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Description I have been working on some ideas for a job i am hoping to go for! basically i had to do some advertising for orange! those of you who dnt know orange they are a mobile phone company in england! not sure if they are elsewhere too!

Basically i am pretending to be working for the comapny with whom i am trying to get a job and do a fake pitch for them too orange! this is a piece of literature that is type based there are image ones to come. the type face is ariel (the most similar to orange as i could get) the colour scheme denotes the company aswell! the squigalls are following the current trend for orange advertising!

Comments always welcome!

Thanx

Em
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Comments: 45

Rappel82 [2014-03-10 14:01:03 +0000 UTC]

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Gadyuka [2013-04-10 09:02:00 +0000 UTC]

It's a nice composition but that's just not true

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mercysoul [2013-01-23 10:56:24 +0000 UTC]

love it nice contrast

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AsuKaZone [2008-12-26 08:03:46 +0000 UTC]

it's beautiful... cool...

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shava50 [2008-05-21 15:41:52 +0000 UTC]

i really like the way the text is laid out, good work man

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walking-on-air [2008-04-21 21:42:00 +0000 UTC]

I really like the layout of this but I would either take out the swirls in the background completely or put a couple around the edges to make it a bit interesting or something else that's eye catching.

Just a thought! :3

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playthis [2007-07-26 02:28:45 +0000 UTC]

great layout, easy to read and nice clean movement

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souljahsstory [2007-05-15 10:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Um, it doesnt feel like an orange advert sorry, its just too busy, maybe either reducing the size of the text and removing the the swirls in the background could work?

I really don't know what to suggest.

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Sadiya [2006-07-17 05:13:00 +0000 UTC]

im gonna add my voice to those that say your text alignment rocks!
and the squiggles are a bit distracting yes, but i noticed you said you're going to deal with them

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magedart [2006-07-11 09:57:30 +0000 UTC]

u great in typo

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spurs83 In reply to magedart [2006-07-13 11:35:21 +0000 UTC]

hey thanx for the comment! much appreciated!

Em

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LondonLAD [2006-07-06 12:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Hiya! Ditto on the spelling!...or lack of!

The Design look fantastic, the only thing tho unless it was intentional is maybe line up everything so its easier on the eye, (hard to explain in words)!?

Relly does look good tho! ) ....well done!

Ad

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spurs83 In reply to LondonLAD [2006-07-06 16:36:13 +0000 UTC]

hey thanx for the comment! it was intentional that it mis-aligns! dnt ask why its too long to get into!hehe

anyway thanx again

Em

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LondonLAD In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-12 12:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Okey dokey! )

Take care!

Ad

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Mash11 [2006-07-02 11:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Welcome back my friend

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spurs83 In reply to Mash11 [2006-07-02 16:19:32 +0000 UTC]

thanx matey! it feels good to be back!

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Mash11 In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-03 13:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. submit more work

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blacklightbombshell [2006-07-01 15:41:20 +0000 UTC]

I love the layout and the concept. I would have to see it in print though. The squiggles in the background distort my eye from the fantastic alignment of the text blocks. IF the squiggles weren't so prominent on the printed piece then it wouldn't be a big problem.

Just my two cents (pence) maybe that would give you another perspective on your concepts for Orange?¿

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spurs83 In reply to blacklightbombshell [2006-07-01 15:43:49 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yeah im going to deal with the squiggles! cheers for your 2 cents! they are greatly appreciated!

Em

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Syngnathidas [2006-07-01 13:28:00 +0000 UTC]

I love this layout, really dynamic!

(although I do work for the competition )

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spurs83 In reply to Syngnathidas [2006-07-01 15:31:47 +0000 UTC]

hahaha well as long as my competition approves then that is fab! who do you work for then... t-mobile, o2, vodaphone etc etc

Thanx again

Em

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Syngnathidas In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]

o2 i like your bubbles! the bubbles whisper...

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louisebrock82 [2006-07-01 12:46:36 +0000 UTC]

I love this!
I thought you said posters weren't your strong point?! hehe
Only thing I would change again other than the odd typo is maybe add some white/off white (white that's a bit on the orange side) in there, or some different shades of orange so it differentiates between the blocks of type. Reminds me of Russian constructivism and Franz Ferdinand

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spurs83 In reply to louisebrock82 [2006-07-01 15:33:14 +0000 UTC]

hahah cheers louise! great advice from a legend there! posters arnt my strong point! i prefer booklets etc! but i hope they like it! there is loads more to do but im feeling ok at the moment!

