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Rappel82 [2014-03-10 14:01:03 +0000 UTC]
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mercysoul [2013-01-23 10:56:24 +0000 UTC]
love it nice contrast
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AsuKaZone [2008-12-26 08:03:46 +0000 UTC]
it's beautiful... cool...
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shava50 [2008-05-21 15:41:52 +0000 UTC]
i really like the way the text is laid out, good work man
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walking-on-air [2008-04-21 21:42:00 +0000 UTC]
I really like the layout of this but I would either take out the swirls in the background completely or put a couple around the edges to make it a bit interesting or something else that's eye catching.
Just a thought! :3
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souljahsstory [2007-05-15 10:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Um, it doesnt feel like an orange advert sorry, its just too busy, maybe either reducing the size of the text and removing the the swirls in the background could work?
I really don't know what to suggest.
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spurs83 In reply to LondonLAD [2006-07-06 16:36:13 +0000 UTC]
hey thanx for the comment! it was intentional that it mis-aligns! dnt ask why its too long to get into!hehe
anyway thanx again
Em
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blacklightbombshell [2006-07-01 15:41:20 +0000 UTC]
I love the layout and the concept. I would have to see it in print though. The squiggles in the background distort my eye from the fantastic alignment of the text blocks. IF the squiggles weren't so prominent on the printed piece then it wouldn't be a big problem.
Just my two cents (pence) maybe that would give you another perspective on your concepts for Orange?¿
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spurs83 In reply to Syngnathidas [2006-07-01 15:31:47 +0000 UTC]
hahaha well as long as my competition approves then that is fab! who do you work for then... t-mobile, o2, vodaphone etc etc
Thanx again
Em
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Syngnathidas In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]
o2 i like your bubbles! the bubbles whisper...
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louisebrock82 [2006-07-01 12:46:36 +0000 UTC]
I love this!
I thought you said posters weren't your strong point?! hehe
Only thing I would change again other than the odd typo is maybe add some white/off white (white that's a bit on the orange side) in there, or some different shades of orange so it differentiates between the blocks of type. Reminds me of Russian constructivism and Franz Ferdinand
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spurs83 In reply to Cabbage57 [2006-07-01 15:36:33 +0000 UTC]
well a goat ay!hehehe ill see what i can do there just for you! i cant have a mouse being dragged over my work!hehehe
Thanx for the comment though
Em
xxx
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Cabbage57 In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-02 13:16:32 +0000 UTC]
I SAID LET ME KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH TITAN.........
andy
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Pinkbunnyears In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 17:17:06 +0000 UTC]
Ooh good idea, like I say it is very good though.
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pabh [2006-07-01 02:14:07 +0000 UTC]
I like the type layout, but I'm not so keen on the squiggles. I know they're from their latest campaign, but I think they detract from the clean layout of the typography and actually make it harder to read than it is.
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spurs83 In reply to pabh [2006-07-01 07:15:14 +0000 UTC]
i wonder if i decrease the thickness of the squiggles that would make a difference! ill take a look though! thanx again hun! your a real gem!
Em
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Bakoyma [2006-07-01 00:56:42 +0000 UTC]
Another fav.... sigh.... you're too good....
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spurs83 In reply to Bakoyma [2006-07-01 07:16:09 +0000 UTC]
aawww you are too kind! thank you hun! and thank you for the comment!
Em
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vampirepig [2006-06-30 22:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Your second "future" in the top right block of text is a "futrue", but this looks excellent!
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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-06-30 22:58:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanx for the comment! im always needing help with my spelling im so crap! and i call myself a designer!hehe
Thanx again
Em
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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-07-01 15:42:24 +0000 UTC]
thats ok! thank you for your compliment that is really nice of you! as for the grammer that why i post stuff on here coz there will always be someone who will pick out my typos!hehe so i thankyou once again!
Em
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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-07-01 15:42:19 +0000 UTC]
thats ok! thank you for your compliment that is really nice of you! as for the grammer that why i post stuff on here coz there will always be someone who will pick out my typos!hehe so i thankyou once again!
Em
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