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Description Update2: Adding some past amora, so you can get an idea of what she was like. Also I just want to say, that the blue glowing lines on her, were inspired by tron and once I started to add that kind of concept to her, I started to see a lot more tf oc's with glowing lines as well I just want her to have them because it was unique and different.

Designation: Amora

Nicknames: Mora (preferes people calling her by her nickname)

Age (human terms): 45

Gender: Femme

Height: half a head shorter than optimus in his prime state.

Voice actress: Jennifer Hale (as Sarah palmer in halo 4)

Faction: Autobot

Function: Commander/Spy

Alt mode: Ferrari 458/ Cybertonian race car.

Weapons: Retractable twin guns (where hands are), sniper riffle and retractable small swords (same as guns there in her hands.)

Other abilities: Stealth, Speed, Agility, hand to hand combat and self awareness (In the battle field. Example, If in the middle of a fight, if the opponent had something of value that autobots were after, and they were to have someone take it from them without the bots noticing- she would, she memorizes whats there, who's she's fighting and what changes while she's there.)


Weaknesses: thin armor on the back side, heights.

Quotes from the past:
"I-i'm not sure if we should."
"Life is a gift, and I treasure it always."
" Gladiators aren't monsters, they are bots just like us! Trying to make a living!"
"I wouldn't change myself to only please others."
"Others never think of the possibility of another world, another form of life that might be out there, but my optics.. my spark can't stop but wonder, what the rest of the galaxy has in its arms besides our world.."

Quotes from the present:
"My troops come first.."
"I never back down from a challenge."
"Something on your mind?"
"If theres one thing I've learned, its to always be aware of whats going on and who's in the area at all times. Always be aware of whats going on around you."
"Just because I'm a femme doesn't mean I can't fight like a mech"

Personality: Past Amora is a optimistic femme, she does almost anything to make someone smile when it comes to friends. She was known as a shy femme towards mechs, but she was also known as the out going have a great time with other femme's. She didn't care of what others thought of her, she was herself, and wasn't ashamed to be herself with others.

In the present Amora is indeed a Commander and can be mistaken to be just a femme soldier since she looks younger than what she really is, but in the battle field, her experience level surpass those who once thought she was in there ranks. Amora was the giddy and bright type at one time, but ever since the start of this never ending war, she changed, being more serious than funny, smarter rather than the joker and a strong independent femme leader of whatever squad or army she is assigned to. She is trustworthy, time to time arrogant on purpose depending on the situation, stubborn and not afraid to speak her mind if you really get to her and just tick her off. Amora cares about every soldier that she leads, or just soldiers of the autobots. They are being just like her, and she never leaves a bot behind. Also shows very similar traits of -sarah palmer in halo 4- in the present.

Additional info- Amora's blue glowing effects fade to black when in car mode (but as a cybertron race car the blue lines stay), and when she is in a stealth/ninja mission she turns the lights off, and locks them so they won't "turn on" during a mission. So she can turn them off on command whenever she wants, but she likes the blue glowing details in her armor.

Amora was a seeker at one time in her sparkling (child) hood, and loved to fly around for hours, her parents have always warned her about over heating with all the flying she did, but she never took it to mind and just brushed it off. But one morning when she was messing around with her father, who was trying to catch her, she went to fast for to long causing her engines to over heat themselves- they went to lock down mode, to do an emergency cooling after over heating to prevent the bot from burning up- but the problem was, she was still air born- she fell at least 60 stories (transformer room sizes) and almost died- until a fellow flyer who happened to be around saw her and quickly came to her rescue. Ever since then the femme has been afraid of falling-- not so much the heights but just the thought of falling when your that high up. So she upgraded to be a car instead and stay on the ground, but she's always thought of reverting back to original design from time to time. A reason why she looks thinner and slimmer than most cybertronian cars for her tall height. (she got the height from her father and the seeker built from her mother.)

Story: (almost done)

Relationships: Amora has many friends, Autobots and humans and different races across the galaxy. After the war of her home planet, Amora had lost many loved ones during such dire and dark times, having matured from the bloody war she takes her life more seriously and no longer accepts her once weak self.

