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chiharu-octavia [2011-05-25 06:29:44 +0000 UTC]
LINK TO THE FIIIIC~
Your picture made me want to read it. @_@ It's a lovely picture. I like the shading most of all.
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SuperCatGirl In reply to Skiptrix [2011-05-25 06:57:26 +0000 UTC]
<3 <3 <3 We are quite fond of this chapter too!
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omelette-kid [2011-05-25 04:36:20 +0000 UTC]
I haven't read this fic yet, so I don't know the context of the image, but my first thought on seeing the thumbnail was that Hanna was filing taxes or working on a budget or something similar. Hanna? Responsible actions? WHAT IS THIS
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GreyxBird [2011-05-25 02:18:27 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAY IT'S BAAACK~ *dances around*
... What? Oh, why yes, I do like this story. Why do you ask?
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GreyxBird In reply to SuperCatGirl [2011-05-25 22:49:03 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no worries. <3 I especially like this fic for many reasons.
I love antagonists, and love Cas and Finas, who are the protagonists-turned-antagonists of the story, along with a creepy-as-hell antagonist and my favorite character, Abner, somewhere in the middle. (I DON'T KNOW WHY ALL THE ANTAGONISTS GAH) They're all portrayed very in-character and canon, with unique speech patterns and descriptions for each.
Many of the characters are also being pushed to limits/forced outside comfort zones/forced to interact with those they'd rather not, which always makes for an interesting plot, with characters doing unusual things/switching to sides they'd normally not be on, if only for a moment.
It's also extremely well done. The writing is very nicely paced, with few gammatical or spelling mistakes, which always makes reading easier and more fun. The description and huge amount of metaphors and similes make the story clearer without cluttering it with too much detail - I can picture exactly what's going on, but still imagine some. The word choice is neither too simple nor too exotic, making the story both engaging and very readable. The given plot can go any way, and I'm never sure what's about to come next, which keeps me looking for more.
So, essentially, chosen characters and their portrayals, situations, and writing style.
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obviously-badfaith In reply to GreyxBird [2011-05-26 03:01:25 +0000 UTC]
*gapes at large amazing comment* Th-thanks for r-reading?! *faints*
*psst- Casimiro and Finas are more of antagonists-turned-protagonists in this fic.* x3
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GreyxBird In reply to obviously-badfaith [2011-05-26 22:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, no problem! I'm a writer, and... Uh... I started writing. And then more writing came out. This seems to be a problem with me. BUTHEY, with such a cool thing to write about, it's no wonder!~
Isn't that what I said? *checks* Nope. Whoops. I mix those sometimes. Bad-guys-turned-good-guys. Whichever turned the other one. xD You got the idea.
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