasa who had seen his friends pain called to her “Sadis get out of here, don’t worry about me” they were both exhorted “ No Mufasa! IM NOT LEAVING YOU!” she shouted and wobble onto her three legs “ Your life is more imported then mine, your son needs you” suddenly there was new strength in Mufasa eyes. She had to be quick. Sadis lifted the king onto her back and using every last drop of strength stood up. It was hard but she did it “Jump Mufasa go now! JUMP” Standing on the horses back gave the king a higher point to jump off and he leaped from her back and landed on the stone wall. Her heart beated wildly as her friend’s claws dug into the rock as he climbs. She prayed that he would be safe, she saw Simba run to the top of the gorge.But the mighty lion who hung from the cliff gave a glace at Sadis"Sadis come on"Mufasa weakly yelled to her. Sadis was soon knocked to the floor by the number of animals, only this time she didn’t try to get up. "Dont give up my friend, please dont to this"he pleaded to the broken horse. The kings grip was starting to fail and he slow was slipping down, so he had no chose but to go on with out her, it broke is heart leaving his beloved friend behind. The pain in her leg was too great. She had done her duty and tried her best. It was never like Sadis to give up, so she only hoped that she would be lucky... very lucky. Things started to blur and darken, but something made her skin shiver and eyes widen, thought the air came a roaring scream that made her head want the explode and she saw something fall for the down into the gorge. Then everything went black........
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Comments: 20

MightyMorphinPower4 [2012-02-07 22:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Impresstive and moving pic here

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2012-02-08 08:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you sooo much!!! YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH THAT MEANS TO ME Im glad it give out the message I wanted it to THANK YOU!!!!

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SodapopLuver [2011-09-11 22:22:50 +0000 UTC]

beautifully done

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to SodapopLuver [2011-09-12 08:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you!!! means sooo much and the fave too

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SodapopLuver In reply to TheJasIllustrator [2011-09-12 20:23:36 +0000 UTC]

no problem,its the least i could do

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Kukapetal [2011-08-08 04:31:40 +0000 UTC]

So, I've been looking at these, and I have to say...it's not a bad idea. Putting a new character into a pre-existing story can be a challenge, but can test our creativity Can we fit them in in a believable way? Without disrupting the flow of the story? Can we make the canon characters interact with them convincingly? All these things can be interesting challenges that are fun to work through.

That said, I'm having a bit of difficulty accepting Sadis's presence in these pictures. It looks unnatural, and I think the reason for that is that she is drawn in a completely different style from the canon characters. She looks too realistic, whereas the other characters are more cartoony. It's distracting and ruins my suspension of disbelief. The challenge of inserting an OC into a pre-existing story is to draw or write in such a way that it seems as though the character could have been there all along. That doesn't work as well if you're going to draw the OC in a different style. It just makes her REALLY stand out, and look out of place.

You might want to try drawing her in more of a lion king style. I think that would help her fit into your pictures better. Adapting OCs to different artistic styles is good practice too. Good luck with everything!

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to Kukapetal [2011-08-08 14:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Hi thanks very much for your comment, its really helpful. I totally argee with what you are saying, I might draw her is a different way but Sadis has been round for a while now and everyone seems to like her the way she is Anyway thanks again

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Kukapetal In reply to TheJasIllustrator [2011-08-08 16:14:29 +0000 UTC]

The only other thing I'll say is, don't let "Everyone else likes it" keep you from trying to improve your work. This is Deviantart. The vast majority of people who comment on your stuff are going to say it's good even if it's just stick people drawn with fecal matter. It's the nature of this place. Don't let it stifle your growth as an artist or let you fall into a rut. If you agree that there are things about your OC that could use improvement, then work on them. It's how you improve as an artist. And you've definitely got potential. Don't let it stagnate by only listening to those who won't take you out of your comfort zone.

Good luck to you

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to Kukapetal [2011-08-08 18:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much... It means so much to me to hear that you think ive got potential. Again I agree with you that it is more importent to improve then to please everyone, so I will take your advise on the chin and try to brake out of my conferts zone

I can thank you enough, you have been so helpful

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Onestormylove [2011-07-16 21:32:54 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful :3

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to Onestormylove [2011-07-17 15:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Awwww bless you, THANKS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Onestormylove In reply to TheJasIllustrator [2011-07-17 15:28:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3

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Kopaa [2011-07-10 04:42:17 +0000 UTC]

This is an EXCELLENT piece of Artwork and VERY creative. You should Be very proud of yourself!

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to Kopaa [2011-07-10 15:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww THANK YOU! THANKS YOU! THANK YOU!!! IT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME!!! I feel even more proud that I have done this two character justice!! Thank you sooooo much *hug*

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Miahii [2011-06-14 19:29:35 +0000 UTC]

that is so well done, I love this photoshop piece! This is one of the most emotional scenes and you captured it quite well

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to Miahii [2011-06-14 20:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you sooooooooooo much Mikala, I was worried as it was my first go in photoshop. I makes me so happy to hear you say that Thank you

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GalletoconK [2011-06-12 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Im impressive!

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to GalletoconK [2011-06-13 10:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, means alot to me Im glad you like it. OHHHH and thanks for the fave too

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GalletoconK In reply to TheJasIllustrator [2011-06-13 15:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Not problem, the pic is awesome :3

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TheJasIllustrator In reply to GalletoconK [2011-06-13 20:10:34 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW bless you

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