Optimus- Knowing the guy before entitled prime, they worked together in Iacon as clerks. Tho it was only a part time job to get school credit in college, Her and Optimus became close friends during her working hours, becoming a brother and sister relationship, helping each other out when one had an issue. Sticking up for him when people made fun of him in anyway or pushed him around (being a nerd in our terms), Optimus returns the favors to her, now that he his a prime.

Megatron- Also knowing him during the Golden age, before he became a war lord. Meeting the mech during her high school years while her and her "friends" snuck out to the pits to watch gladiators fight, she happened to catch his optic out of pure luck after one of his fights, and some how bumped into her afterwards down below the arena, (her and her friends had snuck down there to meet some of the gladiators.)

Over time, the two kept running into each other and soon started to hang out together and eventually became the best of friends. Some would think they were couple as much as they were around each other, but they were just two friends enjoying each other's company. He would tell her his dreams of equality, his past and present events, everything, and she would do the same. Amora was the one to introduce Orion and Megatronus when megatronus had trouble in some of the political area's during his revolution.

There relationship became something more as cycles past to vorns, climbing the latter till Megatronus came to a conclusion that he loved her. But, the day he turned his back on cybertron, was the day he broke her spark and ending there relationship- what once was a soon to be mate was now like a shattered mirror which could never be put back together again and now she was his worst enemy. He lost Amora to the autobots since she did not agree of his new ways of his new dream. Letting his broken pride (of thinking she would remain with him no matter what), anger, false judgment and revenge cloud his thoughts of his true feelings, acting as tho he didn't care if she died by his hand (even tho his spark made him feel hesitant when he tried to slay her one time), but she still has faith that one day, he could change, but never knew if she would be able to finally spend the rest of her life with the only mech she ever loved and will never love no one else as much as she loved Megatronus, but trust was something he had to earn IF he ever wanted her back...that is.. if he ever changed.

Story line/rp examples:
Past-

"I wouldn't change anything about you Megatronus, I fell in love with a gladiator who loved to win, not a politician who seeks perfection."

"My world isn't some dream I keep to myself, it is a world I live in everyday, and one I would never change."

She shyly smiles up at the gladiator. "I-i'm am not one to speak so freely around mechs, but... I find you easy to talk too."


Present-

She scoffs. "Really? A friend? and OLD friend? well you got the OLD part right… but everything else? not so much…"

"I wouldn't be making such a hard glare if you weren't in the room- oh but look ….. you are.. so I'd rather get my face stuck glaring than crying for mercy to you…"

" Surrender is no friend of mine.... so don't even think about introducing us."

"Who am I? I'm the one who brought you to your knee's Con.."

"Send your precious leader this message... If he wants the weapon, he's going to have to take it with his own Servo's..."

"Ah.. the mighty war lord has blessed me with his presence..."

"One wrong move, and I'll blow a hole through your spark chamber fragger..."

(will add more later )

Mora/Character (c)-

Transfomers, Megatron, Optimus- Owners.
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Comments: 33

EverydayMercenary702 [2017-03-05 08:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Named after a famous voice actor for Mass Effect and Halo, I approve of this LoL. >XD

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DecidingNebula [2016-10-27 00:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Would you happen to be a roleplayer, this character intrigues me

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Centaur71 [2016-09-30 02:54:31 +0000 UTC]

She sounds like the right kind of Leader; if ONLY we had Leaders like her in RL...

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Tayahst [2016-02-02 12:19:25 +0000 UTC]

 hay I was wondering if you could draw my OC  for my story caz I have no talent at drawing I've tried 100 times and I still suck (the body looks so wonky well most of it does) im just good at writing and I promise to put your name down as the artist but if not I completely understand if you don't want too and I don't want lots of people asking because of me if it bugs you oh and im using my sisters account

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Stolen-Wings In reply to Tayahst [2016-02-05 22:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't take requests on the spot (or not really actually) ^^ but keep practicing, find tutorials and don't give up we all have to start somewhere

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Tayahst In reply to Stolen-Wings [2016-02-06 01:56:05 +0000 UTC]

okey dokey thanks anyway  

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theblueleader [2016-01-17 05:49:32 +0000 UTC]

wow she looks awesome I am going to try to make a OC

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Timelady-Mya [2014-12-19 13:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice job with the design.  

i gotta ask though, how did you do it? You know, come up with the design and bodies for all the transformers you drew? I wanna make my own OC but I'm making zero progress. 
An advice or tips??

