HOME | DD

Sturmir ā€” Pumpkin Field

Published: 2013-10-04 17:37:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 881; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 2
Redirect to original
Description So after submitting my work to Shonen Jump Manga Competition I was thinking what to do next.
I've got plenty of requests to do, I want to enter some dA contests as well, and on top of that I have to draw 4 pages that I agreed to draw for a certain comics project.
But before doing any of that I really wanted to finish and celebrate my manga project with some artworks. Well, that's one of them.
The other one can be found here:

Characters from left: Matilda and Conrad. Copyrights - Shueisha? Who knows XD
This one would look really good in color. Like colored with one of these copic markers that I WISH TO HAVE BUT I DON'T ;__________;
But sometimes it's better to leave things B&W. The way I like it I wanted to add some screentones But I don't think they're necessary here.

Feel free to comment if you like or don't like something. I'm always open to sugestions.

Btw. One month ago I would never even believe that I would draw something like that. I was a complete amateur in drawing with perpective, backgrounds... Look what hard work can do to you *o*
Related content
Comments: 5

MissJulyFarraday [2013-11-27 11:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I really love your work. I think it's very professionnal done, like in real comics.
(I live in Belgian, so I know what a good comic looks like, e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> )
All elements of the drawing is very good done. I love the shadows, clothes relief, face expressions... All of it deserves to be seen by professionnals.
The contrast between black and white is not bad at all, but it could be more black on this drawing... but I suppose it's made like that because it's a sunny day, so... it's good like that.
So, I think you should continue like that.
Well, nothing to say else))

šŸ‘: 0 ā©: 1

Sturmir In reply to MissJulyFarraday [2013-11-27 11:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, well thanks for a fair and honest (I hope) critique. I'm glad you like it so much. I hope I'll make more of stuff like that in the future.

šŸ‘: 0 ā©: 1

MissJulyFarraday In reply to Sturmir [2013-11-27 16:05:51 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. And yeah, my critique was really honest)))Ā 

šŸ‘: 0 ā©: 0

Franciscathedragon [2014-08-26 04:48:35 +0000 UTC]

It has such detail.

šŸ‘: 0 ā©: 1

Sturmir In reply to Franciscathedragon [2014-08-26 14:47:55 +0000 UTC]

^^

šŸ‘: 0 ā©: 0