FancySpiders [2018-04-11 22:10:45 +0000 UTC]
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This is truly adorable. The expression on his face really embodies the enjoyment and love he feels with that dog and the wings were a nice touch. Made it that much more lighthearted and warming. Cuz doggos truly are angels e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>, especially Chica. Anyway. The foreshortening on his body is also well done. I can tell he's leaning forward, squatting down with his arms on his thighs and that's not always an easy thing to portray. The only things that are really off putting here is Mark's mouth. There's something about the way its drawn that makes it look like its chin and bottom jaw are pushed in. His tongue too, I'm not sure if it's adding to why his jaw looks pushed in or if it looks weird because his jaw looks pushed in. I think adding in the bottom row of teeth would have helped prevent it, like maybe you're just not giving enough room between the lip and the tongue for the gums and teeth to fit in there. And then the other thing is I think a dog's fur goes closer in on the muzzle on both sides. You have a large space under Chica's nose that is colored as though its not covered by fur, but I think the fur usually goes in far enough on both sides of the mouth to make that brown slab more of a thin line that leads down to the rest of her lips. Anyway, this is adorable and I love it despite the easily fixable flaws. Keep up the good work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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Pittoo4ever [2018-11-01 12:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Cute! 👍🏻