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Stolen-Wings In reply to Timelady-Mya [2015-01-21 15:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey, sorry for getting to you late.

How I come up with designs? Its not really as easy most artist make it seem. Designing a character can be time consuming, and sometimes you can burn through so many looks for one character, until you are satisfied with that one look you drew up recently, but the problem is, most artists who enjoy doing concepts for characters, aren't ever really satisfied with designs, we always think it could be better, but thats just some artists, some of us could have that moment of designing where we fall in love with the look and we never want to change it-- which is a rare moment but they are great to experience XD

But back to subject, how I come up with ideas depends entirely on me and what my mood is, like if Im feeling inspired or motivated with good ideas I have from watching a movie, music videos or even from good books that just set you in some sort of creative mind set. Like for Amora, i've gone through 7-8 deigns with her and i've only shown you guys a few as I improve my drawing and better understand how robots function and keep a more realistic body build in mind, and not some super model perfect face and body.

Amora was originally inspired by Tron, hence her black frame and bio-lights, and as for facial appearance, that was inspired by a character from the movie disneys Atlantis, Helga Sinclair was my other inspiration. But yeah, designs and ideas for a story can be triggered with all sorts of things, and its not always a movie, it could be a logo you saw in a store, or maybe even some sort of artist's picture gave you idea, or a fanfiction. You really just have to keep an open mind, and not make it more complicated then what it really is, just mess around and have fun with it, don't copy ideas or duplicate stories, armor or clothes some other OC or Cannon has, try and be as original as possible with looks and story wise and most of all keep everything about the character as believable as possible, like when people read their story, or look at them, they can say. " I can actually see this happening." " I can see them in that universe" etc because the more believable your character is, and as real as they are-- you won't be the only one loving your character, but you will find people also falling in love cause they really like now real you OC is. This can also be applied for pairings too. But don't worry about being perfect, because as said, perfect is boring. They don't have to be perfect happy little guy or girl, they can be a broken person from a bad past, a crazy nut case murder, whatever your mind brews up, don't be afraid to share your ideas and to get feed back of what others think about it, feed back can help you improve, but don't let it bring you down to a down low depressed sad feeling, you do what you love and what you want, you are the only one that can come up with your ideas and your characters, and you are the only one that can really accept or kindly reject negative or positive feed back, and keep a positive attitude always.

But anyway! I hope this helps you, and that you can take some of the tips here and apply them easily or use these to give you an idea of what you can do or should do!

Have a great day

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Timelady-Mya In reply to Stolen-Wings [2015-02-07 22:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow... That's some really cool stuff. I really appreciate the fact that you replied to my question  

i shall definitely take this advice and use it 

thanks again so much!

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Kitty16022015 [2014-10-24 01:00:35 +0000 UTC]

ILOVEHER!!!
♥♡★☆☆★♡♥

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mangoonfire [2013-04-02 19:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Her alt mode is my favorite type of Ferrari ;D I'm loving her visor and the fact that they are black. Very unique design, I'd say almost gives off a "Tron Legacy" vibe.

Has the same voice as Palmer AND Female Shepherd? Oh my XD

I also like how her relationship with Megatron is so realistic. There is a good back story, and a very believable conclusion that I can actually see happen.

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Stolen-Wings In reply to mangoonfire [2013-04-03 00:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha! She was actually inspired by Tron and I guess once people saw what I did they wanted to try it out as well XD and that is my dream sports car~ Its beautiful Lol

I'm glad you find it realistic! I've been working my butt off for months to make it believable and possible for it to actually happen. Im glad to see that its paying off X3 Thanks!

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mangoonfire In reply to Stolen-Wings [2013-04-03 00:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, all that working sure did the trick! I adore how you include such detailed back stories behind each character reference piece. The realism is outstanding! People rarely take time to write out lengthy character bios, but that is obviously not the case with you XD

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Stolen-Wings In reply to mangoonfire [2013-04-03 00:18:04 +0000 UTC]

D'awww your making be blush ...


