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Published: 2002-01-23 17:02:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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Description I feel ridiculous,
Being here.
Naive
To even think I deserved
To be part of this unconscious elite.
To think I was worthy of
Holding myself to the standards you measure yourselves with.
Knowledge is nothing if left to decay.
I,
Who takes small bites around quality, as if afraid the core has seeds.
If I rely on deception
To replace invention
It further proves my disconnection with the Way Things Are.
I'm sick of being
Patronized,
Lied to like a child
Naive.
Ridiculous.
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tax-chan - The Tale of Etan the Bard
Comments: 4

tax-chan [2002-02-01 15:53:24 +0000 UTC]

W00t! I have done what I set out to do!

I have space aliens in my basement

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gwillisf [2002-02-01 08:39:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the way it sort of flows from one idea to the next. Its frankness evokes emotion.

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tax-chan [2002-01-27 08:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Ironically enough, this has the highest score out of any of my pieces. Anything that should/could be changed?

+I have space aliens in my basement+

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dismarum [2002-01-23 18:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Mmm...I like the format of this...very percise...the words are great also...they tumble through my head quick and sharp...

"If I rely on deception
To replace invention
It further proves my disconnection with the Way Things Are."

I love that...it sums up everything nicely and has a nice flow...

We all FEEL inferior sometimes just don't convince yourself that you are...this is great work...

Dismarum -
~You don't have to stay anywhere forever...~

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