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Description I've update Molly's info! I've used the template by *NoVaNoah this time. We've added in more things to her profile and fleshed out her biography a bit more. =] Gave her a few relatives too even though it's not much.

Critiques are appreciated!

EDIT: I've made her into a neat freak o3o for better wording. I'll continue to change more of her profile in the future. I also added onto her flaws and explained them all.

EDIT 2: Molly's roleplaying/ask Tumblr account!: [link]

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Name: Molly Kaledin

Nicknames: Angel by her parents, Masha by her grandfather.

Age: 18

D.O.B: December 6, 1897

Place of Birth: Chalkoi, Drachma

Residence: Chalkoi, Drachma

Occupation: part time housekeeping at a inn

Education: She's had basic education through out most of her life, she went to regular school for her whole life -- to one school building built for kids of all ages, and another built for pre-teens and older teens till "graduation". Molly is no longer in school, but often still studies on her own with trips to the library.



APPEARANCE


Height: 5''6

Hair: Shoulder length, light blonde hair.

Eyes: icy blue.

Skin: pale due to the lack of sunlight her town gets from all the snowy weather.

Body type: Curvy; a bit pudgy.

Style: Simple


Family:

> Yulia Kaledin [nee Volkov] (Mother)
> Demyan Kaledin (Father)
> Viktor Volkov (maternal grandfather)
> Nadiya Volkov (maternal grandmother)
> Ivan Kaledin (paternal grandfather)
> Sascha Kaledin (paternal grandmother)
> Annessa Kaledin (aunt)


PERSONALITY:

Likes:
» Her mother's cooking
» warm weather (any temperature close to 32 is warm to her)
» deer
» peace
» fruit and vegetables
» The cultures of foreign countries
» nature
» poetry

Dislikes:
» Arrogant people
» Bigots
» Bugs (Mostly just spiders)
» Blizzards
» dangerous animals like wolves and bears
» spoiled and wasted food

Fears: She has a great fear of grizzly bears and other type of bears because of what happened to her and her grandfather, she also fears childbirth because she believes she is as frail as her mother--no thanks to her father, who treats Molly like a porcelain doll. She has minor fears to other dangerous animals, afraid of being attacked like she once was.
While she can tolerate most bugs enough to pick them up and fling them away, she cannot stand spiders which give her a serious case of the creeps.

Hobbies: Writing poetry, cooking, helping her parents out with daily chores (such as housework with her mother, cutting and bringing in firewood with her father), knitting, reading about exotic plants and places, reading about different cultures, looking at photography of around the world.

Dreams: Her main goal is to travel around the world and visit the places she always dreams of visiting. To drink in as much knowledge about these countries as best as she can and to have fun, till then, a goal for a career or any lifetime one is undecided. She feels she will be able to decide after she had a chance to travel around.


Flaws:
- ignorant --Sometimes she lacks proper knowledge of the world and it's faults, doesn't really understand 'reality' much.
- childish -- Is prone to throwing silent tantrums when not getting her way in things.
- absent-minded
- neurotic -- She tends to worry too much.
- gullible -- she'd believe anything a foreign stranger says (this would tie in with her ignorance)
- nosey -- She tends to bud in other people's business a little too much, it can come off quite annoying to others.
- soft-hearted -- this can be seen as a strength, but showing too much kindness might ignite problems.
- zealot -- She can be "overly" passionate.

Abilities:

» Knowledgeable about other cultures and countries.
-She is almost like an encyclopedia...except she misinterprets things she absolutely does not understand, thus being a very misleading source of information.
» Knitting
-It is an essential skill where she lives since it is very common to wear furs
» Cooking
- She helps her mother to cook, picking up a few things along the way so that she can cook on her own.
» Survival skills
- She memorizes trails and areas where edibles are available, she knows what plants are good to eat and not to eat, she can skin the fur off of animals pretty good, and knows the basics of hunting, despite being too frightful to actually do it.

Fun facts:
- She has a silver rosary given to her by her grandmother, Sascha, as a birthday gift on her fifteenth birthday.
- She has a personal journal with her where she dots down her dreams, ramblings, and poems.
- She also has a small bible that she likes to read to herself sometimes before bed.
- Molly has three large scars on her back from being mauled by a bear
- Molly is considered to be quite the neat-freak. She'll freak out over unkept or unorganized things, and anything that may have a speck of dirt or dust on it.
- Molly was named after a foreign poet that her mother, Yulia, was a big fan of when she was much younger. Which explains part of Molly's interest in both poetry and other countries.

Back story summary:

Molly was born in a small town named Chalkoi, which was where she was raised in up until adulthood, to Demyan, a lumberjack, and Yulia, a huntress and housewife. Since her mother’s small stature and an illness she suffered from as a child has affected her reproductive organs in negative ways, she has had a great amount of difficulty carrying children to the full term (They consider Molly a blessing), so Demyan cherishes his only child to the point where Molly finds him unbearable at times—his overly-protective nature causes him to shield her from nearly everything, including males of any age. This and her religious lifestyle (which has been passed down from both families) shaped Molly to become a shy and humble young lady. She gained her blue eyes from her father, and her blonde hair from her mother.

