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T4l0n — Carpe Diem
Published: 2008-04-04 14:26:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 196; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description Sky is grey, time is late
darkness is rising from behind
and the last little dove
its own home it's trying to find

dove's left wing is on pain's touch
wing is broken and hurts so much
and before losing the way
it just wants to come back safe

bird is falling on the ground
but it knows it won't crash down
and it feels a little wind
and the wind become so strong
so before to lose it all
dove takes gust and tryes to soar

Yes, it is !! The bird is safe
final fates rejects away
dove is landing on the nest
and from now it'll taste life's zest
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Comments: 9

d0ufu [2008-07-16 20:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I absolutely like this (:

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T4l0n In reply to d0ufu [2008-07-16 21:00:58 +0000 UTC]

oh thx
im glad !

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d0ufu In reply to T4l0n [2008-07-16 21:02:35 +0000 UTC]

(:

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Green-Lemonade [2008-04-05 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Love this :]

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T4l0n In reply to Green-Lemonade [2008-04-07 13:29:49 +0000 UTC]

im really glad u like this ^^

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Green-Lemonade In reply to T4l0n [2008-04-07 14:25:21 +0000 UTC]

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PhotoFreakMotel [2008-04-04 22:17:57 +0000 UTC]

This is an excellent poem!
I love it, it...brings meaning into things.

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T4l0n In reply to PhotoFreakMotel [2008-04-05 10:37:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much crazy gilr !!
ur comments are always appreciated

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PhotoFreakMotel In reply to T4l0n [2008-04-05 15:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe you're ever-so welcome!

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