Thanx again for the fab comment, ill get to work on some off it!

xxx

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Cabbage57 [2006-07-01 10:01:28 +0000 UTC]

type layout s excellent really liking that. As someone said the squiggles aint working for me though. They look too much like a goat has got the hold of a mouse and went bananas on the screen. Not that you are a goat lol Try using a thinner line and instead of going crazy with the mouse and the pencil tool, why not try going at it a little more slowly with the paths tool then stroking the path. You could even use pressure sensitive and it might make the line funky! Just a thought! Again good luck with the job.

Andy

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spurs83 In reply to Cabbage57 [2006-07-01 15:36:33 +0000 UTC]

well a goat ay!hehehe ill see what i can do there just for you! i cant have a mouse being dragged over my work!hehehe
Thanx for the comment though

Em
xxx

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Cabbage57 In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-02 13:16:32 +0000 UTC]

I SAID LET ME KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH TITAN.........

andy

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Pinkbunnyears [2006-07-01 10:01:26 +0000 UTC]

It's really good, obviously you've been notified about the spelling so I won't mention that but otherwise it's really nice, as far as the squiggles go - could you vary the opacity of the squiggles? I think just a few degrees less could work well for those who find it hard to see, just suggestions though, altogether very professional looking.

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spurs83 In reply to Pinkbunnyears [2006-07-01 15:37:18 +0000 UTC]

ive already messed with teh opacity but im going to do it a little more and smooth them out too!
Thank you very muc for the comment!

Em

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Pinkbunnyears In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 17:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Ooh good idea, like I say it is very good though.

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pabh [2006-07-01 02:14:07 +0000 UTC]

I like the type layout, but I'm not so keen on the squiggles. I know they're from their latest campaign, but I think they detract from the clean layout of the typography and actually make it harder to read than it is.

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spurs83 In reply to pabh [2006-07-01 07:15:14 +0000 UTC]

i wonder if i decrease the thickness of the squiggles that would make a difference! ill take a look though! thanx again hun! your a real gem!

Em

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pabh In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 08:11:17 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Bakoyma [2006-07-01 00:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Another fav.... sigh.... you're too good....

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spurs83 In reply to Bakoyma [2006-07-01 07:16:09 +0000 UTC]

aawww you are too kind! thank you hun! and thank you for the comment!

Em

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dNlbNtl [2006-06-30 22:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Never heard of 'em..looks cool, though .
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"Music for Shoplifting" - P.O.S.

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spurs83 In reply to dNlbNtl [2006-06-30 22:59:19 +0000 UTC]

cheers mate much appreciated!

Em

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dNlbNtl In reply to spurs83 [2006-06-30 23:20:58 +0000 UTC]

That's a lot of appreciation

No problem .
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"Hunger Pains Three" - P.O.S. ft. Crescent Moon

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spurs83 In reply to dNlbNtl [2006-06-30 22:59:14 +0000 UTC]

cheers mate much appreciated!

Em

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spurs83 In reply to dNlbNtl [2006-06-30 22:59:08 +0000 UTC]

cheers mate much appreciated!

Em

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vampirepig [2006-06-30 22:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Your second "future" in the top right block of text is a "futrue", but this looks excellent!

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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-06-30 22:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for the comment! im always needing help with my spelling im so crap! and i call myself a designer!hehe

Thanx again

Em

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vampirepig In reply to spurs83 [2006-07-01 07:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Bah, the design is beeeautiful! Really eye-catching.
It was just a little typo that my grammar-nazi brain picked out, heh.

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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-07-01 15:42:24 +0000 UTC]

thats ok! thank you for your compliment that is really nice of you! as for the grammer that why i post stuff on here coz there will always be someone who will pick out my typos!hehe so i thankyou once again!

Em

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spurs83 In reply to vampirepig [2006-07-01 15:42:19 +0000 UTC]

thats ok! thank you for your compliment that is really nice of you! as for the grammer that why i post stuff on here coz there will always be someone who will pick out my typos!hehe so i thankyou once again!

Em

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