Her father's warnings and aggression towards “unruly” things did not stop Molly’s grandfather, Viktor, from telling her stories about his dangerous encounters and adventures he endured while he was much younger, during the years of when Drachma’s government was more fair towards other cultures and extremely docile. Viktor’s stories caused Molly’s curiosity of the “outside world” to spring forth at a young age. Although she was not allowed to leave her town at such a young age (or any age, for that matter), she was satisfied with teaching herself by reading various books about different areas of the world.

As she grew older, Molly began to be more and more amazed by different and exotic countries—mostly Aerugo. She craves the summer air, warm beaches, and green scenery, it was hard to get any of that, since she lived in a country where there were nothing but white taigas and tundras. For this, she constantly read books about other countries and viewing photographs about them. Her knowledge for other countries grew, she knew more about their origins and culture than anyone else in her town. (Although everybody else seems to not care as they are satisfied with where they are)

At one point in her life, despite her story from her grandfather who lost his legs in a situation like this, she went hunting with her father, in hopes that she can improve on using a gun properly. As Molly was practicing her aim, she nearly shot an irritable grizzly bear that was hiding, who then became spooked and decided to charge the two. Tripping over the deep snow, Molly could not escape the bear, who then slashed at her, viciously wounding her back. Enraged, Demyan managed to stop the bear from hurting her any further by shooting and killing it, then proceeded to quickly take her to aid. Although Demyan felt that everything was his fault, Molly blamed herself and never trusted herself with a gun ever again, afraid that she'll caused pain to another. From then on, Molly had developed a small fear of hunting, bears, or any other dangerous animals. This fear also caused her to become extremely cautious and neurotic.

All in all, Molly is viewed as an innocent young woman who is good to her folks, with high hopes of the future. Though many fear that she will get into too much trouble because Molly is simply not aware at times of the consequences of things.
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Comments: 63

SugarplumTits In reply to ??? [2012-09-23 22:36:29 +0000 UTC]

hehe, figured out my secret.

Thank you ^3^

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infectitious In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-25 00:20:15 +0000 UTC]

GASPSSS :0

No problem ;D

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SugarplumTits In reply to infectitious [2012-09-25 00:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Before, she was based on Mello for...reasons. It's why we always drew her with short blonde hair and blue eyes. xD

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infectitious In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-25 00:49:54 +0000 UTC]

OOOoohhhhh awesomeee

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SugarplumTits In reply to infectitious [2012-09-25 01:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yes. x3

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Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 04:32:33 +0000 UTC]

My character is from Drachma too!

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 04:49:03 +0000 UTC]

That's great. I don't find many characters from Drachma.

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 05:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I love him soooo much! Hes my favorite character at the moment. So your a friend of Silver?

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 05:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Somewhat. I talked to her on a chatroom here sometimes. :3

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 05:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah...well we should rp sometime I'd love to meet your character..and you~

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 05:41:59 +0000 UTC]

That sounds nice x3

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 06:18:35 +0000 UTC]

What chat rooms do you go to?

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 06:56:09 +0000 UTC]

The one for #Fullmetal-Oc-Academy and sometimes for #FMA-Desueification

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 07:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay i'll check it out ^^ I also have a chat....it's not really too structured....but you can check it out if you like. It's called FMAOurStory.

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 07:12:16 +0000 UTC]

FMAOurStory? o3o

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah a chat. If you want you can drop by...though nothing important is going on at the moment.... -3-

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 08:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah I see, is it a roleplaying chatroom or just for talking?

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-04 22:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Roleplay....mostly. But I suppose we talk sometimes too.

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-04 22:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I might check it out one day then :3 I tend to be shy though.

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-05 20:48:16 +0000 UTC]

That's okay ^^ we are all pretty nice there.

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SugarplumTits In reply to Vanna-Wringer [2012-09-05 22:30:58 +0000 UTC]

good XD

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Vanna-Wringer In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-09-05 23:39:14 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Bitter-Cherry [2012-06-14 00:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay time for a review!

Overall, Molly is a well developed OC, you guys have done a good job with her, and on a side note, I guess I can see how her and Priscilla are a little similar, while still being different, that’s kinda nice and funny.

Now, we did found a few small things we think we need to point out.

First, in her hobbies you included chores, which isn’t really a hobby, chores are chores. So that shouldn’t be there. However, her hobbies seem to be fine.

Second, we think she could really use a couple of simpler or even silly fears. We all have those. It’d feel more realistic and human.

Third, we really like that you explained her flaws; but, you should try and explain all of them.

Fourth, I have to question if you guys know just how much OCD affects a person, and if this is really what Molly has, because chances are she’s just a perfectionist.

And last, you say that after the incident with the bear, Molly develops a “small fear” but, would you really thing such an experience would result in a “small” fear? We think that would be under reacting to what happened. Even less traumatic experiences can have drastic effects on people.

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SugarplumTits In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-06-14 01:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Alright, exclude chores then? I figured that adding that in there would explain Molly's enjoyment to cleaning. x3 Since she actually likes some of the chores she does.

