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Thaddeus-Swordthrow — She's Leaving Home.
Published: 2010-01-30 04:47:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 431; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description The curtain's restless, the bed is cold.
An old man stares, tired and old.
He tries to think but can't quite see
the girl he loved and their memories.

His skin in wrinkled, his hands are dry
but strong in hers, when she holds on tight.
Her eyes are blue, he sees, sharp and coy,
just like his when he was a boy.

Blue like the sea, deep as the sky
but his now have clouds passing by.
Clouds, he remembers, there were clouds on the day
he gave his mother's ring away.

Away from the city, he married his love-
his soulmate; his lobster; his turtledove.
He's crying now, he knows the child.
"How could I forget, you have her smile."

Too big for one, the weary bed,
he'll never sleep in it again.
But in his granddaughter he sees
the girl he loved and their memories.
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Comments: 11

Faikarias [2010-01-30 08:29:12 +0000 UTC]

That's just increible mate, great poem.

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Thaddeus-Swordthrow In reply to Faikarias [2010-01-30 08:47:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks man, that made me feel great=]

glad you enjoyed.

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P1pp1N [2010-01-30 06:49:30 +0000 UTC]

his lobster? lol.

(typo in second stanza, third line)

awwww, how sweet. loved "Clouds, he remembers, there were clouds on the day
he gave his mother's ring away." beautiful

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Thaddeus-Swordthrow In reply to P1pp1N [2010-01-30 08:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it comes from an episode of Friends when Phoebe explains about Rachael being Ross's lobster, because lobster's have one partner for life

and thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed =]

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P1pp1N In reply to Thaddeus-Swordthrow [2010-01-30 09:40:07 +0000 UTC]

i see... cute.

(typo? second stanza, third line)

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Thaddeus-Swordthrow In reply to P1pp1N [2010-01-31 01:06:35 +0000 UTC]

cheers.

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P1pp1N In reply to Thaddeus-Swordthrow [2010-01-31 02:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Amir: no, thank you.

Jake: i didn't say thank you

Amir: what did you say?

Jake: stock market.

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Thaddeus-Swordthrow In reply to P1pp1N [2010-01-31 11:15:58 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha, i love jake and amir so so much

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P1pp1N In reply to Thaddeus-Swordthrow [2010-02-01 09:07:52 +0000 UTC]



all should know of the wonder that is Jake and Amir

Sheesh, y'all, twas a dream!

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Thaddeus-Swordthrow In reply to P1pp1N [2010-02-01 11:05:57 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, I want one of those t-shirts

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P1pp1N In reply to Thaddeus-Swordthrow [2010-02-02 07:52:16 +0000 UTC]

me too!!!

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