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tax-chan — Apology
Published: 2002-01-23 01:31:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 23
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I'm sorry you saw that. Ragged bone, forests of needles bristling up around mirror-lakes dotted with bleached-bone-white islands. Colors were there, terrifying in their intensity. What did they do to you? Could I make it better could I could I. Machete my way through forests hydroponically thick with poisonous plants, always green, bloody poppy smiles grinning at me like death's heads. They've woven their way into you, vinous viscous poison carried through tendrils into the base of your brain, your spine. Break the bones break the bones break the bones. Progeny of chemical misery, let me make something go right? Blood is thicker than water, especially when freighted with molecules of madness, ruin particulately formed, 42 resinous lacy chains of terror. I'm sorry they did it. I'd take it into my hands, lull it into a sense of security, crush it like a poisonous jungle insect, but then what? Useless hands, just as susceptible as you.Turn the colors beautiful, make the mirrors reflect the clouded summer sky and its thriving butterflies, tame the unruly vegetation into a beautiful garden. Knit with the needles warm woolen blankets. Could I really? It's not possible. I'm sorry you saw that. But maybe I could cover it over? Not to forget, maybe, but give you the ability to see it at one remove. Through butterfly gossamer gauze the mirror-lakes are water, the islands only sand, the forests just a faraway green carpet. Make a go of it. Could I?
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But since I read the last one of this series, I know you didn't manage to write it off. There are always things or people that impress us. I crawled through the images you portrayed. I've seen people like the one you write this for in the past of my own life. At some point it wears off.
I'd still like it if you would use more line breaks. Read your work out loud and use interpunction the way you feel your read should be.
But the story you relay here, in the colors and images that you bring it in; show good potential.
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Regret AND sorrow. Very cheerful, innit? While I myself am not responsible for this, I still feel like I could have done something to prevent it. Which is stupid, but knowing that doesn't make it any easier. So I wrote it down to get it out of my head
I have space aliens in my basement
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Is this regret or sorrow? Something to which you exposed someone and am sorry for it? What happened?
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