About the fears, I see what you mean, I'll discuss it with ~Frog-Girl25 and see what we can come up with.

About the OCD, We're kind of undecided, I wanted to give Molly actual OCD but then I'm not so sure...either way, I know what you mean, so I'll probably update it soon, and research some more on OCD.

I probably fucked up on the wording during the "small fear". xD Because you're right, it's under reacting. Molly developed a fear of bears and other animals after this incident, so she was pretty traumatized, one of the other reasons why she can't properly hunt or shoot a gun because she's afraid of triggering another attack.

All in all, thanks! >w< I've been waiting for this review and it shows I need to proofread more. xD (Though my friend just suggested I put it up anyway because she knew you would help us so yeah.)
Yeah, our OCs share similarities, and I kinda find that neat. =]

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peacefulinvasion [2012-04-02 19:48:31 +0000 UTC]

Nice OC. I especially love how you made her Drachman. I rarely see ocs that are drachman or are from a country other than Amestris and Ishval. (it kind of makes your character completely original.)

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SugarplumTits In reply to peacefulinvasion [2012-04-03 00:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^_^ I actually haven't seen many Ishvalan OCs, mostly Amestris or Xingnese.
But thank you either way. =]

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peacefulinvasion In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-04-03 00:08:46 +0000 UTC]

^^ np

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tansyuduri [2012-02-29 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm not so sure christanity exists in FMA. oh, which anime is she from?

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-01 01:50:01 +0000 UTC]

Haven't we already discussed that? Either way, my friend mentioned Izumi mentioning it, not to mention Ed once mentioned the story of the boy who flew too close to the sun which I'm pretty sure is a real story in this world, religion--maybe, but not entirely sure. I'll have to look more into it and look that up then.

Well, for now, she's from Brotherhood.

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-01 03:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Actually the story is from Greek mythology, In the original anime it's refereed to as "the ancient religion" (I think by Izumi) once that had gone extinct.

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-01 03:45:49 +0000 UTC]

In this case, she could likely still worship it even if it's forgotten.
Also yes, I knew it was somewhere besides the bible. Still, I mentioned it cause it shows that even if the FMA world they are aware of mythology and other culture and such in this world, but not sure if it's the same with Brotherhood. Could still use the "ancient religion" method or say she's religious in some way if I need to.

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-01 04:17:31 +0000 UTC]

ok

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-01 04:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Do you have any suggestions?

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-02 18:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm yeah, Since it's implied the religion was extinct for so long it would be plausible and kinda cool if she stumbled upon an old copy of the bible and started reading it and thought "hey you know what this really resonates with me" Or her family could be christian and have passed it down

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-02 18:44:59 +0000 UTC]

That bible idea sounds pretty cool actually. I also like the second idea too though. Molly's grandmother (From her mother's side) was really strict with religion, and I think her grandfather (from her father's side) was also religious in a way...though my friend mostly worked on the grandfather's info than I did, so I would have to ask her if he was or not. Still though, I really like these suggestions. =] Especially the first one.

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-03-02 19:46:22 +0000 UTC]

I look forward to seeing more

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-02 20:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Great. Thanks a bunch.

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Pumukly [2011-12-27 16:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice OC you two created! I really like her personality! ^^

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SugarplumTits In reply to Pumukly [2011-12-27 23:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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tansyuduri [2011-12-25 02:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Christianity does not exist in the fma world. This is confirmed in the first anime and it never shows up in the 2nd anime. It seems incredibly unlikely she would be able to make friends with Ed if she viewed alchemy as a sin, Hes not the kind of person who would put up with that.

How did she meet the Elrics? how long does she stay with them?

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-25 03:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Also thanks for the critique ^_^ If you have anything else you wanna point out, any flaws or anything, feel free to tell me.

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-25 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Actually her father is the one who thinks of it as mostly as sin and he hates Ed. Also, Molly is open-minded, but she was raised by her father to find alchemy in this way, however, with tolerance she is able to see the brothers in a different light.

Our story starts out as Ed and Al going back to Drachama to investigate some suspicious activity going on with their government, they go to Molly's town and meet her and her father as they are hauling wood around.

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2011-12-26 19:01:46 +0000 UTC]

how long does she stay with them?

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-26 23:25:27 +0000 UTC]

She offers them to stay at her home during her journey instead of stay at a inn for a while, till they are done investigating till their departure for the rest of their journey. They don't return till two years later to visit her again.

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2011-12-27 18:18:42 +0000 UTC]

that works then

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-27 23:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'll admit it's kind of hard to explain without going into too much detail about the story we're creating for this

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2011-12-31 23:18:31 +0000 UTC]

ah

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SugarplumTits In reply to tansyuduri [2012-01-01 01:43:32 +0000 UTC]

But I still appreciate the help. ^_^ So thank you

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tansyuduri In reply to SugarplumTits [2012-01-09 19:27:18 +0000 UTC]

sure

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Frog-Girl25 In reply to tansyuduri [2011-12-25 03:34:58 +0000 UTC]

and she was a bit on edge around him*
oopsie 3x

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