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Phos· Pho·Res·Cence [fos-fuh-res-uhns] : A fluorescence that persists after the bombarding radiation has ceased. Emission of light without burning or by very slow burning without appreciable heat.Advanced Critique & Comments Please.
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The tone and colours make this a beautiful work
The Light Flares help alot too
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I would like it better if it were a littel more dark..
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Interesting coming from you! Sounds like your starting to wanna cross over to the "Dark Side"...
The definition kinda explains it... (check above)
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oooh, now I understand, ok, its pretty like that too!
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Overall I like the image. The compostion is interesting as are the shapes. There are two areas, I would experiment with changing though.
First the upper right corner vibrates a bit to my eyes and is jarring compared to the rest ogf the image. I like that texture inthe middle and lower right part of the image where it is more subtle, but the upper right pulls my eyes away from the main image.
The middle right is just a bit too washed out. I like that it is lighter than the rest of the image, but I think I would take it up just little from the the white white to a very pale grayish shade.
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Good points, all of them.
The eye does feel odd not starting in the top left for us "Westerners" (my attention was first attracted to all the Bright lights in the upper left, then moving to the right)...
Thanks for the Critique! I appreciate it.
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