I am one who loves a great developed story and character, I'm very hard with myself when I make stories and characters, and I always ask people what they think and get opinions and also watch a TONE of movies, read books, watch T.v shows and see how there characters life is and understand how there life came to be up to the main point of that story/show/Movie. In order to have a great story or plot- you have to have a well developed character. So to me, before theres a story there's an idea and a character is born with that idea and it continues to grow as it is worked with.

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mangoonfire In reply to Stolen-Wings [2013-04-03 01:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I feel ya. When I read notes that I took on my OC Massacre from 1 1/2 + years ago I want to curl up and cry XD I've learned so much about character development since then and I was blessed to have plenty of time for development of the character both mentally and physically and it helped how my artistic and writing abilities have improved as well ( Art Example: [link] )

I too always look forward to hearing the opinions and advice of people ^^

For example ( Let the cringe fest commence! XD ) this is the bio from nearly 2 years ago [link]

And now this is the updated bio that I can say I'm rather satisfied with [link]

By chance would you mind giving me some advice on her development?

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Stolen-Wings In reply to mangoonfire [2013-04-03 18:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.. I never thought making a animal Transformer like you did here. Nice idea

And from what I read, comparing them you have changed her and developed her nicely, but development never ends, it keeps going and the more it happens the better the character gets. I don't really have tips, other than keep your mind open, when you think your done fixing and tweaking, your not. A character is always changing like people in real life. So days you'll have that idea that comes out of no where and somedays you won't, but never let your mind be satisfied. I still mess with my characters and I update them constantly, the little things count just as much as the big things.

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mangoonfire In reply to Stolen-Wings [2013-04-03 20:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I'll be honest I created her character because I was fascinated by the fact that some Transformers were able to transform into animals when I first found out about "Beast Wars". And also partially because I was ( And still am) trying to make that transition of drawing metallic geometric shapes and steering away from the organic shapes that make characters appear less robotic. I can't help myself, I love drawing curves XD

Thank you so much! It's good to know that character development is acceptable even if you had a character for years. Every time I tinker with her personality and her realism I keep thinking "Erg, maybe I should let her stay the same, or Yeep MUST fix that!"

Hey just another curious question, hope I'm not being too bothersome Do you RP your TF characters ?

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Stolen-Wings In reply to mangoonfire [2013-04-03 20:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh jeez... XD I can't remember the last time I Rp'd lol I've been so busy with my horse life, I never have time to do it anymore :,< but yes I use to when I had time.

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mangoonfire In reply to Stolen-Wings [2013-04-03 20:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Horse life huh? XD Yep, those beasties sure are loads of work! I used to ride about twice a week for an hour, for 2 years. Unfortunately my mother crushed that trend when I got bucked and she didn't want me getting any potential injuries although her father was an expert horseman and our family used to have a several thousand horse ranch.

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Stolen-Wings In reply to mangoonfire [2013-04-03 20:34:51 +0000 UTC]

WOW! What would I give to have a ranch ... sigh. X3

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mangoonfire In reply to Stolen-Wings [2013-04-03 20:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I wasn't born early enough to see it unfortunately 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

xkatiexprime [2013-04-02 18:48:07 +0000 UTC]

What a pretty lady! ^^

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Stolen-Wings In reply to xkatiexprime [2013-04-03 00:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks katie~!

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Removed123 [2013-03-02 23:33:02 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Stolen-Wings In reply to Removed123 [2013-03-03 00:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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HappyArmyWife [2012-11-20 23:11:57 +0000 UTC]

I like her, good job!

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Stolen-Wings In reply to HappyArmyWife [2012-11-20 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ETrujillo [2012-10-27 07:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she's gorgeous.

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Stolen-Wings In reply to ETrujillo [2012-10-27 14:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Evan

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whiteirislady [2012-10-26 23:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Stolen-Wings In reply to whiteirislady [2012-10-27 06:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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whiteirislady In reply to Stolen-Wings [2012-10-27 23:34:06 +0000 UTC]

YOur welcome!

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