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SugarplumTits In reply to ??? [2012-09-23 22:36:29 +0000 UTC]
hehe, figured out my secret.
Thank you ^3^
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SugarplumTits In reply to infectitious [2012-09-25 00:37:46 +0000 UTC]
Before, she was based on Mello for...reasons. It's why we always drew her with short blonde hair and blue eyes. xD
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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 05:17:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I love him soooo much! Hes my favorite character at the moment. So your a friend of Silver?
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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 07:01:03 +0000 UTC]
Okay i'll check it out ^^ I also have a chat....it's not really too structured....but you can check it out if you like. It's called FMAOurStory.
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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah a chat. If you want you can drop by...though nothing important is going on at the moment.... -3-
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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 08:14:10 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see, is it a roleplaying chatroom or just for talking?
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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 22:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Roleplay....mostly. But I suppose we talk sometimes too.
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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 22:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I might check it out one day then :3 I tend to be shy though.
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Bitter-Cherry [2012-06-14 00:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay time for a review!
Overall, Molly is a well developed OC, you guys have done a good job with her, and on a side note, I guess I can see how her and Priscilla are a little similar, while still being different, that’s kinda nice and funny.
Now, we did found a few small things we think we need to point out.
First, in her hobbies you included chores, which isn’t really a hobby, chores are chores. So that shouldn’t be there. However, her hobbies seem to be fine.
Second, we think she could really use a couple of simpler or even silly fears. We all have those. It’d feel more realistic and human.
Third, we really like that you explained her flaws; but, you should try and explain all of them.
Fourth, I have to question if you guys know just how much OCD affects a person, and if this is really what Molly has, because chances are she’s just a perfectionist.
And last, you say that after the incident with the bear, Molly develops a “small fear” but, would you really thing such an experience would result in a “small” fear? We think that would be under reacting to what happened. Even less traumatic experiences can have drastic effects on people.
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SugarplumTits In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-06-14 01:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Alright, exclude chores then? I figured that adding that in there would explain Molly's enjoyment to cleaning. x3 Since she actually likes some of the chores she does.
About the fears, I see what you mean, I'll discuss it with ~Frog-Girl25 and see what we can come up with.
About the OCD, We're kind of undecided, I wanted to give Molly actual OCD but then I'm not so sure...either way, I know what you mean, so I'll probably update it soon, and research some more on OCD.
I probably fucked up on the wording during the "small fear". xD Because you're right, it's under reacting. Molly developed a fear of bears and other animals after this incident, so she was pretty traumatized, one of the other reasons why she can't properly hunt or shoot a gun because she's afraid of triggering another attack.
All in all, thanks! >w< I've been waiting for this review and it shows I need to proofread more. xD (Though my friend just suggested I put it up anyway because she knew you would help us so yeah.)
Yeah, our OCs share similarities, and I kinda find that neat. =]
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peacefulinvasion [2012-04-02 19:48:31 +0000 UTC]
Nice OC. I especially love how you made her Drachman. I rarely see ocs that are drachman or are from a country other than Amestris and Ishval. (it kind of makes your character completely original.)
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tansyuduri [2012-02-29 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm not so sure christanity exists in FMA. oh, which anime is she from?
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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-01 03:34:30 +0000 UTC]
Actually the story is from Greek mythology, In the original anime it's refereed to as "the ancient religion" (I think by Izumi) once that had gone extinct.
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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-02 18:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm yeah, Since it's implied the religion was extinct for so long it would be plausible and kinda cool if she stumbled upon an old copy of the bible and started reading it and thought "hey you know what this really resonates with me" Or her family could be christian and have passed it down
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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-02 18:44:59 +0000 UTC]
That bible idea sounds pretty cool actually. I also like the second idea too though. Molly's grandmother (From her mother's side) was really strict with religion, and I think her grandfather (from her father's side) was also religious in a way...though my friend mostly worked on the grandfather's info than I did, so I would have to ask her if he was or not. Still though, I really like these suggestions. =] Especially the first one.
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Pumukly [2011-12-27 16:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Nice OC you two created! I really like her personality! ^^
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tansyuduri [2011-12-25 02:06:44 +0000 UTC]
Christianity does not exist in the fma world. This is confirmed in the first anime and it never shows up in the 2nd anime. It seems incredibly unlikely she would be able to make friends with Ed if she viewed alchemy as a sin, Hes not the kind of person who would put up with that.
How did she meet the Elrics? how long does she stay with them?
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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-25 03:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Also thanks for the critique ^_^ If you have anything else you wanna point out, any flaws or anything, feel free to tell me.
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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-26 23:25:27 +0000 UTC]
She offers them to stay at her home during her journey instead of stay at a inn for a while, till they are done investigating till their departure for the rest of their journey. They don't return till two years later to visit her again.
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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-01-01 01:43:32 +0000 UTC]
But I still appreciate the help. ^_^ So thank you
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Frog-Girl25 In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-25 03:34:58 +0000 UTC]
and she was a bit on edge around him*
oopsie 3x
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