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SonicMan17 — You -Tentative Title-
Published: 2010-05-29 11:25:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Seeing you,
Hearing you,
Feeling you,
My best times,

Loyal to you,
Compassionate to you,
Honest to you,
Best of me,

Caring for you,
Living for you,
Longing for you,
Reasons I stay,

Your eyes,
Your smile,
Your personality,
Best of you,

Laughing,
Talking,
Joking,
Us together,

Starry night sky,
Soft green grass,
A cool breeze,
Our perfect date,

Red and white,
Roses and tulips,
Friends and family,
Our perfect wedding,

Beautiful waterfall,
Elegant trees,
Peace and prosperity,
Our perfect home,

Your eyes,
My hair,
Your brains,
Our perfect children,

Family visits,
School events,
Special time alone,
Our perfect lives,

Kissing you,
Never leaving you,
Die with you,
My perfect love.
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Comments: 2

phendran [2010-07-16 22:24:53 +0000 UTC]

The first line could work as a name.
"Seeing you" has a nice ring to it, and connects the text pretty well.
"My love" Or something like it could also work...
Great writing, moves my thoughts.

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SonicMan17 In reply to phendran [2010-07-18 04:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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