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Published: 2011-02-22 17:54:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 828; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 11
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Description this is a redo of [link]

what do you think? better? worse?
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Comments: 15

CanineCriminal [2012-03-14 11:56:57 +0000 UTC]

you welcome

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CanineCriminal [2012-03-13 13:44:59 +0000 UTC]

omg itΒ΄s amazing!!!!!

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starwolf303 In reply to CanineCriminal [2012-03-14 00:27:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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DeviantSponge45 [2011-04-08 21:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! This could be the female version of my fursona!

LOL!

Love her, btw.

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starwolf303 In reply to DeviantSponge45 [2011-04-08 21:49:00 +0000 UTC]

this is a redo of ur request u know

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DeviantSponge45 In reply to starwolf303 [2011-04-08 21:51:51 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know! OMG! XD

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2011-02-23 03:28:51 +0000 UTC]

better but you should put the background back in it.

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starwolf303 In reply to Ever-Lasting-Spirit [2011-02-23 21:08:34 +0000 UTC]

rite i have to get on that lol but thank you

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Ever-Lasting-Spirit In reply to starwolf303 [2011-02-23 22:03:21 +0000 UTC]

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starwolf303 [2011-02-23 00:48:47 +0000 UTC]

well thank you
and the bow is not exactly pulled the whole way back thats why her wrist is bent a little and her arm is not straight
but thank you

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SimonGannon [2011-02-23 00:34:03 +0000 UTC]

I think the forms are a bit better, but I liked the look of her more the first time around, with the smaller eyes and the wider stance. In both, I think her shins could be a bit longer (she seems a bit top heavy), and I have an issue with the hand, as there should be a straight line from her shoulder to her index finger, when drawing a bow. [link] Though this depends a lot on the type of bow, I admit. As it stands, I'm not very sure about the hand's structure in this position.
However! I think there's a lot of great improvement, and I like how you've handled the feet in both. They have a lot of strong shapes to them when most people gloss feet.

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CorvusCaelum [2011-02-22 20:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Proportions on the face improved ten fold. :>

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starwolf303 In reply to CorvusCaelum [2011-02-22 20:52:22 +0000 UTC]

yay ^^ thankies

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goldietherabbit [2011-02-22 17:54:35 +0000 UTC]

better!

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starwolf303 In reply to goldietherabbit [2011-02-22 19:14:44 +0000 UTC]

yay!

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