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sky665 — Jackies Story: Mookie

Published: 2013-04-10 01:06:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 852; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 4
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Description Okay guys! To give you something in the mean time while I'm working on chapter two notes for Jackie's story, (and mostly to hold ME over from not sticking to the plan of getting things organized before jumping right in again XD), I bring you a short.

A flashback short. Before Val and Derek were Val and Derek, they were.... Val and Derek: Miniature Edition.

Oh! Also, two new important things I am testing with this:
The 'Animated Panel' Circle, and page numbers.

The idea for the circle is that when its "full" the animation is done/will just keep looping so feel free to click to the next panel. And the page numbers.. is self explanatory haha. Both which I'm not sure are needed - and kind of tedious to add, but do they help?
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Comments: 13

teengirl1 [2013-09-04 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

I love the sibling squabble very cute.

 

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jim1962 [2013-04-11 05:44:51 +0000 UTC]

very cute! Looking fwd to anything you do.

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Fluna [2013-04-10 10:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Awww they are so cute ;w;

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fj203rj0f2 [2013-04-10 07:11:26 +0000 UTC]

AWWW THIS WAS REALLY CUTE ;^;

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two-cue [2013-04-10 05:37:47 +0000 UTC]

gyuuuh this was sooooo gooooooooooooooooooood ;O;

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Khadyah3 [2013-04-10 02:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhh sweet cutie babies! Especially Derek heeeeee

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DeckardCanine In reply to Khadyah3 [2013-04-10 02:17:18 +0000 UTC]

You and Mumume think he's the cuter one? Must be a girl thing.

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Khadyah3 In reply to DeckardCanine [2013-04-10 12:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Heh, maybe it is. I just have a very erratic obsession with Derek so that probably has something to do with it 6w6;

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Mumume [2013-04-10 01:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, if they are extra work for you I'd say you don't need them. I always wait for the animation to look like its looping before I move on, but I do like the little circle, its cool. I like page numbers too, because it makes me appreciate how much work you actually put into these comics, but I don't think you need either of them, really. They are a nice touch though. (51 pages is a lot though- I didn't realize how many pages you make for these things. )

As for the comic itself- I love. Little Derek is so cute! >////< I wonder what happened to their dad though? Will you tell us in later parts of the story maybe?

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sky665 In reply to Mumume [2013-04-10 01:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah you will for sure find out what happens to their dad in the story

And yess! And this one is short! Normal parts have like 80-120 panels in them.

It iss more work, but not hard work - just tedious work XD But if they do help I'd like to keep using them!

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JSRees [2013-04-10 01:13:08 +0000 UTC]

The one thing I'm rather curious about. Was the hat a means of moving thoughts so he could find Mookie?

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sky665 In reply to JSRees [2013-04-10 01:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Val explains what the hat does in part 7 - which all the hat DOES is give you a glimpse of the other persons memories!

The staff is what 'finds' things.

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JSRees In reply to sky665 [2013-04-10 05:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Ah so I wasn't far off. Thanks for the clarification!

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