Newtered [2017-11-12 06:16:02 +0000 UTC]
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Hey Marie! Just gotta say, this drawing looks really cool! Your characters are very cute and I love the background. The piece itself is very strong, but if you would like to continue with this star-crossed lovers idea, I'd suggest using pose references to see how you can push it to another level. Another thing would be to look into different ways to use angles and perspective if you feel comfortable with where you're at with your art. For example, you could have your sun character be very far away from the moon and vice versa. There are probably youtube videos that discuss these topics more in depth, however. Your shading is phenomenal and your anatomy is very realistic, it makes the characters really pop out to the viewer. I hope this critic helps! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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MrHydrogenius [2017-11-11 20:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Good job.
BAWwolf [2017-11-11 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous