lainey-nesu [2011-11-19 11:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Niiice, I really like the lighting effects and the texture of the book on this, and the little orbs of light around them you know I'm a sucker for those heh *w*
The blurring on the book pages is a nice effect as well, gives it a sense that it's more in the background and places focus on the duo in front. And for some reason, I'm transfixed on the red bits of Ren's clothes lol 8;'D
Cat's upper arm on the forefront still feels a little long, and her eyes seem to be looking more upwards than at Ren. Otherwise, nice work on this, Elder-sama o v o )7 Very sweet!
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